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1 | [gg] Jorgumand - 01 Timing Changes | |
2 | ||
3 | Scene Snap | |
4 | Original | |
5 | Dialogue: 0,0:03:36.62,0:03:41.53,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Come on! One, two! One, two! | |
6 | Changed | |
7 | Dialogue: 0,0:03:36.36,0:03:41.53,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Come on! One, two! One, two! | |
8 | ||
9 | Link Error | |
10 | Original | |
11 | Dialogue: 0,0:03:53.12,0:03:57.13,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}All eight of my men are already here. | |
12 | Dialogue: 0,0:03:57.13,0:03:58.99,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}You'll be number nine. | |
13 | Changed | |
14 | Dialogue: 0,0:03:53.12,0:03:57.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}All eight of my men are already here. | |
15 | Dialogue: 0,0:03:57.46,0:03:58.99,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}You'll be number nine. | |
16 | Better to have it not bleed over like that. | |
17 | ||
18 | Scene Snap | |
19 | Original | |
20 | Dialogue: 0,0:03:59.01,0:04:01.62,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}They all have a screw loose, but don't be alarmed. | |
21 | Changed | |
22 | Dialogue: 0,0:03:59.01,0:04:00.88,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}They all have a screw loose, but don't be alarmed. | |
23 | End it at the scene change cause the word said after isn't important so to say. | |
24 | ||
25 | Scene Snap | |
26 | Original | |
27 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:05.82,0:04:07.66,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}We have a bit of a problem. | |
28 | Changed | |
29 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:05.51,0:04:07.66,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}We have a bit of a problem. | |
30 | ||
31 | Scene Snap | |
32 | Original | |
33 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:25.71,0:04:26.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}He? | |
34 | Changed | |
35 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:25.36,0:04:26.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}He? | |
36 | ||
37 | Scene Snap | |
38 | Original | |
39 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:28.65,0:04:30.66,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Listen up! | |
40 | Changed | |
41 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:28.65,0:04:29.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Listen up! | |
42 | Looks stupid extending it that long. | |
43 | ||
44 | Linking Error + Scene Snap | |
45 | Original | |
46 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:36.90,0:04:38.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}This is Jonah. | |
47 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:38.69,0:04:42.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Your new recruit is a child soldier? | |
48 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:42.77,0:04:46.19,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}And he's got iron. Shit... | |
49 | Changed | |
50 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:36.58,0:04:38.29,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}This is Jonah. | |
51 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:38.29,0:04:42.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Your new recruit is a child soldier? | |
52 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:42.38,0:04:46.47,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}And he's got iron. Shit... | |
53 | Extending over a scene, not snapping to key-frames. | |
54 | ||
55 | Scene Snap | |
56 | Original | |
57 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:52.67,0:04:53.93,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Same as the last time you asked. | |
58 | Changed | |
59 | Dialogue: 0,0:04:52.35,0:04:53.93,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Same as the last time you asked. | |
60 | ||
61 | Scene Snap | |
62 | Original | |
63 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:03.14,0:05:06.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Seems they want to keep it. | |
64 | Changed | |
65 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:02.69,0:05:06.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Seems they want to keep it. | |
66 | ||
67 | Linking Error | |
68 | Original | |
69 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:24.63,0:05:31.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Miss Hekmatyar, are you aware of the repercussions this container will have on my country? | |
70 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:31.86,0:05:35.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The military can never get their hands on it. | |
71 | Changed | |
72 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:24.63,0:05:31.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Miss Hekmatyar, are you aware of the repercussions this container will have on my country? | |
73 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:31.60,0:05:35.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The military can never get their hands on it. | |
74 | ||
75 | Linking Error | |
76 | Original | |
77 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:52.27,0:05:55.33,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Before hiring you, I looked into your past. | |
78 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:55.62,0:05:58.27,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I know where you lived and where you fought. | |
79 | Changed | |
80 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:52.27,0:05:55.33,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Before hiring you, I looked into your past. | |
81 | Dialogue: 0,0:05:55.33,0:05:58.27,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I know where you lived and where you fought. | |
82 | ||
83 | Linking Error | |
84 | Original | |
85 | Dialogue: 0,0:06:30.81,0:06:35.28,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Koko is in danger! She's alone in the car with that creepy boy! | |
86 | Dialogue: 0,0:06:35.28,0:06:38.62,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}This happens every time there's a new recruit! | |
87 | Changed | |
88 | Dialogue: 0,0:06:30.81,0:06:34.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Koko is in danger! She's alone in the car with that creepy boy! | |
89 | Dialogue: 0,0:06:34.91,0:06:38.62,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}This happens every time there's a new recruit! | |
90 | Stop extending over a scene. | |
91 | ||
92 | 2 Frame Extended Bleed | |
93 | Original | |
94 | Dialogue: 0,0:07:01.14,0:07:04.98,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}"Shoot first, ask never!" | |
95 | Changed | |
96 | - | Dialogue: 0,0:07:04.86,0:07:04.98,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}"Shoot first, ask never!" |
96 | + | Dialogue: 0,0:07:01.14,0:07:04.90,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}"Shoot first, ask never!" |
97 | Cute. | |
98 | ||
99 | Scene Snap | |
100 | Original | |
101 | Dialogue: 0,0:07:06.54,0:07:08.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}He opened fire! | |
102 | Changed | |
103 | Dialogue: 0,0:07:06.28,0:07:08.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}He opened fire! | |
104 | ||
105 | Scene Snap | |
106 | Original | |
107 | Dialogue: 0,0:07:18.13,0:07:18.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah! | |
108 | Changed | |
109 | Dialogue: 0,0:07:17.79,0:07:18.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah! | |
110 | ||
111 | Scene Snap | |
112 | Original | |
113 | Dialogue: 0,0:07:46.42,0:07:51.41,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Upgrades for three squadrons that form the backbone of our country's air defense. | |
114 | Changed | |
115 | Dialogue: 0,0:07:46.19,0:07:51.41,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Upgrades for three squadrons that form the backbone of our country's air defense. | |
116 | ||
117 | Linking Error | |
118 | Original | |
119 | Dialogue: 0,0:08:39.54,0:08:41.65,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I'm doing my best. | |
120 | Dialogue: 0,0:08:41.97,0:08:45.33,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Lehm, get me closer to the van. | |
121 | Changed | |
122 | ||
123 | Extended Lead-Out | |
124 | Original | |
125 | Dialogue: 0,0:11:21.88,0:11:24.78,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}So, what would you need for that? | |
126 | Changed | |
127 | Dialogue: 0,0:11:21.88,0:11:24.34,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}So, what would you need for that? | |
128 | ||
129 | Scene Snap | |
130 | Original | |
131 | Dialogue: 0,0:14:57.14,0:15:00.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Try not to break your arm there or you'll make it worse. | |
132 | Changed | |
133 | Dialogue: 0,0:14:56.87,0:15:00.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Try not to break your arm there or you'll make it worse. | |
134 | ||
135 | Scene Snap | |
136 | Original | |
137 | Dialogue: 0,0:14:56.87,0:15:00.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Try not to break your arm there or you'll make it worse. | |
138 | Changed | |
139 | Dialogue: 0,0:14:56.87,0:15:00.12,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Try not to break your arm there or you'll make it worse. | |
140 | I hate this show so much. | |
141 | ||
142 | Scene Snap | |
143 | Original | |
144 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:09.51,0:15:11.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Aye, ma'am. | |
145 | Changed | |
146 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:09.22,0:15:11.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Aye, ma'am. | |
147 | ||
148 | Scene Snap | |
149 | Original | |
150 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:19.12,0:15:21.39,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Lehm, Hugo, Lutz and Mao: Get your weapons. | |
151 | Changed | |
152 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:18.81,0:15:21.39,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Lehm, Hugo, Lutz and Mao: Get your weapons. | |
153 | ||
154 | Scene Snap | |
155 | Original | |
156 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:22.98,0:15:26.57,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Wiley, R! Stay here and act as a relay between me and HQ. | |
157 | Changed | |
158 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:22.69,0:15:26.57,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Wiley, R! Stay here and act as a relay between me and HQ. | |
159 | ||
160 | Scene Snap | |
161 | Original | |
162 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:26.82,0:15:28.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah, with me. | |
163 | Changed | |
164 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:26.57,0:15:28.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah, with me. | |
165 | ||
166 | Scene Snap | |
167 | Original | |
168 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:28.97,0:15:30.14,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Head out. | |
169 | Changed | |
170 | Dialogue: 0,0:15:28.69,0:15:30.14,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Head out. | |
171 | ||
172 | Scene Snap | |
173 | Original | |
174 | Dialogue: 0,0:16:03.58,0:16:04.98,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't want something to happen to Koko! | |
175 | Changed | |
176 | Dialogue: 0,0:16:03.58,0:16:04.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't want something to happen to Koko! | |
177 | ||
178 | Scene Snap | |
179 | Original | |
180 | Dialogue: 0,0:16:37.49,0:16:42.23,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I've heard the rumors and the intel is trickling in now, and this is one annoying opponent. | |
181 | Changed | |
182 | Dialogue: 0,0:16:37.49,0:16:42.23,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I've heard the rumors and the intel is trickling in now, and this is one annoying opponent. | |
183 | ||
184 | Scene Snap | |
185 | Original | |
186 | Dialogue: 0,0:17:00.25,0:17:05.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah, this time you're not a soldier, but... | |
187 | Changed | |
188 | Dialogue: 0,0:16:59.95,0:17:05.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah, this time you're not a soldier, but... | |
189 | ||
190 | Scene Snap | |
191 | Original | |
192 | Dialogue: 0,0:17:42.11,0:17:45.45,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Anyway, I think I have a good idea why you're here. | |
193 | Changed | |
194 | Dialogue: 0,0:17:41.87,0:17:45.45,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Anyway, I think I have a good idea why you're here. | |
195 | ||
196 | Scene Snap | |
197 | Original | |
198 | Dialogue: 0,0:18:04.73,0:18:08.77,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}made me wonder about upgrading the Fulcrums. | |
199 | Changed | |
200 | Dialogue: 0,0:18:04.73,0:18:08.10,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}made me wonder about upgrading the Fulcrums. | |
201 | ||
202 | Scene Snap | |
203 | Original | |
204 | Dialogue: 0,0:18:18.86,0:18:20.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}What's this? | |
205 | Changed | |
206 | Dialogue: 0,0:18:18.57,0:18:20.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}What's this? | |
207 | ||
208 | Scene Snap | |
209 | Original | |
210 | Dialogue: 0,0:18:30.86,0:18:34.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't cling to human weakness like that. | |
211 | Changed | |
212 | Dialogue: 0,0:18:30.54,0:18:34.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't cling to human weakness like that. | |
213 | ||
214 | Scene Snap | |
215 | Original | |
216 | Dialogue: 0,0:18:43.80,0:18:46.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't know who talked the ranch into that, | |
217 | Changed | |
218 | Dialogue: 0,0:18:43.51,0:18:46.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't know who talked the ranch into that, | |
219 | ||
220 | Scene Snap | |
221 | Original | |
222 | Dialogue: 0,0:19:39.99,0:19:40.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Huh? | |
223 | Changed | |
224 | Dialogue: 0,0:19:39.99,0:19:40.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Huh? | |
225 | ||
226 | Linking Error | |
227 | Original | |
228 | Dialogue: 0,0:19:51.79,0:19:55.31,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We sell weapons, these iron tools of murder. | |
229 | Dialogue: 0,0:19:55.31,0:19:59.22,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Selling them is a battle much like any other. | |
230 | Changed | |
231 | Dialogue: 0,0:19:51.79,0:19:54.92,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We sell weapons, these iron tools of murder. | |
232 | Dialogue: 0,0:19:54.92,0:19:59.22,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Selling them is a battle much like any other. | |
233 | ||
234 | Scene Snap | |
235 | Original | |
236 | Dialogue: 0,0:20:19.77,0:20:22.95,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Okay. I think we're done with them. | |
237 | Changed | |
238 | Dialogue: 0,0:20:19.48,0:20:22.95,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Okay. I think we're done with them. | |
239 | ||
240 | Scene Snap | |
241 | Original | |
242 | Dialogue: 0,0:20:39.67,0:20:42.44,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The Hinds have been taken care of, Koko. | |
243 | Changed | |
244 | Dialogue: 0,0:20:39.46,0:20:42.44,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The Hinds have been taken care of, Koko. | |
245 | ||
246 | Linking Error | |
247 | Dialogue: 0,0:20:42.44,0:20:44.92,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Kroshkin's contract was signed, | |
248 | Dialogue: 0,0:20:44.92,0:20:47.89,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}but the colonel just went back on it. | |
249 | Changed | |
250 | Dialogue: 0,0:20:42.44,0:20:45.14,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Kroshkin's contract was signed, | |
251 | Dialogue: 0,0:20:45.14,0:20:47.89,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}but the colonel just went back on it. | |
252 | ||
253 | Scene Snap | |
254 | Original | |
255 | Dialogue: 0,0:21:20.70,0:21:25.73,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We might not see eye to eye, but I think I'll tag along. | |
256 | Changed | |
257 | Dialogue: 0,0:21:20.42,0:21:25.73,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We might not see eye to eye, but I think I'll tag along. |