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  1. Hello ********
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  3. I'm René and I will be reviewing your plot.
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  5. I will be going over the review in multiple sections, including Organics, Terrain and Structures!
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  7. Organics:
  8. - Overall your Organics look really good. You show us that you deffenitly can do trees. What I would like to see in terms of organics is a bigger tree, perhaps shaped differently compared to the others, to show that you can do multiple "styles" of trees too. Adding in a beast/humanoid organic could be really cool and compliment the structure too!
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  10. Terrain:
  11. - Your terrain is really good, however, your palette has a high contrast compared to your structure(or the other way around?). Since your structure is generally with white colours, I would use a colder colour for the terrain pattern, perhaps a mixup of Clay, Cyan Clay, Blue Clay and Light Blue Clay. I think that would compliment your structure a lot! Perhaps add some more Ice to your water sources and roughen up the edges of your water sources more. A few Cliff overhangs could be added too!
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  13. Structure:
  14. - Generally your structure looks really good, I would play around with more colour nuances though, to add in some more depth. Your windows are rather tall, and only done with one sort of stained glass. Perhaps mess around and see if you can make a pattern with more types of stained glass. Your bridge looks absolutely wonderful, and the pattern you used for pillar decorations could be used on some other bits aswell!
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  16. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me ingame!
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  18. Kind regards, and happy building
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  20. René
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