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 Ghost93 Translation
 Date: 2017/03/xx
 Revision: 2017/04/xx
 -13 Commanders/13 Generals renamed to 13/Great 13
 Translated by: anonymous
 Mission Text Translated:
 -GABRIEL_HOUND_13
 Other Text Translated:
 -Consequent security console text
 -TripWire text
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 <After watching the cut scene at the end of THE_MIGRATION and entering HQ>
 
-幹部「役員、十三大将が介入しました」//Management: Executive, the 13have intervened.
+幹部「役員、十三大将が介入しました」//Management: Executive, The Great 13 have intervened.
 
-役員「十三大将？」//Executive: The 13?
+役員「十三大将？」//Executive: The Great 13?
 
-運用部長「元海軍エリートを集めた首相直属部隊とのことだ」// Operations Chief: I've heard that they were an assembled unit of former navy elites under the Prime Minister's direct control.
+運用部長「元海軍エリートを集めた首相直属部隊とのことだ」// Operations Chief: They appear to be a unit formed of former navy elites, under the Prime Minister's immediate authority.
 
-幹部「首相直属というのは前首相の書類か何かが元で、//Management: By "Prime Minister's direct control" you mean originally from the former Prime Minister's official documents or something,
+幹部「首相直属というのは前首相の書類か何かが元で、//Management: This was possible because their existence was gradually approved
-なし崩し的に承認されただけのことだろう？//and it was the case that only little by little did he come to be acknowledged right?
+なし崩し的に承認されただけのことだろう？//based on some old documents from the previous PM?
-横車を押せないわけではあるまい」// It doesn't mean that he couldn't have gotten his own way.
+横車を押せないわけではあるまい」// It's not unthinkable for something like that to come to pass.
 
-役員「保安目的以外で政府が十三大将を介入してきた理由は？」//Executive: Except for the purpose of maintaining peace, why did the government have the 13 Generals intervene?
+役員「保安目的以外で政府が十三大将を介入してきた理由は？」//Executive: Save for peacekeeping purposes, why did the government have the Great 13 Generals intervene?
 
-幹部「陸軍が政府に働きかけたのでは……？」//Management: What if the military is exerting influence on the government...?
+幹部「陸軍が政府に働きかけたのでは……？」//Management: The military may have urged the government in some fashion...?
 
 チャン「……」 //Chan: ...
 
 ナイン「……」//Nine: ...
 
 運用部長「……」 //OC: ...
 
-役員「いいでしょう」//Executive: Fine, I guess.
+役員「いいでしょう」//Executive: Alright then.
 
 チャン「（スノート、//Chan: "Snort,
 管理ネットワークの復旧は続行する　// continue with the management network restoration.
 背後に気をつけろ）」// Watch your back."
 
 <GABRIEL_HOUND_13 start: 1st mission dialogue>
 
-十三大将が十三将の（制止）のためＩＤＣテロに介入した // In order to "restrain" the 13, the Great 13 have intervened in the IDC terrorism.
+十三大将が十三将の（制止）のためＩＤＣテロに介入した // In order to "detain" the 13, the Great 13 have come to intervene in the act of terror on the IDC.
-政府に主導権を取られてリスクが高まる中、//While the risk that the government could take the initiative rises,
+政府に主導権を取られてリスクが高まる中、// With the government once more in charge, the stakes rise.
-スノートは３階層の管理用ネットワーク復旧のため//Snort hastens to the server room in order to restore the
+スノートは３階層の管理用ネットワーク復旧のため// Snort makes haste to the server room in order to restore the
-サーバルームへ急ぐ//3rd level's management-use network.
+サーバルームへ急ぐ// 3rd level's management-use network.
 
 <After turning on the 3rd server and finding your way to the 13's Meeting>
 
-松下「十三大将松下だ」 //Matushita: I am Matsushita of the Great 13.
+松下「十三大将松下だ」 //Matsushita: I am Matsushita of the Great 13.
 
-松下「十三将狩野、陸軍大規模統合の執行を妨害をした件、 //Matsushita: Kanou of the 13, in light of your past interference in the execution of the military's large-scale unification,
+松下「十三将狩野、陸軍大規模統合の執行を妨害をした件、 //Matsushita: Kanou of the 13, under charges of your interference in the execution of the military's great unification,
-日南重工ＩＤＳを占拠した件で政府から十三将制止の厳命を受けている」//and the matter of your occupation of the Nichinan Heavy Industries’ IDC, we are under strict orders from the government to restrain the 13.
+日南重工ＩＤＳを占拠した件で政府から十三将制止の厳命を受けている」// and the matter of your occupation of the Nichinan Heavy Industries’ IDS, we are under strict orders from the government to restrain the 13.
 
-松下「直ちに武装解除を……」 //Matsushita: Disarm immediately ...
+松下「直ちに武装解除を……」 //Matsushita: Lay down your arms at once...
 
-狩野「我ら十三将は部隊解体の命令に抗して決起した、//Kanou: We 13 stood up against the military's order to disband,
+狩野「我ら十三将は部隊解体の命令に抗して決起した、//Kanou: We of The 13 stood up against the military's order to disband,
-相手が誰であれ、我々の前に立ちふさがり我々の邪魔をする者は//whoever the opponent, even if they determined to stand in our way or become a hindrance,
+相手が誰であれ、我々の前に立ちふさがり我々の邪魔をする者は// be our opponent who they may, if set on standing in our way,
-断固としてそれを撃退する」//we will repel them.
+断固としてそれを撃退する」//we'll strike them all down.
 
-松下「犯行声明どおり、金か？」//Matsushita: Just like in the criminal declaration, money huh?
+松下「犯行声明どおり、金か？」//Matsushita: Just like in your declaration, it's money, is it not?
 
 狩野「十三将は金では動かん」//Kanou: The 13 aren't swayed by money.
 
-松下「では何だ？」 //Matsushita: Then what is it?
+松下「では何だ？」 //Matsushita: Then what?
 
 狩野「愛欲と狂気で体に繰り返し教え込まれてきた//Kanou: We 13 only came into existence through our "union",
 （結束）でのみ我々十三将は存在する// which came from the repeated training of our bodies with lust and madness.
-テロはその防衛本能によるものだ」// Terrorism is a defence mechanism because of that.
+テロはその防衛本能によるものだ」// Our "act of terror" is an act of self-preservation born of that.
 
-新島「法を捨ててもか」 //Shinjima:  Have you also thrown away the law?
+新島「法を捨ててもか」 //Niijima: Even against the law?
 
-正岡「推参なり！」//Masaoka: You are proving to be rude!
+正岡「推参なり！」//Masaoka: Coming through!
 
-松下「（新島、一人やれ //Matsushita: "Shinjima, I'll do it alone.
+松下「（新島、一人やれ //Matsushita: ("Niijima, you get one of them.
-人命の殺傷にいたったとしても// Even if it gets to the point where I have to take lives,
+人命の殺傷にいたったとしても// Even if we end up making some corpses here,
-制止という行為の結果でしかない）」//I just have to achieve the results of the so-called act of restraining."
+制止という行為の結果でしかない）」// we'll just call it a means to the end of detaining them.")
 
-新島「（無茶が過ぎるぞ）」//Shinjima: "This is beyond reckless."
+新島「（無茶が過ぎるぞ）」//Niijima: "This is beyond reckless."
 
-松下「一撃で倒せ」 //Matsushita: I'll bring them down in one blow.
+松下「一撃で倒せ」 //Matsushita: "Bring them down in one blow."
 
-新島「松下！」 //Shinjima: Matsushita!
+新島「松下！」 //Niijima: Matsushita!
 
 <GABRIEL_HOUND_13, appears on screen>
 
 <Player control resumes: Kouda starts to attack Matsushita but is killed by Tougou>
 
 幸田「……！　うわああああああああああああああああ！」 //Kouda: ...! Uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
 
 松下「……！　な…何いっボサッとしているぅ！　光学転移だっ！」 //Matsushita: ...! Wh... What are you spacing out for! Optical Transference!
 
 <All Great 13 teleport from the room, at that point a white hole originates from the area where Matsushita was standing, enveloping the entire area>
 
-新美「野口のやつ、張り切りやがって……」 //Niimi: That Noguchi, she was so damned eager...
+新美「野口のやつ、張り切りやがって……」 //Niimi: Noguchi was so damned eager...
 
 島尾「ギリティ……」 //Shimao: Guilty...
 
-梅原「やはり駄目か……」//Umehara: So it's useless huh?....
+梅原「やはり駄目か……」//Umehara: Nothing we can do, huh....
 
 有島「ああ、駄目だ」//Arishima: Aah, it's hopeless.
 
 正岡「無念である」 //Masaoka: There is regret.
 
 二宮「私達にふさわしい最後だ」//Ninomiya: It's a fitting end for us.
 
-狩野「今度ばかりはすこし、無理をしすぎたな」 //Kanou: Just once, I think we overdid it a little.
+狩野「今度ばかりはすこし、無理をしすぎたな」 //Kanou: We may have bitten off a bit too much this time.
 
-本居「ごめんなさい……私こそ十分に手伝えなくて……」 //Motoi: I'm sorry... that I couldn't provide adequate assistance...
+本居「ごめんなさい……私こそ十分に手伝えなくて……」 //Motoi: I'm sorry... that I couldn't help you enough...
 
 北大路「狩野様……」 //Kitaooji: Kanou-sama...
 
 <After exiting the meeting and going to the large room where server 3 can be reached>
 
-勝「動くな、僕は君を制止しにきた」 // Katsu*: Don't move, I've come to restrain you.
+勝「動くな、僕は君を制止しにきた」 // Katsu: Don't move, I've come to detain you.
-*Could also be read as Shou, Kachi
+
 
-光学迷彩「大丈夫、待つのは慣れている……」//Optical Camouflage: It's alright, I'm used to waiting...
+光学迷彩「大丈夫、待つのは慣れている……」//Optical Camouflage: It's alright, waiting's hardly new to me...
 
 勝「ちょ……ちょっとまてよ、話がかみ合わない」//Katsu: W... wait a minute, this conversation isn't coming together.
 
-光学迷彩「……そうしつけられてきたのだから……」/Optical Camouflage: ...Because...came to refuse to disappear....
+光学迷彩「……そうしつけられてきたのだから……」/Optic Camo: ...For that is how we were trained...
 
-勝「ちっ、手間を省いてやるよ」//Katsu: Tch, I'll give you 'time omission'.
+勝「ちっ、手間を省いてやるよ」//Katsu: Tch, let's get this over with.
 
-勝「殺しても正当防衛だからな、かかってこいよ虫けら」 //Katsu: Even if I kill you it'll be legitimate self-defence, come at me you worm.
+勝「殺しても正当防衛だからな、かかってこいよ虫けら」 //Katsu: Even if I kill you it'll be in legitimate self-defense. Come at me, worm.
 
 <When you defeat Katsu >
 
 勝「松下君！//Katsu: Matsushita-kun!
 君を恨むぞ！」// I resent you!
 
-＊＊十三大将「勝」を倒した＊＊ // ＊＊The Great 13's "Katsu" was defeated＊＊
+＊＊十三大将「勝」を倒した＊＊ // ＊＊"Katsu" of The Great 13 was defeated＊＊
 
 <When you defeat Shinjima >
 
-新島「岩…… // Shinjima: Iwa.....
+新島「岩…… // Niijima: Iwa.....
-つまらない男のために死ぬことはないんだ……」// There's no need to die for a boring man.
+つまらない男のために死ぬことはないんだ……」// There's no need to die for such a worthless man.
 
-＊＊十三大将「新島」を倒した＊＊ // ＊＊The Great 13's "Shinjima" was defeated＊＊
+＊＊十三大将「新島」を倒した＊＊ // ＊＊"Niijima" of The Great 13 was defeated＊＊
 
 <When you arrive at the big room in level 2, Tougou boss battle>
 
-毒ガス兵Ａ「なんだ？　この女、見なれない顔だな」 // Poison Gas Soldier A: What? This woman, I haven't seen her face around here.
+毒ガス兵Ａ「なんだ？　この女、見なれない顔だな」 // PGA Soldier A: What? I don't recognize this woman.
 
-毒ガス兵Ｂ「どの信号にも反応しない……識別機を外しているようだ……」// Poison Gas Soldier B: No matter what signal you use, you get no response... Seems like her ID device is undone.
+毒ガス兵Ｂ「どの信号にも反応しない……識別機を外しているようだ……」// PGA Soldier B: No matter what kind of signal you use, there's no response... Seems like the device's ID designation is broken.
 
-毒ガス兵Ｃ「冷感症女はどこの所属だ？」// Poison Gas Soldier C: What's this frigid woman's affiliation?
+毒ガス兵Ｃ「冷感症女はどこの所属だ？」// PGA Soldier C: What's this frigid woman's affiliation?
 
-毒ガス兵Ａ「どうする？　やっちまうか？」// Poison Gas Soldier A: What do we do? You wanna do it?
+毒ガス兵Ａ「どうする？　やっちまうか？」// PGA Soldier A: What do we do? You wanna do it?
 
-毒ガス兵Ｃ「哀れなやつ……」 // Poison Gas Soldier C: Pathetic bastard...
+毒ガス兵Ｃ「哀れなやつ……」 // PGA Soldier C: Poor bastard...
 
-毒ガス兵Ｂ「何勝手なことしてるんだ！　こら！」// Poison Gas Soldier B: Hey! What are you doing, acting on your own!
+毒ガス兵Ｂ「何勝手なことしてるんだ！　こら！」// PGA Soldier B: Hey! What's all this funny business!
 
 <After defeating Tougou>
 
-東郷「力だけではメシは食えないのだぞ…… //Tougou: You can't eat food by power alone.
+東郷「力だけではメシは食えないのだぞ…… //Tougou: You can't feed yourself by power alone.
 力は何も……ない……」//Power is no...thing...
 
-＊＊十三大将「東郷」を倒した＊＊ // ＊＊The Great 13's "Tougou" was defeated＊＊
+＊＊十三大将「東郷」を倒した＊＊ // ＊＊"Tougou" of The Great 13 was defeated＊＊
 
 <When you arrive in the 'Otoshiana' in level 3, big room with4 pillars>
 
-？？？「新兄ぃ、よろこぶかな？」 //???: Shin-nii, I wonder if you'll be pleased?
+？？？「新兄ぃ、よろこぶかな？」 //???: I wonder if Nii-nii's gonna like it?
 
 ？？？「カエルさん、何カエルさんですか？」//???: Mr. Frog, which Mr. Frog are you?
 
-？？？「わわっお花がいっぱい」//???: Wa Wow, there are so many flowers.
+？？？「わわっお花がいっぱい」//???: W-Wow, there are so many flowers.
 
 <When you defeat Iwakura>
 
-岩倉「新兄ぃ……」 //Iwakura: Shin-nii...
+岩倉「新兄ぃ……」 //Iwakura: Nii-nii...
 
-＊＊十三大将「岩倉」を倒した＊＊//＊＊The Great 13's "Iwakura" was defeated＊＊
+＊＊十三大将「岩倉」を倒した＊＊//＊＊"Iwakura" of The Great 13 was defeated＊＊
 
 <When Snort reports back to HQ after the explosion in level 3>
 
-スノートは３階層での爆発を報告した //Snort reported on the explosion on the 3rd level.
+スノートは３階層での爆発を報告した //Snort reported the explosion on the 3rd level.
 
-運用部長「先ほどの爆発で３階層サービス用ネットワーク、 //Operations Chief: The function of the service and management use networks
+運用部長「先ほどの爆発で３階層サービス用ネットワーク、 //Ops Chief: The 3rd level service and management networks
-管理用ネットワークの機能が停止した」//on the 3rd level has been suspended, due to that explosion just now.
+管理用ネットワークの機能が停止した」//both came down due to the explosion just now.
 
-運用部長「３階層のサーバの移行は完了していたため //Operations Chief: Since the migration of the 3rd level's servers was completed,
+運用部長「３階層のサーバの移行は完了していたため //OC: With the 3rd level servers already migrated,
-サービスに影響はなかったが……」//service was unaffected but...
+サービスに影響はなかったが……」//there's no risk to continuing service...
 
-役員「……遅れていれば、 //Executive: ... If you had been late,
+役員「……遅れていれば、 //Executive: ... Had you been late,
-膨大な損害になっていました」//it would have turned out to be a massive loss.
+膨大な損害になっていました」//we'd be suffering enormous losses.
 
 幹部「３階層の爆発は //Management: The explosion on the 3rd level
-我々の指揮権を無視した十三大将の介入が//is the result of the intervention of the Great 13, who ignored our chain of command
+我々の指揮権を無視した十三大将の介入が//is the result of the intervention of the Great 13,
-テロリストを挑発した結果だ」//and provoked the terrorists.
+テロリストを挑発した結果だ」//who ignored our authority and provoked the terrorists.
 
-役員「十三大将は？」//Executive: What about the Great 13?
+役員「十三大将は？」//Executive: The Great 13?
 
-隊長「生き残った十三将を探してる様子です」//Commanding Officer: They're in the process of looking for the 13 that survived.
+隊長「生き残った十三将を探してる様子です」//Commander: They're in the process of hunting down any survivors from The 13.
 
-役員「移行計画は？」//Executive: What about the migration plan?
+役員「移行計画は？」//Executive: And the migration plan?
 
 運用部長「いまだに４階層と５階層の//OC: Even now, the 4th and 5th floor management networks
 管理ネットワークが復旧していない」//haven’t been restored.
 
 チャン「失礼、//Chan: Excuse me,
-ナイン、聞いているのだろう？」// Nine, you can hear me I presume?
+ナイン、聞いているのだろう？」// Nine, you're listening, yes?
 
 ナイン「チャン、//Nine: Chan,
-先約があるんだ通信を切るよ」//I have previous engagement as a matter of fact, I'm cutting communications.
+先約があるんだ通信を切るよ」//I have an appointment to see to, I'm cutting comms.
 
 幹部「無責任ではないのか？」//Management: Isn't that irresponsible?
 
 役員「……」 //Executive: ...
 
-チャン「お前が戻ってきてくれたおかげで//Chan: Thanks to you coming back,
+チャン「お前が戻ってきてくれたおかげで//Chan: Thanks to your coming back,
-大部分のサーバの移行が完了した// the majority of the server migration had been completed.
+大部分のサーバの移行が完了した// the majority of the server migration has been completed.
-これからも意義のある関係を続けるために、//Also from here on out, in order to keep up this meaningful relationship,
+これからも意義のある関係を続けるために、// For us to maintain a meaningful relationship,
-（あれ）について本当のことを教えてくれないか」//why don't I tell you about the truth concerning "that".
+（あれ）について本当のことを教えてくれないか」//why don't you tell us about the truth concerning "that".
 
 ナイン「……１度２度くらいは顔をあわせることもできるだろう」 // Nine: ... I suppose I could show my face around here once or twice.
 
-ナイン「かわりにプレゼントを１つ残していくよ」 //Nine: In exchange, leave you a present.
+ナイン「かわりにプレゼントを１つ残していくよ」 //Nine: In exchange, I'll leave you a present.
 
-ナイン「大臣と大陸側代表は共謀して資金操作を行ってきた、//Nine: The Cabinet Minister and the Mainland's representative have colluded to conduct financial manipulation,
+ナイン「大臣と大陸側代表は共謀して資金操作を行ってきた、//Nine: The Cabinet Minister and the Mainland's representative have colluded to conduct financial manipulation.
-十三大将の目的はその証跡を消すためだ」//the 13's objective is to erase that evidence.
+十三大将の目的はその証跡を消すためだ」//The 13's objective is to erase that evidence.
 
-チャン「それだけで十分だ」 //Chan: That alone is sufficient.
+チャン「それだけで十分だ」 //Chan: That alone will be sufficient.
 
-チャン「４階層、５階層のサーバのどれかに // Chan: The 4th and 5th levels, any one of these server
+チャン「４階層、５階層のサーバのどれかに // Chan: One of the servers on the 4th and 5th levels
-裏帳簿があるはずだ//should have the secret accounts.
+裏帳簿があるはずだ// should have secret accounts of this activity.
-ウエポン、大臣と関係がある企業を特定しろ」//Weapon, identify which one of the enterprises the Cabinet Minister has a relationship with.
+ウエポン、大臣と関係がある企業を特定しろ」//Weapon, narrow down the enterprises to those the Cabinet Minister is affiliated with.
 
-隊長「分かった」//CO: Understood.
+隊長「分かった」//Commander: Understood.
 
 チャン「役員、次の敵は時間です //Chan: Executive, time is our next enemy.
-復旧より先にするべきことがあります、// More than restoration, there is something that needs to be done first.
+復旧より先にするべきことがあります、//  There's something we need to do before restoration.
-今こそ臨機応変な決断をお願いしたい」//Now is the time that I would like to request an impromptu response.
+今こそ臨機応変な決断をお願いしたい」// We're going to need some flexible decisionmaking here.
 
 役員「確実なのですか？」//Executive: Can you say this with certainty?
 
 チャン「管理用ネットワーク停止の作戦から見て//Chan: From looking at the management-use network suspension strategy,
-十三大将は電子戦のプロと判断していいでしょう、//the Great 13 seem to have decided that it was okay to go with an electronic warfare professional.
+十三大将は電子戦のプロと判断していいでしょう、//the Great 13 seem to be experts in electronic warfare.
-相手がプロであるのなら我々は次の手の予測が出来ます」// If our opponent is a professional, then we can predict their next move.
+相手がプロであるのなら我々は次の手の予測が出来ます」// If our opponents are professionals, we can predict their next move.
 
-役員「許可します」//Executive: I'll allow it.
+役員「許可します」//Executive: Your hands are untied.
 
-チャン「（スノート、４階層のサーバールームに急げ）」//Chan: "Snort, hurry to the 4th level's server room".
+チャン「（スノート、４階層のサーバールームに急げ）」//Chan: ("Snort, hurry to the 4th level's server room".)
 
 <New mission description>
-３階層にて巨大なホワイトホールが発生した、//A massive 'white hole ‘erupted from the 3rd level and many servers were destroyed,
+３階層にて巨大なホワイトホールが発生した、//A massive 'white hole' erupted from the 3rd level. Many servers were destroyed,
-多くのサーバが破壊されたが、システム移行済みのためサービスに影響はなかった//but because the system migration was taken care of, service was unaffected.
+多くのサーバが破壊されたが、システム移行済みのためサービスに影響はなかった//but with the system migration taken care of, service was unaffected.
-十三大将の介入を制止するため、// In order to inhibit the Great 13's intervention,
+十三大将の介入を制止するため、// In order to hinder the Great 13's intervention,
-スノートはチャンの指示で大臣の裏帳簿を探す//Snort searches for the Cabinet Minister's secret accounts on Chan's orders.
+スノートはチャンの指示で大臣の裏帳簿を探す// Snort set out, under Chan's orders, to search for the secret accounts of the Cabinet Minister's dealings.
 
 <Upon reaching server room 4, from the Big Hole entrance>
 
-通信機から受信音が聞こえる…… //A ringtone could be heard from the comm. device....
+通信機から受信音が聞こえる…… //The comms device is ringing....
 
-隊長「スノート、任務の確認だ」//Commanding Officer: Snort, this is mission confirmation.
+隊長「スノート、任務の確認だ」//Commander: Snort, briefing time.
 
-チャン「大臣の資金操作の証跡が記録されている裏帳簿のサーバに //Chan: The secret account server that has the recorded evidence of the Cabinet Minister's financial manipulation,
+チャン「大臣の資金操作の証跡が記録されている裏帳簿のサーバに //Chan: The server with the secret accounts of the Cabinet Minister's financial
-印が付けられているはずだ」//is supposed to have a mark attached to it.
+印が付けられているはずだ」//manipulation is supposed to be marked in some way.
 
-チャン「サーバを一台づつ調べろ、//Chan: Examine every server one by one, carefully.
+チャン「サーバを一台づつ調べろ、//Chan: Examine every server one by one, and carefully.
 慎重にな」
 
 スノートはチャンに //Snort reported the location of the marked server to Chan.
 印が付けられたサーバの位置を報告した//
 
-運用部長「サーバのＨＤＤはミラーリングされている // Operations Chief: The server's hard drives are mirrored,
+運用部長「サーバのＨＤＤはミラーリングされている // OC: The server's hard drives are mirrored,
-３番スロットのＨＤＤを強制的に引き抜け」// you must extract the hard drives from all 3 slots.
+３番スロットのＨＤＤを強制的に引き抜け」// you must pull out the hard drive in the third slot.
 
-スノートは３番スロットのＨＤＤを引き抜いた、 //Snort extracted the hard drives from the 3 slots,
+スノートは３番スロットのＨＤＤを引き抜いた、 //Snort yanked out the third slot's hard drive.
-引き抜くと同時に消灯していた別のＨＤＤのランプが点滅し始めた//at the same of the extraction, the previously unlit lamp of another hard drive started flashing.
+引き抜くと同時に消灯していた別のＨＤＤのランプが点滅し始めた// On removing the drive, a light on another hard drive started blinking.
 
-スノートは裏帳簿が記録されたＨＤＤを手に入れた //Snort obtained the hard drives with the stored secret accounts.
+スノートは裏帳簿が記録されたＨＤＤを手に入れた //Snort obtained the hard drive with the secret accounts on it.
 
 [Scene changes to black and shifts back to HQ]
 
-スノートは裏帳簿が記録されたＨＤＤをチャンに渡した //Snort handed over hard drives with the stored secret accounts to Chan.
+スノートは裏帳簿が記録されたＨＤＤをチャンに渡した //Snort handed over the hard drive with the secret accounts on it to Chan.
 
 チャン「あとは私に任せろ、//Chan: Leave the rest to me,
 お前は戻り、十三大将のリーダを見張っていろ」//you head back, and watch out for the Great 13's leader.
 
-須藤「（あーいやだね//Sudou: "Ah, that's dirty.
+須藤「（あーいやだね//Sudou: "Ah, that's nasty.
-オヤジらしい陰険なやり方だ）」//That treacherous way of doing things is just like the old man."
+オヤジらしい陰険なやり方だ）」// Typical of that wily old man."
 
-隊長「（ほっとけばいいのに//CO: " Nevertheless it's alright if we leave it alone,
+隊長「（ほっとけばいいのに//Commander: "Why can't he just leave it.
-おまけにスノートをこきつかう気でいるらしい）」// What's more is that is seems like he want to keep working Snort hard."
+おまけにスノートをこきつかう気でいるらしい）」// And it looks like he really wants to keep working Snort."
 
 [Scene changes to black and shifts back to Server Room 4 with boss: Matsushita]
 
 <Matsushita speaks while patrolling>
 
-松下「制止により、不測の事態が起きても結果だからこそ許されるのだ」 //Matsushita: Because of the restraint, even if an unforeseen situation occurred, I got results, and for that reason I'll be forgiven.
+松下「制止により、不測の事態が起きても結果だからこそ許されるのだ」 //Matsushita: Whatever might come up with the detainment, the ends justify the means.
 
-松下「ハードディスクが……引き抜かれている……」//Matsushita: The hard disk... has been removed...
+松下「ハードディスクが……引き抜かれている……」//Matsushita: The hard disk... it's gone...
 
-松下「犬養、どういうことだ！　通信が……無い……」 //Matsushita: Inukai, what's the meaning of this! There's ... no signal...
+松下「犬養、どういうことだ！　通信が……無い……」 //Matsushita: Inukai, what's going on! There's ... no signal...
 
-？？？「やっちまったなぁ松下、日南重工に先こされたんだって」 //???: You really did it now Matsushita, I heard you crossed over to Nichinan Heavy Industries’' side.
+？？？「やっちまったなぁ松下、日南重工に先こされたんだって」 //???: You've done it now, Matsushita. Looks like Nichinan beat you to it.
 
-？？？「（飼い主）が怒っていたよ　あんたの立場、相当やばいらしいぜ」//???: The "Owner" got very angry, your situation seems to be pretty bad.
+？？？「（飼い主）が怒っていたよ　あんたの立場、相当やばいらしいぜ」//???: The "Owner"'s real pissed now, doesn't look too good for you.
 
-松下「貴様らぁ！俺の恩をあだで返しやがって！！」//Matsushita: You bastards! You returned evil for my good!!
+松下「貴様らぁ！俺の恩をあだで返しやがって！！」//Matsushita: I did you fucks good and this is how you repay me!
 
-松下「十三大将は誰のためにあると思っていやがる！」//Matsushita: For whose sake do you fuckers think the Great 13 exist!
+松下「十三大将は誰のためにあると思っていやがる！」//Matsushita: Who do you think The Great 13 even exist for!
 
-松下「おしまいだ……、安い金で女の格好までして……、どうしてこんな……」 //Matsushita: It's over..., I went so far as to change into a woman's appearance for easy money..., why did such a...
+松下「おしまいだ……、安い金で女の格好までして……、どうしてこんな……」 //Matsushita: I'm through... I even took on the appearance of a woman for this sub-minimum wage shit job... How could this...
 
 <While battling Matsushita >
 
-松下「最新の遺伝子工学で作った毒ガスをくらえ！」//Matsushita: Eat this! This is the latest poison gas made by genetic engineering!
+松下「最新の遺伝子工学で作った毒ガスをくらえ！」//Matsushita: Eat this! Bleeding edge genetically engineered poison gas!
 ＊＊松下は毒効果を持つＢＣ兵器に持ち替えた＊＊  // ＊＊Matsushita switched to the Poison Effect BC weapon＊＊
 Note: These gas canisters inflict poison status
 
-松下「（死ぬほうがまし）と思えるほどの苦しみを与えてやる」//Matsushita: I give you so much pain that you'll think that "you would rather die".
+松下「（死ぬほうがまし）と思えるほどの苦しみを与えてやる」//Matsushita: I'll show you pain that'll make you wish you were already dead!
 ＊＊松下はドレイン効果を持つＢＣ兵器に持ち替えた＊＊ /＊＊Matsushita switched to the Drain Effect BC weapon＊＊
 Note: These gas canisters cause 'drain' (permanent stat-lowering)
 
-松下「窒息して死ね、美しかったと言ってやろう」//Matsushita: I'm telling you, death by suffocation, it was beautiful.
+松下「窒息して死ね、美しかったと言ってやろう」//Matsushita: I'll tell everyone how pretty your suffocating face was.
 ＊＊松下は窒息効果を持つＢＣ兵器に持ち替えた＊＊ //＊＊Matsushita switched to the Suffocation Effect BC weapon＊＊
 Note: Yellow gas canisters, (Need Gas Mask to prevent instant death)
 
-松下「イカクではない、即死ガスを使うぞ！」 //Mastushita: This isn't a bluff*, I'm using Instant Death gas!
+松下「イカクではない、即死ガスを使うぞ！」 //Matsushita: I'm not bluffing! This time it's Instant Death gas!
 ＊＊松下は即死効果を持つＢＣ兵器に持ち替えた＊＊ /＊＊Matsushita switched to the Instant Death Effect BC weapon＊＊
-Note:(Instant death gas, avoid at all costs)
+
-*It literally translated to 'Not intimidation/threat'
+
 松下「腕が……腕が動かないっ！」 //Matsushita: My arms... I can't move my arms!
-松下「腕が……腕が動かないっ！」 //Mastushita: My arms... I can't move my arms!
+※※松下にＢＣ兵器による症状があらわれた※※//※※Matsushita showed symptoms of using the BC weapons※※
-※※松下にＢＣ兵器による症状があらわれた※※//※※Matsushita showed symptoms caused by BC weapons※※
+
 Note: When this happens Matsushita  is immobile.
 
 <Upon defeating Matsushita >
 
 松下「俺は世のために金で対抗してきた…… //Matsushita: For a better world, I fought back with money...
-松下「俺は世のために金で対抗してきた…… //Matsushita: For the world's sake, I came to oppose with money...
+力だけの十三将と違う……お前らと、何も……」// Unlike The 13, only about force... I'm nothing like the lot of you...
-力だけの十三将と違う……お前らと、何も……」//I'm not like those "only by strength" 13... I'm nothing, like the lot of you...
+
 ＊＊十三大将「松下」を倒した＊＊ //＊＊"Matsushita" of The Great 13 was defeated＊＊
-＊＊十三大将「松下」を倒した＊＊ //＊＊The Great 13's "Matsushita" was defeated＊＊
+
 通信機から受信音が聞こえる…… //The comms device is ringing....
-通信機から受信音が聞こえる…… //A ringtone could be heard from the comm. device....
+
 チャン「スノート、//Chan: Snort,
 首相から十三大将撤退の指示が出た// The Prime Minister has just ordered a recall of the Great 13.
-首相から十三大将撤退の指示が出た// An evacuation order for the Great 13 has been sent by the Prime Minister.
+主導権を取り戻すことに成功した」// We're in control once more.
-主導権を取り戻すことに成功した」//The regain of initiative succeeded.
+
 大臣は？//And the Cabinet Minister?
-大臣は？//What about the Cabinet Minister?
+
 須藤「後任人事の後、査問を受けるだろう//Sudou: He'll be having a hearing once they appoint him a successor.
-須藤「後任人事の後、査問を受けるだろう//Sudou: After a successor is appointed, I assume he's going to receive an inquiry.
+大事にならないのは外交的配慮というやつね」// Foreign politics means it'll have to be pretty low profile, though.
-大事にならないのは外交的配慮というやつね」// The one who this isn't gonna be a big deal for, is guy with diplomatic immunity isn't it.
+
 [After exiting at the bottom, the scenes shifts down in the pool room]
 
 高杉「あっ、松下が死んだぞー」//Takasugi: Ah, Matsushita's deeead~.
-高杉「あっ、松下が死んだぞー」//Takasugi: Ah, Mastushita died.
+
 山本「マジか！？　//Yamamoto: For real!?
-山本「マジか！？　//Yamamoto: Seriously!?
+あの化学兵器バカ」//That chemical weapon dumbass.
-あの化学兵器バカ」//That chemical weapon dork.
+
 高杉「あと //Takasugi: Also,
-高杉「あと //Takasugi: Also
+
 
 山本「確実に飼い主死んだな」 //Yamamoto: Means the owner's done for, huh.
-山本「確実に飼い主死んだな」 //Yamamoto: The owner certainly died huh.
+
 杉田「どうする？」//Sugita: What do we do?
 
 柳生「どうもこうもありません、//Yagyuu: None of that matters,
-柳生「どうもこうもありません、//Yanagii*: None of that matter,
+私、愚弟のすること期待していませんでしたし」//I wasn't expecting much of my stupid little bro.
-私、愚弟のすること期待していませんでしたし」//I, haven't lived up to my stupid younger brother's expectations.
+
-*Note: There are 11 other readings of this name in the name dictionary
+三木「火車切広光の借りを返したい// Miki: I want to pay Kunikida back for the Kashagiri Hiromitsu.
 国木田につくぞ」//Let's stick with him.
-三木「火車切広光の借りを返したい// Miki: I want to pay them back with the Kasha Cutter Hiromitsu.
+
-国木田につくぞ」//Let's connect with Kunikida.
+陸奥「金と女と水次第だ」//Mutsu: That's up to the money, women, and water.
 
-陸奥「金と女と水次第だ」//Mutsu: That depends on money, women, and water.
+
 
 山本「多数決に従うぜ //Yamamoto: I'll follow the majority.
 （まーた始まった……// ("Here we go again...
-山本「多数決に従うぜ //Yamamoto: I'll follow the majority rule.
+三木の（借りを返す）……// Miki's whole "payback" thing...
-（まーた始まった……// "Man it's started again...
+古くさいやつ！）」// Get with the times!)
-三木の（借りを返す）……// Miki's "giving payback"
+
-古くさいやつ！）」// He's so old-fashioned.
+柳生「愚弟が死んだ以上、//Yagyuu: Aside from by stupid younger brother having died,
 戻る気はございませんわ」// I don't feel like going back.
-柳生「愚弟が死んだ以上、//Yanagii: Aside from by stupid younger brother having died,
+
 高杉「はい決定ー」//Takasugi: Yup, it's decided~.
 
-高杉「はい決定ー」//Takasugi: Yup, it's decided.
+三木「（神託機械）があれば時間稼ぎにはなるだろう// Miki: As long as we have the "Oracle Machines" we should be able to buy some time.
 ５階層へ行くぞ」//Let's head to the 5th level.
-三木「（神託機械）があれば時間稼ぎにはなるだろう// Miki: As long as we have the "Oracle Machines" we can probably buy some time.
+
 <[THE_BIG_FIGHT] appears on screen>
 
 [Control returns to player]
 
 <GABRIEL_HOUND_13 Mission end text>
 
 （完了）// "End"
 裏帳簿の入ったＨＤは政府に届けられた// The hard drive holding the secret accounts was delivered to the government.
-（完了）裏帳簿の入ったＨＤは政府に届けられた//"End" The hard drives holding the secret accounts were delivered to the government.
+大臣は外交的配慮により辞職し、長い査問を受けることになるだろう//Foreign affairs considered, the Cabinet Minister was made to resign,
-大臣は外交的配慮により辞職し、長い査問を受けることになるだろう//The Cabinet Minister due to diplomatic immunity has resigned, it seems to have turned into an incident that will incur a lengthy inquiry.
+and will be having a lengthy set of hearings.
 
 --Consequent security console text
 
 <General text when interacting with a node before restoring its connection>
 ノード「＜エラー＞//Node: Error
 
 A階層の管理用ネットワークは稼動してません」//The B Level's management-use network is not operating.
 
 Where {A = １,２,３,４,５, B = 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th}
 
 
 <Interacting with a node after restoring connection>
-ノード「A階層のセキュリティを解除しますか？」 //Node: Cancel Level D Security?
+ノード「A階層のセキュリティを解除しますか？」 //Node: Deactivate Level D Security?
 
 Where {A = １,２,３,４,５, D = 1, 2, 3, 4, 5}
 
 <If you choose yes>
-＊＊A階層のセキュリティを解除した＊＊// ＊＊Level B security has been canceled＊＊
+＊＊A階層のセキュリティを解除した＊＊// ＊＊Level B security has been deactivated＊＊
 
 Where {A = １,２,３,４,５, D = 1, 2, 3, 4, 5}
 
 e.g
 
 ノード「＜エラー＞//Node: Error
 
 ５階層の管理用ネットワークは稼動してません」//The 5th Level's management-use network is not operating.
 
-ノード「５階層のセキュリティを解除しますか？」 //Node: Cancel Level 5 Security?
+ノード「５階層のセキュリティを解除しますか？」 //Node: Deactivate Level 5 Security?
 
-＊＊５階層のセキュリティを解除した＊＊// ＊＊Level 5 security has been canceled＊＊
+＊＊５階層のセキュリティを解除した＊＊// ＊＊Level 5 security has been deactivate＊＊
 
 -- Tripwire text
 
 ＊＊ＴｒｉｐＷｉｒｅ！＊＊
 
-ＴｒｉｐＷｉｒｅはスノートを追い出した // The TripWire expelled Snort.
+ＴｒｉｐＷｉｒｅはスノートを追い出した // The TripWire repelled Snort.