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 Page 1:
 1-0 (left side caption) Yumeko feels cheerful, as opposed to Ryou who's...
 1-1 Hey, hey, hey!
         I may show up on Old Whistle!
-1-2 If I win the next audition, I'll be seriously considered!!
+1-2 If I win this next audition, I'll seriously be considered!!
 1-3 I can't believe it! It's like a dream!
 1-4 I'm sure even Big Sis would be pleased. (Not sure who his "Big Sis" is.)
 # It's not written, but it'd have to be Azusa, wouldn't it?
-1-5 Wait, are you not listening!?
+1-5 Wait, aren't you listening!?
-1-6 How come you are so down, you should also be rejoicing!
+1-6 How come you're so down, you should be celebrating too!
 
 Page 2:
 2-A STAGE 12: WORLD'S END GARDEN (Part 2)
 (the rest of the page is announcing the release of the tankoubons of the DS comics)
 
 Pages 3:
 3-1 Wha-!?
-        You're taking on Chihaya Kirasagi!?
+        You're taking on Chihaya Kisaragi!?
 3-2 Are you stupid?
-3-3 It's obvious you stand no chance at beating her!
+3-3 It's obvious you have no chance of beating her!
-3-4 Isn't it an unwritten rule that you should never go against someone you cannot possibly beat?
+3-4 Isn't it an unwritten rule that you should never go against someone you can't possibly beat?
 3-5 (outside) It's stupid...
 3-6 However...
 3-7 Even if there's no chance of winning, I can't just run away.
 3-8 I've made up my mind
         And this is the path I choose.
-3-9 That result is going to brand you either way, but I guess there's nothing that can be done about it.
+3-9 Whatever the result, it's gonna give you a rep, but I guess there's nothing that can be done about it.
-3-10 Still, if I picked a fight I'd pick one I can actually win.
+3-10 Still, if I picked a fight, I'd pick one I could actually win.
-3-11 I was not picking a fight
+3-11 I wasn't picking a fight
 
 Page 4:
 4-1 Very well, use these.
 4-2 What are these?
 4-3 My newest spice tablets from hell!
-        So spicy even maniacs of extremely spicy food will beg for mercy. Let her taste it and you'll easily overtake her. It's my most wicked masterpiece!
+        So fiery even people who love extremely spicy food will beg for mercy. Have her taste one and you'll easily overtake her. It's my most wicked masterpiece!
-4-4 If you use these even Chihaya Kirisagi will be knocked out in one blow
+4-4 If you use these, even Chihaya Kisaragi would be knocked out in one blow
 4-5 No way!!
-4-6 That should never be used! Chihaya-san makes everyone happy with her songs, she's a wonderful person!
+4-6 This should never be used! Chihaya-san is a wonderful person, she makes everyone happy with her songs!
-	How can you think so low of somebody like her, you devil! You are a demon!!
+	How could you stoop so low with someone like her, you devil! You are a demon!!
-4-7 (outside) Yumeko-chan, you're the one who should eat them!!
+4-7 (outside) Yumeko-chan, you should eat them instead!!
 4-8 Wha!? She's your opponent, ain't she? You want to win, don't you!?
-4-9 Even she's my opponent she's not my enemy! I want to win but this is out of the question!!
+4-9 Even though she's my opponent, she's not my enemy! I want to win but this is out of the question!!
 4-10 Ah
-4-11 What is this!? Ouch! My eyes, they sting!
+4-11 What's this!? Ouch! My eyes, they sting!
 4-12 (white moonrunes) Make it stop!!
 
 Page 5:
-5-1 Damnit... If you can't win by your own merits and don't want to cheat...
+5-1 Damnit... If you can't win on your own merits and don't want to cheat...
-        What do you intend to do from now on?
+        What do you intend to do now?
 5-2 We won't be able to go back to the family restaurant
 5-3 If sabotaging your rivals is out of the question...
 5-4 Hmmm...
-5-5 You'd have to increase your own ability, but how...
+5-5 You'd have to improve your abilities, but how...
-5-6 Increasing my own power... huh?
+5-6 Increase my power... huh?
 5-7 Maybe new lessons... a new costume...
 5-8 Takeda-san's composing skills are top-notch...
-5-9 I guess under these circumstances nothing good can come out of it
+5-9 I guess under these circumstances, nothing good would result
-5-10 Please give up instead of becoming a martyr
+5-10 So please give up instead of becoming a martyr.
 5-11 Thank you so much, Yumeko-chan!! I think I can do it!
 5-12 Huh?
 
 Page 6:
 6-1 You want me to compose for you?
 6-2 Yes, definitely. If you would, please.
-6-3 ...Writing a song for you
+6-3 ...Write a song for you
 6-4 I could do it
         but
-6-5 You intend to use this in your audition against Kirasagi... isn't that right?
+6-5 You intend to use this in your audition against Kisaragi... isn't that right?
 6-6 ... That's right
 
 Page 7:
-7-1 Before that, tell me
+7-1 Before I do that, tell me
-7-2 What do you think of Kirasagi-kun?
+7-2 What do you think of Kisaragi-kun?
 7-3 She's someone who I admire with all my heart...
 7-4 Chihaya-san told me that "Songs can change the world"
-        Not even words hold that much power. Neither do firearms.
+        Not even words hold that much power. Nor do firearms.
-7-5 She's someone who holds such a belief
+7-5 Someone who holds that kind of belief
         is an amazing person.
 7-6 Has Ryou been blinded by her...?
-7-7 You want to believe in yourself like Kirasagi-kun does in herself?
+7-7 You want to believe in yourself like Kisaragi-kun does in herself?
 7-8 Yes
 
 Page 8:
 8-1 That's what I was thinking.
-8-2 Chihaya-san completely outshines me in every sense
+8-2 Chihaya-san completely surpasses me in every way
-8-3 Being together, I wanted to catch up to her even if it was a little. That was all I could think about...
+8-3 But when we spent time together, I wanted to catch up to her even just a little. That was all I could think about...
-8-4 However, I cannout be someone other than myself.
+8-4 However, I can't be someone other than myself.
-        The way I am now I cannot beat her by my own merits alone...
+        The way I am right now, I can't beat her with my abilities...
 
 Page 9:
-9-1 But that's exactly why I do not wish to give up.
+9-1 But that's exactly why I don't wish to give up.
-9-2 I don't to become an idol who'll never be able to take on Chihaya-san
+9-2 I don't want to become an idol who'll never be able to take on Chihaya-san
-        I don't want it to end in it just being wishful thinking...
+        I don't want it to end in just being wishful thinking...
 9-3 I want to beat Chihaya-san!!
 
 Page 10:
-10-1 And that's why you are asking me to compose for you.
+10-1 And that's why you're asking me to compose a song for you.
-10-2 It may be underhanded of me to think of this
+10-2 It may be underhanded of me to come up with this
 10-3 But
-        No matter what, I cannot stand the thought of losing like this
+        No matter what, I can't stand the thought of losing like this
 10-4 Underhanded...
 10-5 Yeah, it probably is.
-10-6 But you earnestly told me your wish.
+10-6 But you earnest when you told me your wish.
-10-7 I don't think anyone can hate you for it.
+10-7 I don't think anyone could hate you for it.
-10-8 And whatever you do, you never lose sight of your position.
+10-8 And whatever you do, never lose sight of your position.
 10-9 I'll take your commission.
 
 Page 11:
 11-1 Thank you so much!!
-11-2 However, I cannot assure you it'll be done in time for the audition
+11-2 However, I can't assure you that it'll be done in time for the audition
 11-3 Huh!?
-11-4 I am one those guys who cannot compose unless inspiration hits him.
+11-4 I'm the type of person who can't compose unless inspiration hits me.
 11-5 Well, I'm still going to try my best, though
-11-6 I'd ask you to please forgive me if it does not work out
+11-6 I ask that you please forgive me if it doesn't work out
 11-7 Yes, I understand
-11-8 Alright...! It's a matter of luck if the song is finished in time
+11-8 Alright...! So it's a matter of luck if the song's going to finished in time
-11-9 So then
+11-9 Then
-11-10 All Ican do now is throw all of my being into doing this.
+11-10 All I can do now is throw everything I have into this.
 
 Page 12:
 12-1 Good morning, Akizuki-san
 12-2 Good morning!
 12-3 Good luck on today's audition
-12-4 ...Are you ok? It might be me but you don't seem in a good condition...
+12-4 ...Are you ok? It might just be me, but you don't seem in good condition...
-12-5 Huh? Is that... so? I'm ok!
+12-5 Huh? Is that... so? I'm OK!
 12-6 Really... If you say so
 12-7 And you, Chihaya-san...
-12-8 I am always in best condition
+12-8 I'm always in top condition
-12-9 Let's just both do our best
+12-9 Let's both of us do our best
 
 Page 13:
-13-1 He did not make it in time...!!
+13-1 He didn't make it in time...!!
-13-2 I have no plan. Even if I go on stage I can already see my humilliating defeat in front of me...
+13-2 I don't have a plan. If I go on stage, I can already see my humiliating defeat before me...
 13-3 Is there... Is there nothing I can do...!?
 13-4 Takeda-sa...
 13-5 Ryou-san, hello there!!
 
 Page 14:
-14-1 Ai-chan, Eri-chan. Why?
+14-1 Ai-chan, Eri-chan. What is it?
-14-2 We came to bring you a package addressed to you.
+14-2 We came to bring you a package that's addressed to you.
-14-3 It arrived shortly after you left the office building.
+14-3 It arrived shortly after you left the office.
 14-4 Let's see...
 14-5 Here you go!
 14-5 Is this... what you had told us about earlier, that new song...?
 14-6 Yes! I'm sure of it!!
 
 Page 15:
 15-1 How nice that we managed to bring it over!
 15-2 Yeah.
 15-3 Will you focus on memorizing it?
 15-4 Yeah
-15-5 Well then, will you please use my Notebook and my headphones...?
+15-5 Well then, would you like to use my notebook and my headphones...?
 15-6 Huh...
 15-7 Ehm, ugh, I give you my energy!  Please use it!
 15-8 Thank you!
         Ai-chan! Eri-chan!
 15-9 Do your best!
 15-10 We'll be cheering for you!
 15-11 Thank you
 
 Page 16:
-16-1 I still have 30 minutes...
+16-1 I still have half an hour...
-16-2 At this rate I won't have it down by the time I go on stage...
+16-2 At this rate, I won't have it down by the time I go on stage...
 16-3 I don't have enough time
-16-4 Even though Takeda-san even accepted my offer to compose for me...
+16-4 While Takeda-san accepted my offer to compose for me...
 16-5 If I go like this...!
 
 Page 17:
 17-1 No!
 17-2 It's not just Takeda-san's song.
 17-3 It's also the lessons I took from Chihaya-san!
-17-4 She allowed me to learn from her
+17-4 She let me learn from her
-17-5 Even if it was a slice I can't let it go to waste!
+17-5 Even if it was only a little bit, I can't let it go to waste!
-17-6 If can convey the lyrics in a way people can understand with their hearts
+17-6 If I can convey the lyrics in a way people can understand with their hearts
-17-7 There is no song I cannot sing
+17-7 There's no song that I can't sing
 
 Page 19:
-19-1 As expected
+19-1 Just like we expected
 19-2 Yeah, there's no room for complaints
-        Chihaya Kirasagi really is outstanding
+        Chihaya Kisaragi really is outstanding
 19-3 Now, number 6, Ryou Akizuki-san
 19-4 Yes
 19-5 Makoto-san, Yayoi-san
 19-6 Everyone, even Chihaya-san
 
 Page 20/21:
 20-1 Please watch as I show you the fruits of everything you've taught me.
 20-2 Take this!!
 20-3 Dazzling World
 
 Page 22:
-22-1 We'll now reveal the results.
+22-1 Now we'll reveal the results.
 22-2 I did all I could
-22-3 All that is left is to believe...!
+22-3 All that's left is to believe...!
 
 Page 23:
-23-1 Congratulations to you, Chihaya Kisaragi.
+23-1 Congratulations, Chihaya Kisaragi.
 23-2 Thank you very much.
-23-3 It was not enough...
+23-3 It wasn't enough...
 23-4 Akizuki-san
 23-5 Ah...
 23-6 Chihaya-san, congratulations
 23-7 Thank you.
 
 Page 24:
 24-1 Akizuki-san, the song you performed earlier...
 24-2 Could it be...
 24-3 Yeah, it was composed by Takeda-san
 24-4 So it really was...
 24-5 Yet I still lost.
-24-6 Even though he put his all writing it
+24-6 Even though he put everything into writing it
-        I did not rise to the occassion
+        I couldn't not rise to the occasion
-24-7 It was a nice song
+24-7 It was a good song
-24-8 But it's a song that has just been born
+24-8 But it's a song that's just been born
 24-9 That song is definitely going to grow with you
-24-10 And it's going to be the song to help your selfconfidence mature
+24-10 And it's going to be the song helps you mature and gain self-confidence.
 
 Page 25:
-25-1 For singers like us, meeting a song like this brings us happiness
+25-1 For singers like us, encountering a song like this brings us happiness
-25-2 I'm glad that I was able to experience that happiness as well
+25-2 I'm glad that I was able to share in that happiness too
-25-3 I was tightly listening to your song
+25-3 I was listening intently to your song
-25-4 Your song did not lose, it was a wonderful piece.
+25-4 Your song didn't lose, it was a wonderful piece.
 25-5 Ryou-sa...
 
 Page 26:
 26-1 Losing is frustrating but...
 26-2 I'm glad she talked with me
 26-3 Not even I can understand these overflowing emotions
 26-4 These tears coming out...
-26-5 I could not stop them from coming out
+26-5 I can't stop them
 26-6 (final caption) Only now do the tears come out...