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2 | - | Naturally,, I've already exterminated them, but...... The issue is |
2 | + | Well hello. The way you speak is frivolous and hard to like... |
3 | - | that I have no idea which World Line it is that they came |
3 | + | Well, hello. The way you speak is frivolous and unpleasant... |
4 | - | from...... |
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5 | - | Naturally, I've already exterminated them, but...... The issue is |
5 | + | [4] |
6 | - | that I have no idea which World Line it is that they came |
6 | + | And yet, I am surprised to see that we can communicate through Japanese. |
7 | - | from..... |
7 | + | And yet, I am surprised to see that we can communicate in Japanese. |
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9 | [5] | |
10 | So you've taken the side of the pirates, then..... | |
11 | You've taken the side of the pirates, then..... | |
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13 | Such haugtiness will become your downfall. | |
14 | Such haughtiness will become your downfall. | |
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16 | [6] | |
17 | If it would allow me to save the world, then don't you think it's a cheap price to pay? | |
18 | If it allows me to save the world, then don't you think it's a cheap price to pay? | |
19 | ||
20 | Well I can't be afraid of death, you see. | |
21 | Well, I can't be afraid of death, you see. | |
22 | ||
23 | I mean, the World Line that I am protecting, will likely be on the very frontmost line facing off the Greed. | |
24 | I mean, the World Line that I am protecting will likely be the front in the battle against the Greed. | |
25 | [c] Even if this suggestion is not chosen, consider removing "very" in the original line, because it is redundant. | |
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27 | [7] | |
28 | Naturally,, I've already exterminated them, but...... The issue is that I have no idea which World Line it is that they came from...... | |
29 | Naturally, I've already exterminated them, but...... The issue is, I have no idea which World Line they came from...... | |
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31 | [11] | |
32 | On ther other hand, something that much more trivial could sometimes turn into an opportunity as well. | |
33 | On the other hand, something that much more trivial could sometimes turn into an opportunity as well. | |
34 | ||
35 | Or geting into an argument with your family and fleeing on impulse. | |
36 | Or getting into an argument with your family and fleeing on impulse. | |
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38 | [12] | |
39 | And at times like those, albeit extremely rare... | |
40 | And at times like those, though extremely rare... | |
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42 | [16] | |
43 | Not long ago, I mentioned that world branches designate different possibilities, yes? | |
44 | Not long ago, I mentioned that world branches designate different possibilities, right? | |
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46 | [17] | |
47 | Calling them the "Greed" is an apt term. | |
48 | "Greed" is an apt term for them. | |
49 | ||
50 | [22] | |
51 | It's already dead, that thing. | |
52 | That thing's already dead. | |
53 | ||
54 | A pressuring week passed, | |
55 | A heavy week passed, | |
56 | ||
57 | and we finally managed to hold a funeral for Danjou-san. | |
58 | before we finally managed to hold a funeral for Danjou-san. | |
59 | [c] Seems to flow a bit better, with a slightly different meaning. |