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[gg] Jorgumand - 01 Timing Changes
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Dialogue: 0,0:03:36.62,0:03:41.53,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Come on! One, two! One, two!
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Dialogue: 0,0:03:36.36,0:03:41.53,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Come on! One, two! One, two!
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Dialogue: 0,0:03:53.12,0:03:57.13,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}All eight of my men are already here.
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Dialogue: 0,0:03:57.13,0:03:58.99,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}You'll be number nine.
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Dialogue: 0,0:03:53.12,0:03:57.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}All eight of my men are already here.
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Dialogue: 0,0:03:57.46,0:03:58.99,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}You'll be number nine.
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Better to have it not bleed over like that.
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Dialogue: 0,0:03:59.01,0:04:01.62,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}They all have a screw loose, but don't be alarmed.
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Dialogue: 0,0:03:59.01,0:04:00.88,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}They all have a screw loose, but don't be alarmed.
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End it at the scene change cause the word said after isn't important so to say.
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:05.82,0:04:07.66,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}We have a bit of a problem.
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:05.51,0:04:07.66,Default,,0000,0000,0020,,{\be1}We have a bit of a problem.
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:25.71,0:04:26.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}He?
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:25.36,0:04:26.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}He?
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:28.65,0:04:30.66,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Listen up!
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:28.65,0:04:29.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Listen up!
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Looks stupid extending it that long.
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:36.90,0:04:38.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}This is Jonah.
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:38.69,0:04:42.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Your new recruit is a child soldier?
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:42.77,0:04:46.19,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}And he's got iron. Shit...
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:36.58,0:04:38.29,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}This is Jonah.
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:38.29,0:04:42.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Your new recruit is a child soldier?
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:42.38,0:04:46.47,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}And he's got iron. Shit...
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Extending over a scene, not snapping to key-frames.
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:52.67,0:04:53.93,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Same as the last time you asked.
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Dialogue: 0,0:04:52.35,0:04:53.93,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Same as the last time you asked.
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:03.14,0:05:06.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Seems they want to keep it.
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:02.69,0:05:06.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Seems they want to keep it.
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:24.63,0:05:31.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Miss Hekmatyar, are you aware of the repercussions this container will have on my country?
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:31.86,0:05:35.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The military can never get their hands on it.
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:24.63,0:05:31.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Miss Hekmatyar, are you aware of the repercussions this container will have on my country?
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:31.60,0:05:35.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The military can never get their hands on it.
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:52.27,0:05:55.33,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Before hiring you, I looked into your past.
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:55.62,0:05:58.27,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I know where you lived and where you fought.
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:52.27,0:05:55.33,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Before hiring you, I looked into your past.
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Dialogue: 0,0:05:55.33,0:05:58.27,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I know where you lived and where you fought.
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Dialogue: 0,0:06:30.81,0:06:35.28,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Koko is in danger! She's alone in the car with that creepy boy!
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Dialogue: 0,0:06:35.28,0:06:38.62,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}This happens every time there's a new recruit!
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Dialogue: 0,0:06:30.81,0:06:34.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Koko is in danger! She's alone in the car with that creepy boy!
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Dialogue: 0,0:06:34.91,0:06:38.62,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}This happens every time there's a new recruit!
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:01.14,0:07:04.98,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}"Shoot first, ask never!"
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:04.86,0:07:04.98,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}"Shoot first, ask never!"
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:01.14,0:07:04.90,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}"Shoot first, ask never!"
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Cute.
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:06.54,0:07:08.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}He opened fire!
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:06.28,0:07:08.43,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}He opened fire!
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:18.13,0:07:18.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah!
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:17.79,0:07:18.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah!
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:46.42,0:07:51.41,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Upgrades for three squadrons that form the backbone of our country's air defense.
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Dialogue: 0,0:07:46.19,0:07:51.41,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Upgrades for three squadrons that form the backbone of our country's air defense.
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Dialogue: 0,0:08:39.54,0:08:41.65,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I'm doing my best.
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Dialogue: 0,0:08:41.97,0:08:45.33,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Lehm, get me closer to the van.
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Dialogue: 0,0:11:21.88,0:11:24.78,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}So, what would you need for that?
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Dialogue: 0,0:11:21.88,0:11:24.34,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}So, what would you need for that?
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Dialogue: 0,0:14:57.14,0:15:00.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Try not to break your arm there or you'll make it worse.
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Dialogue: 0,0:14:56.87,0:15:00.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Try not to break your arm there or you'll make it worse.
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Dialogue: 0,0:14:56.87,0:15:00.91,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Try not to break your arm there or you'll make it worse.
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Dialogue: 0,0:14:56.87,0:15:00.12,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Try not to break your arm there or you'll make it worse.
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I hate this show so much.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:09.51,0:15:11.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Aye, ma'am.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:09.22,0:15:11.38,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Aye, ma'am.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:19.12,0:15:21.39,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Lehm, Hugo, Lutz and Mao: Get your weapons.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:18.81,0:15:21.39,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Lehm, Hugo, Lutz and Mao: Get your weapons.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:22.98,0:15:26.57,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Wiley, R! Stay here and act as a relay between me and HQ.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:22.69,0:15:26.57,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Wiley, R! Stay here and act as a relay between me and HQ.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:26.82,0:15:28.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah, with me.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:26.57,0:15:28.69,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah, with me.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:28.97,0:15:30.14,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Head out.
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Dialogue: 0,0:15:28.69,0:15:30.14,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Head out.
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Dialogue: 0,0:16:03.58,0:16:04.98,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't want something to happen to Koko!
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Dialogue: 0,0:16:03.58,0:16:04.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't want something to happen to Koko!
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Dialogue: 0,0:16:37.49,0:16:42.23,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I've heard the rumors and the intel is trickling in now, and this is one annoying opponent.
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Dialogue: 0,0:16:37.49,0:16:42.23,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I've heard the rumors and the intel is trickling in now, and this is one annoying opponent.
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Dialogue: 0,0:17:00.25,0:17:05.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah, this time you're not a soldier, but...
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Dialogue: 0,0:16:59.95,0:17:05.17,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Jonah, this time you're not a soldier, but...
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Dialogue: 0,0:17:42.11,0:17:45.45,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Anyway, I think I have a good idea why you're here.
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Dialogue: 0,0:17:41.87,0:17:45.45,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Anyway, I think I have a good idea why you're here.
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Dialogue: 0,0:18:04.73,0:18:08.77,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}made me wonder about upgrading the Fulcrums.
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Dialogue: 0,0:18:04.73,0:18:08.10,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}made me wonder about upgrading the Fulcrums.
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Dialogue: 0,0:18:18.86,0:18:20.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}What's this?
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Dialogue: 0,0:18:18.57,0:18:20.46,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}What's this?
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Dialogue: 0,0:18:30.86,0:18:34.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't cling to human weakness like that.
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Dialogue: 0,0:18:30.54,0:18:34.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't cling to human weakness like that.
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Dialogue: 0,0:18:43.80,0:18:46.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't know who talked the ranch into that,
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Dialogue: 0,0:18:43.51,0:18:46.58,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}I don't know who talked the ranch into that,
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Dialogue: 0,0:19:39.99,0:19:40.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Huh?
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Dialogue: 0,0:19:39.99,0:19:40.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Huh?
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Dialogue: 0,0:19:51.79,0:19:55.31,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We sell weapons, these iron tools of murder.
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Dialogue: 0,0:19:55.31,0:19:59.22,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Selling them is a battle much like any other.
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Dialogue: 0,0:19:51.79,0:19:54.92,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We sell weapons, these iron tools of murder.
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Dialogue: 0,0:19:54.92,0:19:59.22,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Selling them is a battle much like any other.
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Dialogue: 0,0:20:19.77,0:20:22.95,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Okay. I think we're done with them.
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Dialogue: 0,0:20:19.48,0:20:22.95,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Okay. I think we're done with them.
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Dialogue: 0,0:20:39.67,0:20:42.44,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The Hinds have been taken care of, Koko.
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Dialogue: 0,0:20:39.46,0:20:42.44,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}The Hinds have been taken care of, Koko.
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Dialogue: 0,0:20:42.44,0:20:44.92,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Kroshkin's contract was signed,
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Dialogue: 0,0:20:44.92,0:20:47.89,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}but the colonel just went back on it.
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Dialogue: 0,0:20:42.44,0:20:45.14,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}Kroshkin's contract was signed,
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Dialogue: 0,0:20:45.14,0:20:47.89,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}but the colonel just went back on it.
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Dialogue: 0,0:21:20.70,0:21:25.73,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We might not see eye to eye, but I think I'll tag along.
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Dialogue: 0,0:21:20.42,0:21:25.73,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,{\be1}We might not see eye to eye, but I think I'll tag along.