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 p1
 >>cast
 >>Mori Asuka (16)
 >>This manga's protagonist, a high school freshman.
 >>The only child in a fatherless family and a huge mothercon. Her father died in the traffic accident before she was born. She is a serious and stupidly honest type whose face easily shows what she's thinking. A talented girl who has been first in her school year since middle school, but lacks any physical strength, and she caught a fever on the day before her entrance exams. Has feelings of "romantic affection" towards her real mother, Ayako.
 
 >>Mori Ayako (37)
 >>Asuka's mother. Working as a pharmacist.
 >>Married Asuka's father Mori Atsushi, who she was tutoring while studying in university, but became a single mother after he died in an accident shortly afterwards. She's a beauty who turns everyone's head, but really couldn't care less. She conducts herself in a gentle manner, but her real character is relatively dry. She can't help but show affection for her only daughter, Asuka. A kind mother who is good at cooking.
 
 >>Mori Akira
 >Works at a foreign pharmaceutical company. The so-called Bali Cari. Atsushi's blood-related sister. i.e. Asuka's aunt.
 
 >>Mizuno Rui
 >>Asuka's childhood friend and best friend. An otaku who is aloof and lives at her own pace. Has a habit of teasing Asuka and pulling pranks on her.
 
 >>Mizuno Jun
 >>Rui's older brother. A university student. Secretly cares about Asuka without wanting anything in return. Hang in there, Jun-kun.
 
 p2
 >>The story until now.
 >>There is no way that she is not cute.
 >>After all, that girl is my...
 >>Mori Asuka is a mothercon high school girl who has started to love her real mother, Ayako. Not just platonically, but romantically towards her blood-related parent.
 
->>Ayako who became aware of Asuka' feelings made a rule "it's okay to go as far as kissing", and that very day Akira found that they have that sort of relationship. [Asuka emotionally cut Akira's interrogation about her taking responsibility for what she's done (laid a hand on her real mother) for using a rude line.]
+>>On the day that Ayako, who had become aware of Asuka's feelings for her, made a rule that "it's okay to go as far as kissing", Akira found out about their relationship. Akira interrogation about taking responsibility for what she had done (laying a hand on her blood-related mother) was cut shot as Asuka scolded her for using such harsh words.
 
->>Nonetheless Akira's reaction on such emotions from Asuka was surprisingly calm. "I don't have a right to be in love with Ayako" said Akira. Such line made it clear that something did happen in Ayako and Akira's past. On the other hand Ayako started to realize that her own feelings toward her real daughter Asuka started to change...
+>>However, Akira was surprisingly calm upon seeing such emotions from Asuka, simply saying "I don't have the right to be in love with Ayako". Such a line made it clear that something happened between Ayako and Akira long ago. Meanwhile, Ayako begins to realize that her own feelings towards her own daughter, Asuka, have started to change...
 
->>Love is a one-way road. Once you know it,
+>Love is a one-way road. Once you realize you're on it,
->>you can't backtrack.
+>you can never turn back...
 
 p3
->>Creator's support site Fantia
+>Special thanks
->>All the members of Tayaki's premium plan (in no particular order ∙ with honorific added)
+>All Premium Taiyaki Plan members on the creator support site Fantia (in no particular order, honorifics added)
 >Oyunomi - 85kg - 96mame - Seuyu Senbei - Tahamenz - Karen Scarlet bullet - Uei - hiroaki - boya - KOU
->>Contributor of guest page
+>Azuki - Aoineko - Firo - mako - Ganpan - Geek - Okura - coco - Satou
 >-sama
->>~Comment from guest author (Nochimuyu-sensei @nochimuU [don't know him at all])~
+
->>[What will happen when one woman who is a daughter who inherited from a half of her a love for her other half is connected by love to a woman who is a mother ~!??][that fucking sentence. I can't. I just can't] It's the best!! I love Tayaki-san's sense of words!! Thank you for inviting me.
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 >Kura-sama
->>~Comment from Tayaki~
+>>Guest contributor
->>W-, woah~ A contribution from my beloved Nochimuyu-sensei! [I seriously hope both of them are women at this point] And in the form of a manga no less!! Asuka-chan's bra is super sexy and amazing & I laughed at Ayako-san's facial expression! Thank you for doing that while you are busy.
+>NochimuU-sensei
 
 >>~Comment from guest author NochimuU-sensei @nochimuU~
->>Nochimuyu
+>>When one woman, a daughter who inherited the love for one half of her from the other half, falls in love with another woman, her mother, what's gonna happen~!!? This is the best!! I love Taiyaki's word sense!! Thanks for inviting me!
->By the way
+
->What did you buy yesterday after all?
+>>~Comment from Taiyaki~
 >>W-, woah~ A contribution from my beloved NochimuU-sensei! And a manga, no less!! Asuka-chan's bra is amazingly super sexy and I laughed at Ayako-san's expressions! Thanks for doing that while you're so busy.
->>previous evening
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 p4
 >>NochimuU
 >Come to think of it...
 >What was it you bought yesterday?
 >>?
 >>Last night.
 >Did you go shopping with Rui-chan? What did you buy?
 >>!!
 >It's a secret until tomorrow!!
->Um...
+
->that is...
+
 >...
 
 >>?
->It's just this...
+
 >Erm...
 >well...
 
 >>ba-dump ba-dump
 >>pull
->Put your clothes back.
+>It's this...
->Answer me!
+
 
 >Asuka.
 >>sigh
 
 >Put some clothes on.
 >They already are on!
 >How is it!?
 >Is it cute!?
 
 >>The end.
->>Well then, Jun-kun's part for now are over. For the Jun-kun's fans [is there even such people?] good work! In a yuri manga like this it's to be expected that there shouldn't be any more narrative dedicated to men, but regarding him I even thought about a special episode and I think given the chance I would love to draw him again. Aside from whether there would be demand for such or not. lol
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 p5
->>Well then, there are also two things I want to tell you today.
+
 
 >>Hello, this is Taiyaki.
->>The second thing.
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->>I recently opened a fantia account as a place where manga would be shown before tankoubon publications! It's a registration site system designed to help creators, which allows receiving a material assistance from all subscribers every month to compensate for the manga creation expenses (since recently the free registration is also allows a viewing). There are also a lot of small material limited to fantia only priveleged subscribers which going to be published before manga tankoubon publications, so I'll be happy if you definitely try it at least once. QR for site is here↓
+>>Well then, Jun-kun's part for now is over. Good work, fans of Jun-kun. Since it's a yuri manga, it should be expected that there'd be no more male-oritented story, but given the chance I wouldn't mind drawing a special episode about him. Not that there'd be much request for such a thing. Lol.
 
 >>Well then, two pieces of news for today.
 >>First off, since the first drama CD was received so positively, production on a second one has been greenlit! Thanks everyone for listening to the first volume. I'm so grateful!! You can pre-order the downloadable version of this contiuation over on circle head Kokoro-san's BOOTH site. You can find the QR for the first volume here↓
 >>Firstly, since the first volume of drama CD was received very positively, therefore the decision for production of the second one was made! This is all thanks to your all listening the first volume. I'm really grateful!! The pre order for downloadable version of continuation of the first volume is available on circle head Kokoro-san's BOOTH site. The QR for the first volume is here↓
 
 >>And secondly...
 >I recently opened a Fantia account to host my manga before it is published in tankobon format! It's a registration site system designed to help creators, allowing me to receive assistance from subscribers every month to pay for manga creation expenses (recently, you can also read stuff via the free registration). There's also some material that is exclusive to priveleged Fantia subscribers, which are posted before they are published in the tankobons, so I'd be happy if you gave it a try. The QR for the site is here↓
 
 >>Well then, I'll see you again in volume 5.
 
 p6
 >>On a certain day in the Mori household.
 >Geez...
 >Be more careful.
 >!!??
 >>Thank you for buying a
 >>1 x 1/2 - one and a half volume 4 kindle edition.
 >>2018.2.11 Tayaki