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-Linnea is in the streets near Taliburn's core, intending to revisit a certain kitten that ignited compassion from her.
+Picking up from the last Chapter, Linnea uses a phone in a public library to contact Terry, confirming he should be at the same Hotel in two hours. Arriving at the scene -early-, she is greeted by a different employee, Linnea attempts to interrogate regarding Terry, but is instantly shot down. Then asking if the female worker is made uncomfortable by the men that frequent, but the topic is quickly dismissed.
-She is stopped by a well dressed man known as Big Terry, eager to get Linnea to work for him, he doesn't show any signs of accepting her disinterest.
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-He drives her to a mediocre hotel, and leaves her alone for a while so he may chat with certain folk. Linnea meets and speaks to one of Big Terry's longstanding 'employees'. She learns most girls he pick up do not stay in the job for long, and that Big Terry is seen to be wealthy regardless how true that may be.
+Linnea waits.
 The employee leaves to go use the bathroom, leaving only a sign in presence of their absence.
-Big Terry assigns a man for both of the two. A heavy balding fellow takes Linnea up to a hotel room on the third floor.
+Linnea goes around the desk, and is able to successfully use the computer to locate transactions done on Terry's card in less than the 3 minutes before the worker returned.
-Linnea attempts to prod for more information regarding Big Terry and is shaken on the topic.
+Several names are collected from usage in the last month.
-It is revealed quickly the man is an extreme sadist, that finds his ecstasy from the suffering of whoever he could get a room with. Given Linnea's durability, he ups the ante by placing a loaded revolver to Linnea's head, threatening to kill her over taking it like a champ.
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 Linnea waits.
-With a casting of Caelestum, Linnea is able to cause a permanent upset within the man's mind, omitting and reinforcing against critical parts of his brain that led him to enjoy what he was doing to the extent.
+A fair woman named Yaliche checks out, as a man leaves around the same time as her. The name matches one from the list.
-With the minimal amount of success, he finds himself unable to continue further, telling Linnea to leave.
+Linnea attempts to head out of the Hotel, only to find that Terry was in the process of pulling in with another girl.
-Linnea heads out, being stopped by Big Terry. She gives him back the advance pay he gave her, but he places his phone number in her care, hopeful that he could make a woman of Linnea yet.
+Yaliche and Linnea bump into each other, Yaliche gawks at her, the two separate briefly as Linnea hurried inside.
 
-[Word Count Roughly 4,900~ when not including diceroll tags.]
+Terry confronts Linnea inside, and poses his intentions of needing to find her a man to spend the night with, given how hasty she was. While Terry uses the restroom himself, Linnea and Yaliche meet back up to speak on attire, appearances, names, Big Terry as a boss, and even exchanging their numbers. Yaliche was a far more comfortable person to talk to compared to the blonde from the previous chapter.
-[6 Dicerolls are performed.]
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 Yaliche leaves, commenting she needs to rest for work tonight. Terry beckons Linnea to the hotel staircase, and leads her down a flight to an Employee use area. Taking a stricter tone with Linnea, he recounts meeting Gary, the pervert from the last chapter, and hearing how broken up he was from the change in his world, how he almost took his own life over it and still might. Terry lingers on the detail of how much money is being missed out on, being Gary had so much to throw around.
 
 Linnea has a breaking point, unable and unwilling to keep posing as the vulnerable woman she is seen as. Terry provokes and hits her, but Linnea talks back and charges Caelestum. Terry, believing her words to imply she is working undercover, makes a break for it.
 
 A chase ensues up the stairs, Linnea keeps pace, but is knocked over when a man is thrown at her, and she decided to catch him instead of dodging out of the way. Despite this major setback, she gains a strong stride that lets her scale the stairs and catch up as Terry flees on the fourth floor.
 
 Overcoming the remaining obstacles, she catches up, dodging Terry's attempt to knock her over and casting a fully charged Caelestum, intent to dominate him and have him submit himself to her. With the full 3 dots of potency he becomes unable to resist her orders from this point onward. An elderly man clues to the situation but is easily dismissed by the two aligning their stories.
 
 They leave the Hotel, entering Terry's car, she has him drive her to his apartment, and is now openly expressing her dislike for his career and how he handles it. Once they get inside his home he tries everything he can to relax, drinking and smoking. Learning he is only worth around 35,000$ she has him part with 300$ to all his girls, by app or by paper, and orders him to discontinue his work in prostitution, to which he can not resist.
 
 Linnea learns of a third party group that got Terry into the gig while also railroading where he could and couldn't do his work.
 Linnea tells Terry to blame her when questioned, and to include her affiliation to Elizabeth despite his confusion.
 After leaving the apartment, Linnea receives some concerning texts from Yaliche about how bad this turn of events was, but has yet to receive a more significant lead on the details.
 
 [Linnea's name is likely known among some of Taliburn's prostitution rings, as well as her being the daughter of Elizabeth.]
 [Linnea's favored Justice of Coercion is acted through domination, marking her first small scale success in such.]
 [Word Count 8,600+]
 [13 Dicerolls are performed by Linnea.]
 [1 Use of mastery alongside a sickness roll]
 [No sickness increase.]