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[Homusub] Fansub review
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Sum
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- Lilith
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+ Kazamino City
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- Around my home area
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+ Bus labels
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- Bearer of disaster (Passage)
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- To encourage me was Bebe (mami knows loneliness real well)
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(Bebe  inconsistent)
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- "memories are troublesome"
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- "be force to fight you"
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- Pooting -> Pact
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- even yulitvu supurior position
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- in perfect form
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- (what kyubey is doing during all this?)
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- "deal with her" -> vanquish her
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- Soyou Rebtmur
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- Another -> second
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- uderea
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- (m) It seem like a dream
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(flower bed scene)
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- And so strong
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- OI
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- (Bad Joke -> madoka)
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(cocoon)
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- still you Persist
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- th
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- Is the ability
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- we should acomplish this state
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- simple prayer
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- alone ride curst
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STAGES OF 
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NEED
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MAMI -> BELONGING
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NAGISA -> FOOD/HUNGER
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- my feeling haunt me
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- thank you and good bye
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- she herself
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- carrier girl -> personal secretary
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- all the blame
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- comolttely incomoretu -> "I don't get it at all"
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- A color ... is
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- yelone to my alone
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- devil
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- Ill have you cooperate incubator
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- spread curse
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Homura -> egg -> hard boil -> teacher
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- hope of all magical girls
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- are you opposin me
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(true self)
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(it fits you much more)
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Official Subs round 2
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Special effects: lens distortions to create unconscious unease (play within a play)
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Oscar bait prelude
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- water blot bottom right
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- film grain
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- film cracks
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- aspect ratio manipulation
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Henshin
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- film grains
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- rose tilted lens
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- timing offset
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Bebe
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- every one is here
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- every one is here
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-The fifth lilian (both are sewing tricks)
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Cake song - drum beats
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Kyouko - Preaching 
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(Gears falling)
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31 Mitakihara Loop Line
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"It seem we can read each other equally well"
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"But do you think you can beat me in a equal fight?"
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"In turn of endurance I am better"
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Vanquish her?
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(red and blue)
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Runes: CHARLOTTE
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Quick to run away again
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Weren't you suppose to be more clumsy?
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(spool)
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Thard nightmare
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butterfly
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(Put away my childish things)
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No one sad as jurt 
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a dream
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Painful for madoka -> Proof -> dear
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Four help are
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Nuctsary to us
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- shots
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- suicide
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(my whole family)
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absolutely not hit tar changed
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(cat's dream)
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hatashisa
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madott I hadmsu 
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hmkdikiki
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hmkdikiki
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>>1490617
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The problem with using different proper terms than official subs, is may lead to viewer confusion down the line.  This already happened with Wraith/Demon, for example.
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I think the proper policy should be side with official subs for proper terms, even when they're possibly wrong, misspelled, etc - just like how we retain "Puella Magi" or use the tv series episode titles from official releases instead of our own.  
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Anyhow, part 1 notes - specific terms or phrases:
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>0:25:15.38 Five man
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>0:25:17.25 Lilian!
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Both are names of sewing tricks.  Can someone double check on proper terms for them?
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>0,0:29:15.99 I'd rather not receive such lectures.
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Official subs has Kyouko said "preaching" instead.  
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In KyouHomu sequence, Bus route are labeled to show route being actively changed:
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>Line 15 Kazamina West Exit (?)
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>Line 31 Mitakihara Loop Line
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A pretty crucial piece of information
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> 0:48:32.45 What a troublesome thing memories are.
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Memories are troublesome.
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>0:59:37.44 You'll deal with her?
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Vanquish her?
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>1:01:16.61 Another one is...
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Second
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>1:02:14.23 Too quick at escaping.
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>I remember you were much more 
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> Clumsy
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Quick to escape.
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Aren't you suppose to be more clumsy?
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>1:05:51.26 I had a very scary dream.
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Official sub uses nightmare here, but probably wrong.
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> 1:06:20.20 Even though it was lonely and sad...
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> No one could understand how I was feeling...
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Even though I'm lonely,
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Even though I'm sad,
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No one else can understand how I feel.
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See http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HnGESq_CiQY
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> 1:15:00.80 Still you couldn't help but pursue it.
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Still you persist 
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>1:24:52.66 My feelings are Coming after me...
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My feelings haunt me
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>1:29:21.80 We're kind of like 'carrier girls.'
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'personal secretary'
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>1:35:38:41 Completely incomprehensible!
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I don't get it at all
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>1:38:46.30 Belong only to me.
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belongs to me alone.
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> 1:42:28.67 In order to deal with the curses that appear in our world...
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 "the curses you brought to our world"
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>1:44:31.00 that was the hope of magical girls!
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Hope of all magical girls.
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>1:45:26.12 Are you opposing me...?
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Will you oppose me?
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> 1:49:55.85 Actually I don’t feel like anything has changed at all…
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Absolutely nothing has changed
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>1:50:42.12 You're without a doubt As your true self right now.
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This is your true self.
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(devil -> demon etc)
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Ones that feels off, but I don't recall the exact phrasing:
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> 0:50:49.98  you'll Be stuck fighting me.
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> 0:57:34.27 Picking a fight head-on with Mami-san in perfect form
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> 1:22:01.43 We should accomplish this state.
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> 1:22:43.04 With just that simple prayer I became a magical girl.
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I believe they used "my wish as magical girl" here
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>1:25:47:00
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...Thank you and ...I'm sorry probably should get reworded
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>1:27:13.42 The one who is suffering the most is she herself.
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>1:38:23.05 A color even more frightening than curses is...!
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>1:51:39.68 It fits you much more.