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| 2 | - | Naturally,, I've already exterminated them, but...... The issue is |
| 2 | + | Well hello. The way you speak is frivolous and hard to like... |
| 3 | - | that I have no idea which World Line it is that they came |
| 3 | + | Well, hello. The way you speak is frivolous and unpleasant... |
| 4 | - | from...... |
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| 5 | - | Naturally, I've already exterminated them, but...... The issue is |
| 5 | + | [4] |
| 6 | - | that I have no idea which World Line it is that they came |
| 6 | + | And yet, I am surprised to see that we can communicate through Japanese. |
| 7 | - | from..... |
| 7 | + | And yet, I am surprised to see that we can communicate in Japanese. |
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| 9 | [5] | |
| 10 | So you've taken the side of the pirates, then..... | |
| 11 | You've taken the side of the pirates, then..... | |
| 12 | ||
| 13 | Such haugtiness will become your downfall. | |
| 14 | Such haughtiness will become your downfall. | |
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| 16 | [6] | |
| 17 | If it would allow me to save the world, then don't you think it's a cheap price to pay? | |
| 18 | If it allows me to save the world, then don't you think it's a cheap price to pay? | |
| 19 | ||
| 20 | Well I can't be afraid of death, you see. | |
| 21 | Well, I can't be afraid of death, you see. | |
| 22 | ||
| 23 | I mean, the World Line that I am protecting, will likely be on the very frontmost line facing off the Greed. | |
| 24 | I mean, the World Line that I am protecting will likely be the front in the battle against the Greed. | |
| 25 | [c] Even if this suggestion is not chosen, consider removing "very" in the original line, because it is redundant. | |
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| 27 | [7] | |
| 28 | Naturally,, I've already exterminated them, but...... The issue is that I have no idea which World Line it is that they came from...... | |
| 29 | Naturally, I've already exterminated them, but...... The issue is, I have no idea which World Line they came from...... | |
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| 31 | [11] | |
| 32 | On ther other hand, something that much more trivial could sometimes turn into an opportunity as well. | |
| 33 | On the other hand, something that much more trivial could sometimes turn into an opportunity as well. | |
| 34 | ||
| 35 | Or geting into an argument with your family and fleeing on impulse. | |
| 36 | Or getting into an argument with your family and fleeing on impulse. | |
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| 38 | [12] | |
| 39 | And at times like those, albeit extremely rare... | |
| 40 | And at times like those, though extremely rare... | |
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| 42 | [16] | |
| 43 | Not long ago, I mentioned that world branches designate different possibilities, yes? | |
| 44 | Not long ago, I mentioned that world branches designate different possibilities, right? | |
| 45 | ||
| 46 | [17] | |
| 47 | Calling them the "Greed" is an apt term. | |
| 48 | "Greed" is an apt term for them. | |
| 49 | ||
| 50 | [22] | |
| 51 | It's already dead, that thing. | |
| 52 | That thing's already dead. | |
| 53 | ||
| 54 | A pressuring week passed, | |
| 55 | A heavy week passed, | |
| 56 | ||
| 57 | and we finally managed to hold a funeral for Danjou-san. | |
| 58 | before we finally managed to hold a funeral for Danjou-san. | |
| 59 | [c] Seems to flow a bit better, with a slightly different meaning. |
