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 	【Yari no Yuusha no Yarinaoshi】
 
 	  『Chapter 6 / 415 - Pitfall』
 	=== Loop 4 - Schild Welt Arc ===
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 TLNOTE:
  Reminder #1, pure-fumi's word selection is gentle and very considerate. Imagine kind male kindergarten teacher, you got pure-fumi. It apply to previous loop.
  Reminder #2, Motoyasu is insane. Sometimes he use "watashi", "jibun", refer himself in 3rd person like Firo, use noble and gentleman word, next time swearing curse, etc.
  No matter how insane Motoyasu is, he only speak truth and he never lie in every loop. If he speak bizarre thing, expect Naofumi really done that, he make it sounds horrible (without malice), mistaken the situation, or everything.
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 Editors note:
 
- First thing I should do is arrange thing that should be done.
+original translator SILVERTONGUE00  (http://pastebin.com/yt32Qvm5)
 
 edited only for better grammar with no consideration to actual japanese source (since I don't understand japanese)
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  I'm thinking.
  First thing I should do is arrange things which should be done.
 
- Dear father's voice return me to reality.
+
  I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see。 I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see。 I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see。 I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see I want to see。
-"You keep spacing out and it bother me. ……Look, everyone already left." (Naofumi)
+
 "Excuse me, are you okay?" (Naofumi)
 "Yes? What?" (Motoyasu)
 
- He walk behind me when we go to throne.
+ Dear father's voice returns me to reality.
 
- First loop happened when one of Four Divine Heroes died, me.
+"You keep spacing out and it bothers me. ……Look, everyone already left." (Naofumi)
 "Thank you. We should go as well." (Motoyasu)
 "Yep." (Naofumi)
- When I save dear father from rape accusation, I really think he can live his life to the fullest and let him go to Schild Welt.
+
  He walks behind me when we go to throne.
- However, loop happened before I can be her master.
+
- The cause of that loop because he died in his journey to Schild Welt.
+ First loop happened when one of the Four Divine Heroes died, me.
  Then I want to meet Firo-tan again.
 
- Even if I become her master, it'll be meaningless if time keep looping.
+ When I saved dear father from rape accusation, I really thought he could live his life to the fullest and let him go to Schild Welt.
  Because my goal is to become Firo-tan's master.
  However, loop happened before I could be her master.
  The loop happened because he died during his journey to Schild Welt.
 
- Dear father pokes me in with his elbow.
+
- I didn't know what happened because I immersed in my deep thought.
+ Even if I become her master, it'll be meaningless if time keeps looping.
  What should I do?
 
 "Hey……" (Naofumi)
 
  Dear father pokes me with his elbow.
  I didn't know what happened because I was immersed in my deep thought.
 
 "Eh? Something wrong?" (Motoyasu)
 "Your turn, self introduction." (Naofumi)
 "My name Motoyasu Kitamura, age――" (Motoyasu)
 
  Same conversation.
  'It' will happen once again.
  ……when I say 'it', I mean Trash will feign forgetfulness and didn't mention dear father's name.
 
 "DON'T FORGET DEAR FATHER'S NAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!" (Motoyasu)
 "Wha!?" (Trash)
 
  Dear father startled at my sudden yelling.
 
- They will frame him again if he stay here.
+
 
  I will explain it later.
 
 "Come with me dear father. We should leave this place right now." (Motoyasu)
 
  They will frame him again if he stays here.
  Me, this Motoyasu don't want to see his suffering face anymore.
 
 "Dear father you said, you mean me?" (Naofumi)
 "That's  right." (Motoyasu)
- Seems like Ren and Itsuki will never believe in me no matter what I say.
+
- Both of you should aware that VRMMO and ESP doesn't make any sense to me and stop thinking that I spit bullshit.
+
 "Eh!?" (Itsuki)
-"From future? That's unbelievable" (Naofumi)
+
-"Let me proof it. This country, Melromarc hate you the Shield Hero and those people are conspiring to persecute you! If you stay here they will frame you and…… you will experience very painful thing." (Motoyasu)
+
  Ren and Itsuki mutter something in exasperated way.
- I convince him desperately.
+ Seems like Ren and Itsuki will never believe me no matter what I say.
- History will repeat if he stay here.
+ Both of you should be aware that VRMMO and ESP doesn't make any sense to me and stop thinking that I spit bullshit.
 
 "From the future? That's unbelievable" (Naofumi)
 "Let me proof it. This country, Melromarc hates you the Shield Hero and those people are conspiring to persecute you! If you stay here they will frame you and…… you will experience very painful things." (Motoyasu)
 
  I try to convince him desperately.
  History will repeat if he stays here.
  He should never experience that cruel thing again.
 
- Dear father move his gaze to Trash and ask him.
+
- Trash regain his calm, make a friendly face and reply calmly.
+
  I change my spear to Dragon Clock's Extension.
-"What should I say…… that is unthinkable. Our country never discriminating heroes and always treat heroes as special existence. Spear Hero-dono, please calm down. Your memory is in disarray because summoning aftereffect." (Trash)
+
 "Please tell me. ……Is that true you plan to frame me?" (Naofumi)
-"Maybe that's what happen to him." (Itsuki)
+
  Dear father moves his gaze to Trash and ask him.
  Trash regains his calm, makes a friendly face and replys calmly.
 
 "What should I say…… that is unthinkable. Our country never is discriminating heroes and always treats heroes as special existence. Spear Hero-dono, please calm down. Your memory is in disarray because of the summoning aftereffect." (Trash)
 "……i see." (Ren)
-"Hmm…… We shall talk about this again after Spear Hero regain his calm." (Trash)
+"Maybe that's what happened to him." (Itsuki)
 "Motoyasu, seems like you're mistaken." (Naofumi)
 
  Dear father, of all people, did not believe in me.
 
 "I'm not lying." (Motoyasu)
 "Hmm…… We shall talk about this again after Spear Hero regains his calm." (Trash)
-"For what reason you bring us here……" (Itsuki)
+
-"He bring us to this place to explain everything." (Naofumi)
+
  Fortunately, all heroes still not believe in him completely.
  Think logically, even between 4 heroes here we don't know each other's true character because we just met. Except me.
-"First, Ren-kun came from japan where VRMMO exist. Itsuki-kun…… I remember! You summoned from japan where ESP exist." (Motoyasu)
+
 
 "For what reason did you bring us here……" (Itsuki)
 "He took us to this place to explain everything." (Naofumi)
 "I will explain everything to you." (Motoyasu)
-"I don't know. Ren-kun and Itsuki-kun's japan quite unique, probably normal japan like mine." (Motoyasu)
+
 "First, Ren-kun came from japan where VRMMO exist. Itsuki-kun…… I remember! You are summoned from japan where ESP exist." (Motoyasu)
 "My world?" (Naofumi)
- Ren make an sigh and exasperated expression.
+
  Huh? Now he ask about it, what is dear father's world distinctive characteristic?
-"Hee~, Ren, is that VRMMO really exist in your place?" (Naofumi)
+
-"Now you asking obvious thing. There's no need to explain general knowledge like that." (Ren)
+"I don't know. Ren-kun and Itsuki-kun's japan is quite unique, probably a normal japan like mine." (Motoyasu)
 
  At least his world isn't much different from my world.
  Ren makes an sigh and exasperated expression.
- Dear father and itsuki show their disbelief at Ren's word.
+
- First time I heard that I made same expression you know.
+"Hee~, Ren, is that VRMMO really existing in your place?" (Naofumi)
 "Now you ask obvious things. There's no need to explain general knowledge like that." (Ren)
-"No way that thing exist!"(Naofumi)
+
-"Agree, no such thing like that." (Itsuki)
+
 
  Dear father and Itsuki show their disbelief at Ren's word.
  First time I heard that I made the same expression you know.
 
 "No way that thing exists!"(Naofumi)
 "I Agree, no such thing like that." (Itsuki)
 "T-then Itsuki, your world's ESP is?" (Naofumi)
 "Do you mean extra-ability? Some people can use it." (Itsuki)
-"Hmmm…… Motoyasu's word is credible to a certain extent." (Naofumi)
+
 "No way!" (Ren)
-"Yes. Your comrade will accuse you raping her after take everything you have while you sleep." (Motoyasu)
+
 
  Trash and his aide intervene us.
 
- His face become pale and look at Trash.
+"Hmmm…… Motoyasu's word is credible to a certain extent." (Naofumi) (editors note: Ren?)
 "About I'm being framed?" (Naofumi)
 "Yes. Your comrade will accuse you off raping her after taking everything you have while you sleep." (Motoyasu)
 "……seriously?" (Naofumi)
 
- This never happen before.
+
  His face becomes pale and look at Trash.
 
 "Buー!" (Red Pig)
 
 　Suddenly…… A well dressed Red Pig came out from behind the throne.
  This never happened before.
- Dear father bow his head and show his gratitude.
+
 "Bubububuー, bubu? Bububububu." (Red Pig)
 "I-I see……" (Melromarc's Minister)
-"She is the one who frame you!" (Motoyasu)
+
 "Bububububububu." (Red Pig)
- When I point my finger to Red Pig she makes teary eyes and hold her hand on chest while bark something incomprehensible.
+
  Dear father bows his head and shows his gratitude.
  Red Pig…… There's no doubt, it's her.
 
 "She is the one who frames you!" (Motoyasu)
 
  When I point my finger to Red Pig she makes teary eyes and hold her hand on chest while barking something incomprehensible.
 
 "Say what you want but I don't understand anything you said." (Motoyasu)
 "Eh? Motoyasu, you don't understand her word?" (Naofumi)
 "I only hear pig barking over there, dear father. Please tell me what that pig said." (Motoyasu)
 "Pig…… For now, could you stop calling me dear father? Ehem, she said: 'It seems like Spear Hero-sama possess precognition ability. To prevent that future, our country will use everything we have to backup Shield Hero-sama'" (Naofumi)
 
-"What did that pig said?" (Motoyasu)
+
  I don't even want to think about that pig!
- I put my power in the spear and ready for fight that might start any time.
+
 "Bubububububu" (Red Pig)
- Heroes other than me still level 1. If I fight here they will die.
+
 "Maybe that's for the best." (Naofumi)
-"To prevent me being persecuted, they will send me to Schild Welt where Shield Hero hold in high regard." (Naofumi)
+"What did that pig say?" (Motoyasu)
 
  I put my power in the spear and am ready for a fight that might start any time.
  However…… This situation is very disadvantageous.
  The Heroes other than me are still level 1. If I fight here they will die.
 
-"ESP exist in Itsuki's world. Now I understand…… Motoyasu is one of those esper." (Naofumi)
+"To prevent me being persecuted, they will send me to Schild Welt where the Shield Hero is hold in high regard." (Naofumi)
-"Perhaps his ability is future calculation. Many unstable person have this ability. Most time it hit the mark, but there's time where it miss the mark." (Itsuki)
+
  Hemm…… Their attitude completely changed.
  What's with this sudden change of mind?
 
 "She is a good princess. Compared to her, Motoyasu-san should calm down and learn to be an adult. I believe you have precognition ability but it's accuracy is very bad." (Itsuki)
 "ESP exists in Itsuki's world. Now I understand…… Motoyasu is one of those esper." (Naofumi)
 "Perhaps his ability is future calculation. Many unstable persons have this ability. Most time it hits the mark, but there's time where it is wrong." (Itsuki)
- Urgh…… Because he ask me I will lower my spear.
+
- I keep my guard and put down my spear.
+
 
 "I'm not lying!" (Motoyasu)
-"Even if you said that…… I will leave this country soon." (Naofumi)
+
 
  Urgh…… Because he asks me I will lower my spear.
  I keep my guard though and put down my spear.
 
 "Anyway, first thing we should do is familiarize ourselves to this world." (Ren)
 "Even if you say that…… I will leave this country soon." (Naofumi)
 
  Dear father looks exhausted.
 
-"What's wrong with all of you, don't you notice that when you summoned to this world?" (Ren)
+
 
- Ren make prideful face and begin his explanation.
+
  Apparently she barking about status magic.
 
 "Excuse me, what should I do to see that?" (Naofumi)
 "What's wrong with all of you, didn't you notice that when you summoned to this world?" (Ren)
- I ignore Ren's dumbfounded expression, then dear father and Itsuki checking their status.
+
  Ren makes a prideful face and begins his explanation.
-"Level 1…… This is make me anxious." (Naofumi)
+
 "Don't you see some kind of icon in the corner your field of vision? Please concentrate on that." (Motoyasu)
 
  I interrupt him and explain it before he do.
  I ignore Ren's dumbfounded expression, then dear father and Itsuki are checking their status.
- Speak human's word!
+
 "Level 1…… This is makes me anxious." (Naofumi)
 "But hey, what is this?" (Ren)
-"So then, what should we do now? Our current situation seem rather troubling." (Naofumi)
+
 
  This Red Pig! I can't understand what are you saying!
-"Yes. summoned hero's legendary weapon have different method of reinforcement. By doing so they can become very powerful." (Melromarc's Minister)
+ Speak human words!
 
- Apparently…… This time is about reinforcement method.
+
- However, there is a secret in reinforcement method.
+"So then, what should we do now? Our current situation seems rather troubling." (Naofumi)
 "Bububububububububububu." (Red Pig)
 "Reinforcing? Does that mean our starting weapon isn't strong enough?" (Ren)
 "Yes. summoned hero's legendary weapons have different methods of reinforcement. By doing so they can become very powerful." (Melromarc's Minister)
 
- Now's the time! This is main subject, if I speak here I can gain his trust!
+ Apparently…… This time it's about reinforcement method.
- Itsuki's crap ESP talk made them believe me I have low accuracy precognition and that's very troublesome.
+ However, there is a secret in reinforcing.
  It can only show its effect if they trust in me, I will only teach it to dear father.
-"Unfortunately, legendary weapon wielder can't equip another weapon." (Motoyasu)
+
-"Geh!? Are you sure? But if Motoyasu say soo……" (Naofumi)
+
-"Yes, so…… Dear father should rely on comrade." (Motoyasu)
+
  Now's the time! This is the main subject, if I speak here I can gain his trust!
  Itsuki's crap ESP talk made them believe I had low accuracy precognition and that's very troublesome.
 
-"Legendary weapons will reject each another and interfering with the growth. But we can share the material for unlocking the weapon." (Motoyasu)
+"Unfortunately, legendary weapon wielders can't equip another weapon." (Motoyasu)
-"That's quite inconvenient…… But if Motoyasu say sooー……" (Naofumi)
+"Geh!? Are you sure? But if Motoyasu says soo……" (Naofumi)
-"You have it hard. The only thing he do is denying others…… Is he really okay?" (Itsuki)
+"Yes, so…… Dear father should rely on comrades." (Motoyasu)
 "It means that we will go to together as a party?" (Naofumi)
 "We can't do that." (Motoyasu)
 "Eh?" (Naofumi)
- Then, dear father throw keep asking Red Pig for confirmation whenever I explain something.
+"Legendary weapons will reject each other and interfer with the growth. But we can share the material for unlocking the weapon." (Motoyasu)
- I got a feeling that I haven't earn his trust yet.
+"That's quite inconvenient…… But if Motoyasu says sooー……" (Naofumi)
- At this rate, it will dangerous for me. I got this instinct after long time I spend with philorial-sama running in the wild.
+"You have it hard. The only thing he does is denying others…… Is he really okay?" (Itsuki)
 
-"It seems you say the truth. Which mean, when it comes to find comrade I should do it in Schild Welt……" (Naofumi)
+
-"This country is dangerous in my standpoint. That is good decision." (Motoyasu)
+
  Then, dear father keeps asking Red Pig for confirmation whenever I explain something.
  I got a feeling that I haven't earned his trust yet.
  At this rate, it will be dangerous for me. I got this instinct after the long time I spent with philorial-sama running in the wild.
 
- Dear father is getting embarassed whenever Red Pig approach him so he start talking to me.
+"It seems you say the truth. Which mean, when it comes to find comrades I should do it in Schild Welt……" (Naofumi)
 "This country is dangerous from my standpoint. That is a good decision." (Motoyasu)
-"Even at this time, they were preparing wagon for tomorrow's trip to Schild Welt. They said they want us to take a rest for now." (Naofumi)
+
-"And it seems they're in the middle arrangement for our comrade as well."
+
 "Yes?" (Motoyasu)
 
  Dear father is getting embarassed whenever Red Pig approach him so he starts talking to me.
- Just in case something happen…… I won't hesitate to kill everyone who impede me.
+
 "Even at this time, they were preparing a wagon for tomorrow's trip to Schild Welt. They said they want us to take a rest for now." (Naofumi)
 "And it seems they're in the middle  of arrangements for our comrades as well."
 "Urgh……"
 
- What? Isn't they always give us same room……?
+
  Just in case something happens…… I won't hesitate to kill everyone who impede me.
 
 "Okay, I'll do that." (Motoyasu)
-"Wait, for mercy's sake please don't follow me, please? Somehow, the thought you attacked me scaring me……" (Naofumi)
+
 
- Dear father make a frightened face that is clear as a sunny day.
+ What? Hadn't they always give us same room……?
  They must be planning something if they separate our room.
 
 "I will never leave dear father's side." (Motoyasu)
 "Wait, for mercy's sake please don't follow me, please? Somehow, the thought of you attacking me is scaring me……" (Naofumi)
 
  Dear father makes a frightened face that is as clear as a sunny day.
  Did I say something strange?
  Maybe that, about over-familiar he said in previous loop.
- It'll be okay if I rush to him if something happen.
+
  This is not about trust or distrust.
 
 "I will hear your story later, okay?" (Naofumi)
 
  ……if that is his order, it can't be helped.
  It'll be okay if I rush to him if something happens.
 
 "I understand. Best compromise I can make is my room is right beside yours." (Motoyasu)
 "U-understood. We will prepare it." (Trash)
 
- Dear father have a lot of thing to do if he wants to getting stronger, teaching him over and over is beyond my wildest dream.
+
  The sun set…… To make sure I can rush over when something happened I keep mye ears open from inside my room. Soldiers came when nights come close.
 
 "Spear Hero-sama, your dinner." (Soldier)
-"Another heroes already went to dinner. We really hope Spear Hero not making another people waiting." (Soldier)
+
  Yeah! Now's the time to talk to dear father.
  Dear father has a lot of things to do if he wants to get stronger, teaching him over and over is beyond my wildest dreams.
  But I must save his life first.
  Few soldiers patiently wait for me to open the door.
 
 "The other heroes already went to dinner. We really hope Spear Hero will not make other people waiting." (Soldier)
-"That's not where we prepare your dinner. Please come with us." (Soldier)
+
 
  I hurriedly run toward the dining room.
 
 "Ah! Please wait!" (Soldier)
 "Anything else?" (Motoyasu)
 "That's not where we prepared your dinner. Please come with us." (Soldier)
- Sometimes I played in this castle before the loop happened and I quite familiar with this castle's interior.
+
  Oh my? They changed the dining room too?
  I stop my feet and turn around.
 
 "Show me the way." (Motoyasu)
 
- Bah…… Their attitude very annoying.
+ Sometimes I played in this castle before the loop happened and I'm quite familiar with this castle's interior.
- The soldiers take me to castle hall. Man, now we're in front of castle gate.
+
 
 "This way." (Soldier)
 
  The soldiers didn't say anything after that.
  Bah…… Their attitude is very annoying.
- Hm? I feel something feel off and instinctively readied my spear right away, I feel my body floating.
+ The soldiers take me to castle hall. Man, now we're in front of the castle gate.
- When I notice floor below me is now a hole, I fell.
+
 "Please wait here for a while." (Soldier)
 "Where's dear father?" (Motoyasu)
 "*inhale*……" (Soldier)
 
  Hm? Something feels off and I instinctively ready my spear right away, I feel my body floating.
  Then I notice the floor below me is now a hole, I fell.