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 Desu Frags 23 PR
 
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 Are you sure you don't want to chase him down?
 Are you sure you don't want to chase after him?
 
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 No matter the predicament, Harold-sama would always face them without discouragement.
 No matter the predicament, Harold-sama would always face them unflinchingly.
 
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-never had anyone who could expose his weakness.
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-never had anyone to whom he could expose his weakness.
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-*this is what it's saying, right?
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 Even for someone like me who is unfamiliar with the way of the sword,
 Even for one such as myself, who is unfamiliar with the way of the sword,
 
 [14]
 Please make time for me, this one instance.
 Please make time for me, for this moment.
 
 [15]
 and even raised my hand to you, which were all unjustified acts.
 and even raised my hand to you, all of which were unjustified acts.
 
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 Rather, are you a downright idiot—howling so loudly
 whilst apologizing in the same breath?
 
 That kindness of yours is deceptive benevolence.
 
-[sp] That kindness of yours is simply trickery manifesting from benevolence.
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-dunno the original meaning, maybe "facade" instead of trickery?
+This is no more than a terrible, nauseatingly lukewarm liaison.
 
 So go ahead and play the clown as you'd like, but don't get in my way.
-Thus, go ahead and dance around like a clown, but don't get my in way.
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-So go ahead, dance around or play the clown as you'd like, but don't get my in way.
+You're an eyesore who absolutely disgusts me...!
 
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 That kindness of yours is deceptive benevolence.