VOD 9 - u/Flip4coin

Disclaimer: I had sound off for the first seven or so minutes, so I wasn't able to review anything voiceline-related for that duration.

0:36 - Mercy gets hurt. Immediately heal her
0:56 - You didn't need to drop down; nobody was contesting you. Now you can't see much of your team
1:06 - Never have your back facing the enemy
2:01 - I can only assume that you're looking around for Genji because your team tells you about him. If you don't see him after a second or two, don't bother wasting any more time. Just get to cover
2:03 - You can see your Zarya getting hurt
2:27 - You could've naded yourself right after Genji's first slash to buy some time and potential anti-heal him
2:53 - It would be easier to take a second to nade her here and then pocket heal her up
2:57 - If you see Zen's Trancendence, don't Nano Visor. You saw Zen use his ultimate for a good 1-2 seconds and you still chose to Nano him
3:00 - Anti-heal the enemy Rein so that there's a use for your Soldier's Visor
3:06 - Roadhog flanks from behind. You turn around, completely exposing your back. Immediately find cover or move behind the garbage bin in front of you so that you can turn around and have vision of the payload and any enemies near it
3:30 - It would've been easier to just anti-heal Rein, since he's not using his shield
3:32 - Soldier gets hurt, but you ignore him. Also, questionable nade
3:39 - Nitpick: D.Va's flashes critical on the left
3:47 - You miss the sleep on the Roadhog. Instead of engaging him, circle around behind him where he can't see, and abuse cover near the crate and garbage bin so that he can't hurt you and you can still peek at your team to help them out
4:28 - I'd nade Zarya here in case she's bursted down. She doesn't, but it'll happen quite often in higher ranks
5:01 - Nade Zarya before you fire at her
5:12 - Back up a bit to the open area where it's safer and heal D.Va from a distance
5:26 - If you're persisting with this position, it's better to go up to the higher ground behind you where the health pack is
5:33 - No need to be on the payload at all
5:36 - Zarya starts getting hurt but you ignore her
5:43 - Nitpick: As soon as Soldier's topped off (I won't blame you for the one dart since you didn't know his HP), you should've unscoped. You did a minor tunnel vision here
5:44 - Move back, no need to expose yourself to any ultimates that might be used for the next team fight
5:49 - Seeing Soldier critical like that, I'd prepare to throw a nade over there
5:55 - With D.Va flanking to the left without max HP, you should be keeping a close watch over her
6:29 - You tunnel vision on the Pharah when your D.Va's getting hurt
6:39 - You tunnel vision on the Graviton, not sleeping Roadhog. You could've avoided this entire thing if you just Nano'd Pharah and just stayed back, letting her do her job while you watch your own position
7:04 - You see Pharah at full yet you still look at her
7:06 - You do it again, even though your Zarya's getting hurt
7:14 - As soon as you see Zarya getting hooked, you should've thrown a nade
7:17 - Questionable sleep
7:24 - Just because Genji's behind doesn't mean you should tunnel vision on him
7:32 - Nitpick: You *probably* could've slept the Roadhog if you flicked upwards immediately, but it's hard to say. It certainly would've improved your chances though
7:34 - You could've just walked up the stairs and hid behind the crates here
12:54 - I have no idea why you looked to the right
13:06 - Nitpick: Learn to glance left quickly every so often to see what's going on with your Pharah
13:12 - Bad position. Move very far back, against the wall
13:16 - As soon as you hear Soldier ulting, unscope and look for the closest place to get cover
13:56 - Use scoped shots, you're in no danger
14:01 - You should not have exposed yourself. Either wait for Zarya to move out or nade her
14:27 - Bad decision making. You should always Nano whoever is available to Nano. If you don't know where your high priority target is, just Nano a secondary instead
14:35 - Anti-heal the Graviton. Also, you had a window to Nano Pharah, but you missed it for some reason; consider spamming Q
14:55 - Instead of moving back and forth frantically, just stay further away from the payload
15:01 - If you're going to Sleep > Anti combo, do it instantly
15:05 - You should've stayed further back; your D.Va's getting hurt as well but you're tunneling her out of your vision
15:17 - You have nobody else on point, just run very far back
15:54 - Be prepared to Nano Winston
16:02 - Do it now
16:05 - Pointless nade; Pharah wasn't in any danger
16:08 - Again, Nano Winston. Also, you should've just thrown your sleep at Soldier in the rare case it might've hit
16:52 - Zarya walks past you injured and you ignore her
17:03 - You could've Nano's Winston here so he wouldn't lose this fight
17:15 - Nitpick: You can anti the enemy team here to scare them off; they're grouped up near the wall
17:17 - They have a Widow; get to cover
17:34 - Should've just slept the Rein
18:02 - Nano someone right now, anyone
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Additional Remarks:
- You often don't back off when you could, causing yourself to be at unnecessary risk. Remember the Golden Rule: Make sure you can see at least three teammates on your screen at all times.
- There are instances where you tunnel vision a little, which is attributed to the lack of being flexible. You want to "confirm" that something is working out the way you want it to, but this often wastes time overall.
- There were many opportunities to sleep or anti-heal the enemy team, but you'd pocket them for your own team. This is fine since you're only in Gold, but learn to use them in a way that disorients the enemy team.
- Never stand directly in the enemy Rein's line of sight.