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-Linnea is doomering herself deeper and deeper into the city, a part she usually doesn't end up in.
+Linnea is in the streets near Taliburn's core, intending to revisit a certain kitten that ignited compassion from her.
-All the stimulation from her Noir enhanced senses was disturbing her train of thought.
+She is stopped by a well dressed man known as Big Terry, eager to get Linnea to work for him, he doesn't show any signs of accepting her disinterest.
-It briefly crosses her mind she wants to do something, namely get something done- fix a tragedy.
+He drives her to a mediocre hotel, and leaves her alone for a while so he may chat with certain folk. Linnea meets and speaks to one of Big Terry's longstanding 'employees'. She learns most girls he pick up do not stay in the job for long, and that Big Terry is seen to be wealthy regardless how true that may be.
-Woe is her, she'll never be able to do it, typical Pessimist behavior.
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 Big Terry assigns a man for both of the two. A heavy balding fellow takes Linnea up to a hotel room on the third floor.
-She ends up coming across a couple that's fighting over a broken bottle of whine, glass littering the sidewalk.
+Linnea attempts to prod for more information regarding Big Terry and is shaken on the topic.
-Linnea tries to pick up the pieces, something she knows is not usually her style.
+It is revealed quickly the man is an extreme sadist, that finds his ecstasy from the suffering of whoever he could get a room with. Given Linnea's durability, he ups the ante by placing a loaded revolver to Linnea's head, threatening to kill her over taking it like a champ.
-The female scolds her and takes a piece of glass. Upon being set off by a verbal complaint, she attacks the man.
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-Linnea is left shocked, delaying her response.
+With a casting of Caelestum, Linnea is able to cause a permanent upset within the man's mind, omitting and reinforcing against critical parts of his brain that led him to enjoy what he was doing to the extent.
-She may be a Noir physically but she is mentally still a human.
+With the minimal amount of success, he finds himself unable to continue further, telling Linnea to leave.
 Linnea heads out, being stopped by Big Terry. She gives him back the advance pay he gave her, but he places his phone number in her care, hopeful that he could make a woman of Linnea yet.
-Stuck in a loop of her thoughts being cut off repeatedly by a situation that will move without her, she's forced to make last second choices to keep them from hurting each other.
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-Threats are made back and forth, The man could seriously hurt or kill her, and she seems to know his cousin well enough to get back at him over this scuffle.
+[Word Count Roughly 4,900~ when not including diceroll tags.]
 [6 Dicerolls are performed.]
-Linnea acts less than super as she realizes pedestrians are looking her way, and she doesn't want to display supernatural strength for her size more than she needs to.
+[1 Use of mastery alongside a sickness roll]
-Linnea needed to let the woman escape so she's not hurt further, but scare her off from trying anything with using connections against him.
+[No sickness increase.]