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 	【Yari no Yuusha no Yarinaoshi】
 
 	『Chapter 2 / 411 - 'Kuro-chan'』
- Motoyasu sometimes talk in 3rd person like Firo.
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- He say some bizarre, random, and incomprehensible? Deal with it, he IS insane incarnation japanese Deadpool. You have my word.
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 TLNOTE:
  Motoyasu sometimes talks in 3rd person like Firo.
  If he says something bizarre, random, and incomprehensible? Deal with it, he IS an insane incarnation of japanese Deadpool. You have my word.
  English is my 3rd language, and I know my english is TERRIBLE. I won't make any excuse and please accept my apologize.
- Dear father take my hand.
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- I grab his hand and help him stand up.
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 Kuro-Chan
- Speechless at my action, Itsuki start glare to me.
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- Stop that, you can't do anything to this Motoyasu.
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- For world's sake, for dear father's sake, for Firo-tan's sake, this Motoyasu will face everything.
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- Even Itsuki and Ren became my enemy, or if I must defeat God, I will never stand back.
+
 
-"You shouldn't believe anything that witch say, Itsuki." (Motoyasu)
+ Dear father took my hand.
  I grab his hand and helped him stand up.
- Now Itsuki won't believe me anymore.
+
- There's still hope in Ren's case, he look at me and Itsuki suspiciously.
+
- I grip dear father's hand and leave the castle.
+
  Speechless at my action, Itsuki starts glaring at me.
-"Thank you so much! Kitamura-kun!" (Naofumi)
+ Stop it, you can't do anything to this Motoyasu.
  For the world's sake, for my dear father's sake, for Firo-tan's sake, this Motoyasu will face everything.
- Dear father express his deepest gratitude when we reach plaza-town.
+ Even Itsuki and Ren became my enemy, or even if I must defeat God, I will never back down!
- I can saved him from Red Pig's conspiracy.
+
 "You shouldn't believe anything that witch says, Itsuki." (Motoyasu)
-"Kitamura-kun.... Frankly speaking, you have difficult and complex personality and I'm not too good with people like you. But you still believe in me." (Naofumi)
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  I know Itsuki won't believe me this time.
  However, there's still hope in Ren's case. He looks at me and Itsuki suspiciously.
- I see something unbelievable, he make embarassed expression while scratching his head, not to mention he said kind word to me.
+ I grab dear father's hand and leave the castle.
- Firo-tan's father thank me, highest honor!
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 "Thank you so much. Kitamura-kun!" (Naofumi)
 
  Dear father expresses his deepest gratitude when we reached the plaza-town.
- At first, he just called me 'Motoyasu' without any honorific, the way he call me right now, I feel distance.
+ I can save him from Red Pig's conspiracy.
 
 "Kitamura-kun.... Frankly speaking, you have a difficult and complex personality and I'm not too good with people like you. But you still believe in me." (Naofumi)
 "I am The Love Hunter from future. Dear father's word is absolute!" (Motoyasu)
 
  I saw something unbelievable, he made an embarrassed expression while scratching his head, not to mention he said kind words to me.
- He made troubled expression.
+ Firo-tan's father thanked me, Tis a great honor!
- It'll be strange if he call me, his future son-in-law with a honorific.
+
 "I have a request dear father, will you hear it?" (Motoyasu)
 
-"That is, what should I say.... It's very rude for me if I act over-familiar to the only person who believed in me." (Naofumi)
+ At first, he just called me 'Motoyasu' without any honorific, the way he calls me right now feels a little distant.
  Which means....
 
-"That 'kun' is unnecessary, you just call me 'Motoyasu'." (Motoyasu)
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-"Ermhh.... Sorry, I'll call you that later as time goes on." (Naofumi)
+
 
- He held himself and show unnecessary manner.
+ He made a troubled expression.
- Hummm... I felt like some self-punishment or guilt, that over-familiar thing is make me happy you know~.
+ It'll be strange if he calls me, his future son-in-law with an honorific.
- Now I really forget about it, his appearance is pitiful.
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- He only use his underwear.
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 "That is, how should I say it.... It's would be very rude of me if I act over-familiar to the only person who believed in me." (Naofumi)
- That Red Pig take everything from dear father!
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 "Is, that so? Okay then, Motoyasu...kun" (Naofumi)
- Yep, let's do that.
+"That 'kun' is unnecessary, you can just call me 'Motoyasu'." (Motoyasu)
 "Ermhh.... Sorry, I'll call you that later as time goes by." (Naofumi)
- He always smile when Red Pig in grave situation.
+
  He held himself and showed unnecessary manner.
  Hummm... I feel a little self-punishment or guilt, that over-familiar thing is make me happy you know~.
  I completely forgot about it but, his appearance is sure is pitiful.
  He only has his underwear.
- When I go back to castle, he stopped me.
+
- A troubled and worried expression on his face.
+ That Red Pig took everything from dear father!
  What should I do? Go back to castle and murder that Red Pig?
  Yes, let's do that.
-"Why you go back to castle?" (Naofumi)
+
-"Ha Ha Ha, you say obvious thing, sir. I just passing by to take back all your stolen stuff while murder that Red Pig on the way. Nay, I promise it'll be quick. If Itsuki and Ren get in my way I'll beat them mercilessly and left them barely alive. RIGHTEOUSNESS IS TO US!" (Motoyasu)
+ He always smiles when Red Pig in a grave situation.
-"Hi!? He, hey, Motoyasu-kun. I'm alright, it's okay now.... yep..." (Naofumi)
+
 "Please wait here for a while." (Motoyasu)
- He frightened at my words. After a while, he see castle behind us in distant eyes.
+
 
- Before, he made delight expression when saw Red Pig's torture in Fobrey King's hand.
+ When I tried to go back to the castle, he stopped me.
- Oh, now I understand. I know he is good person at heart, he just lost his kindness because this world keep betray him.
+ A troubled and worried expression hangs on his face.
- Maybe that's the reason Firo-tan grow up as a wonderful angel.
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 "Do you need something?" (Motoyasu)
 "Why are you going back to the castle?" (Naofumi)
-"You don't want it? If you wish, I can do it from here and annihilate entire throne room in an instant. Less Trash and Witch make the world better place." (Motoyasu)
+"Ha Ha Ha, Isn't it obvious, sir. I'm just gonna pass by to take back all of your stolen stuff while murdering that Red Pig in the process. Don't worry, I promise it'll be quick. If Itsuki and Ren gets in my way I'll beat them mercilessly and left them barely alive. RIGHTEOUSNESS IS TO US!" (Motoyasu)
-"Just leave them be.... I believe that Motoyasu-kun can do that thing. But still.... just leave them be. I'm okay...." (Naofumi)
+"Hi!? He, hey, Motoyasu-kun. I'm alright, it's okay now.... yeah..." (Naofumi)
-"What is this compassionate heart.... Motoyasu's tears can't stop, your mercy deeper than ocean!" (Motoyasu)
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-"Wha, people watch us, please stop it. I'm really okay, so please stop it!" (Naofumi)
+ He's frightened at my words. After a while, he see the castle behind us with distant eyes.
  This kindness, this is unthinkable.
- I give my salute while tears flow from my eye. Passerby start crowd around us wondering what's wrong with me.
+ Before, he made a delighted expression when he saw Red Pig's torture in Fobrey King's hand.
- Dear father really need to fix his shyness.
+ Oh, now I understand. From the very start, he is a good person at heart. He just lost his kindness because this world kept on betray him.
  Maybe that's the reason why Firo-tan grow up as a wonderful angel.
-"But.... Dear father. You walk just in underwear is unbefitting for you." (Motoyasu)
+
 
-"Rest easy. Here, please use this money." (Motoyasu)
+"You don't want it? If you wanted to, I can go right now and annihilate the entire throne room in an instant. Withouth Trash and Witch the world would be a better place." (Motoyasu)
 "Just leave them be.... I believe that Motoyasu-kun can do that. But still.... just leave them be. I'm okay...." (Naofumi)
 "What is this compassionate heart.... Motoyasu's tears can't stop, your mercy deeper than the ocean itself!" (Motoyasu)
 "Wha, people are watching us! Please stop it. I'm really okay, so please stop it!" (Naofumi)
- He open the pouch and shocked at my action.
+
- There's less money there because I bought philorial-sama, but there's more than enough for his armor.
+ I give my salute while tears flow from my eye. Passersby start crowding around us wondering what's going on.
  Dear father really needs to fix his shyness.
 
 "But.... Dear father. Walking around just in your underwear is unbefitting for you." (Motoyasu)
-"Ha Ha Ha, not a slightest trouble." (Motoyasu)
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-"I mean... Seriously, what do mean with not a slightest trouble?" (Naofumi)
+"Dont worry about that. Here, please use this money." (Motoyasu)
 "Eh? You sure!?" (Naofumi)
 
  I hand the pouch to him.
- He take half coin from the pouch and return the rest.
+ He opened the pouch shocked at my actions.
  There's less money there now because I bought a philorial-sama, but there should be more than enough for his armor.
 
 "Don't hesitate, just use it. I am your friend you know." (Motoyasu)
 "But if you don't have any money, what would you do? I will troublesome for you." (Naofumi)
 "Ha Ha Ha, not in the slightest." (Motoyasu)
- I lead him in castle-town's road, he hasn't accustomed to this world yet.
+"I mean... Seriously, what do mean with not in the slightest?" (Naofumi)
 "Ha Ha Ha" (Motoyasu)
 "Don't answer me with a smile. And... Thank you. I'll borrow half from you." (Naofumi)
 
  He took half of the coins from the pouch and returned the rest.
  As one would expect from dear father. He is very modest.
- The storekeeper glare at us. He show troubled expression because he didn't know why he treated like this.
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 "Now let's buy your equipment!" (Motoyasu)
 "O.. okay." (Naofumi)
-"I heard it, you rape your comrade. Let me give you one punch." (Oldman)
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  I lead him in castle-town's road, he's still not accustomed to this world yet.
  And we arrived at his long good acquaintance's place, Oldman's weapon shop.
-"You're right. But you mistaken about one thing. Dear father never rape his comrade!" (Motoyasu)
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-"I didn't ask you. I ask that boy over there." (Oldman)
+
 "Uuu...." (Naofumi)
 
- Dear father started irritated with this treatment and he stare back at Oldman.
+ The storekeeper glares at us. He shows troubled expression because he didn't know why he was treated like this.
- After glare at him for a while, Oldman give deep sight and lost his hostility.
+
 
 "I heard it, you rape your comrade. Let me give you a punch." (Oldman)
 "That's wrong!" (Motoyasu)
-"Honestly, I feel something off from her when you came with her. I can guess what kind of customer I have, call it merchant's intuition." (Oldman)
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 "That's right. But you mistaken about one thing. Dear father never raped his comrade!" (Motoyasu)
-"Moreover... What kind of criminal walk in daylight with underwear? They will run right away after finished with their crime." (Oldman)
+"I didn't ask you. I asked that boy over there." (Oldman)
 "I... Didn't do it." (Naofumi)
 
  Dear father started to feel irritated with this treatment as he stares back at Oldman.
  After glaring at him for a while, Oldman give deep sigh and lost his hostility.
 
 "I suppose that's true. Shield-boy isn't the one who will do something like that." (Oldman)
-"My wish is dear father choose armor you like with this money." (Motoyasu)
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-"Motoyasu-kun, that is rest of your money...." (Naofumi)
+"Honestly, I felt something off from her when you came with her. I can guess what kind of customer I have, call it merchant's intuition." (Oldman)
 "Oldman....." (Naofumi)
 "Moreover... What kind of criminal walks in broad daylight with just his underwear? They would have ran right away after they finished their crime." (Oldman)			Note : Oyaji, the only man in that damn country to have an actual working brain!
-"This is complicated.... But I know both of you are good friend." (Storekeeper)
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 "And? What do you want to do with that appearance?" (Oldman)
- The storekeeper seems understand our situation and change his attitude to us. He start find appropriate armor for dear father.
+
 
  I hand the pouch to him.
 
 "Dear father, choose an armor you like with this money." (Motoyasu)
- He make very stern expression. Refusing chain mail's offer, he choose armor instead.
+"Motoyasu-kun, that is the rest of your money...." (Naofumi)
- This is inevitable to feel resentment wearing something similar that has been lost before.
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 "Don't answer me with a smile." (Naofumi)
 "This is complicated.... But I guess both of you are good friends." (Storekeeper)
 
  The storekeeper seems understand our situation and changed his attitude towards us. He starts rustling up appropriate armor for dear father.
- His consciousness told him to not be greedy bastard and he return half money he receive to me.
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 "I have another chain mail for you. Do you want it? You got it rough, I'll give you service." (Oldman)
-"I don't really mind if you take everything, just telling." (Motoyasu)
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-"If I don't do it, it'll weight my mind." (Naofumi)
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-"Then, what you boys want to do after this?" (Oldman)
+ He makes a very stern expression. Refusing the offered chain mail, he choose armor instead.
-"I already strong and I don't have particular thing to do. My first priority is help dear father getting stronger." (Motoyasu)
+ Its only natural to feel resentment wearing something that has been stolen before.
 
-"I keep forgetting that..... Still, unlocking weapon need material from hunting." (Motoyasu)
+
-"Then how about Motoyasu-kun gather unlocking material, I will practice your reinforcement method while grind alone?" (Naofumi)
+
-"I think that's our best course for now." (Motoyasu)
+
-"Yep, we'll be together for a while right." (Naofumi)
+ His consciousness must have told him not to be a greedy bastard and he returns half the money he receive to me.
-"Of course! At your command dear father." (Motoyasu)
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 "I don't really mind if you take everything, just saying." (Motoyasu)
- I bow my head to show I swore my loyalty to him.
+"If I don't do it, it'll bother me." (Naofumi)
 "Then, what do you boys plan to do after this?" (Oldman)
 "Since I'm already strong and I don't have particular thing to do. My first priority is to help dear father get stronger." (Motoyasu)
 "Didn't you say before that heroes can't hunt together?" (Naofumi)
 "Ah, I keep forgetting about that..... Still, unlocking weapon need material from hunting." (Motoyasu)
-"And kept increasing misunderstanding...." (Naofumi)
+"Then how about Motoyasu-kun gather unlocking material, Should I practice your reinforcement method while grinding alone?" (Naofumi)
 "I think that's our best course of action for now." (Motoyasu)
- Dear father muttering something and make a deep sigh.
+"Yeah, we'll be together for a while right." (Naofumi)
 "Of course! I'm at your command dear father." (Motoyasu)
 
  I bow my head to show him that I swore my loyalty to him.
  Then he makes that troubled expression again and step back a little.
 
 "Motoyasu-kun, please stop it!" (Naofumi)
-"Hmm? Spear-boy, is that some monster egg?" (Oldman)
+
-"Yes, philorial-sama egg sir." (Motoyasu)
+"....And more misunderstanding" (Naofumi)
-"The bird who pull wagon, right?" (Naofumi)
+
  Dear father mutters something and make a deep sigh.
  Suddenly I felt some change in incubator.
 
 "Mu..." (Motoyasu)
- Egg's movement getting more visible, there's a little crack in the one place. The crack getting bigger, and this child hatched.
+
  I take out the incubator and put it on shop's counter.
 
 "Hmm? Spear-boy, is that a monster egg?" (Oldman)
- Philorial-sama greet me with energetic voice.
+"Yes, A philorial-sama egg sir." (Motoyasu)
 "The bird that pulls wagons, right?" (Naofumi)
 "Yes, same divine bird species like Firo-tan." (Motoyasu)
 "Heee~... So this is Motoyasu-kun's favorite monster." (Naofumi)
 "YES!" (Motoyasu)
- This child already have Monster Crest engraved on its body.
+
- Monster that raised from egg have tendency to follow the master until the end.
+ Egg's movement gets more visible, there's a little crack in the egg. The crack gets bigger, and this child hatched.
- Needless to say, that's bond between philorial-sama and me. Together until death come.
+
 "Pii!" (Kuro)
 
  Philorial-sama greet me with an energetic voice.
  ――――black... This kid is a male.
- I didn't got Firo-tan.
+
- But it can't be helped.
+
 
  This child already has a Monster Crest engraved on its body.
  Monsters that are raised from an egg have tendency to follow the master until the end.
  Needless to say, that's the bond between philorial-sama and me. Together until death comes.
-"You give name color-based? It's too simple..." (Naofumi)
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 "Uwaaaa.... Cute. Motoyasu..kun? What's with that disappointment face?" (Naofumi)
 "I'm not disappointed at all." (Motoyasu)
 
- I will find Firo-tan no matter what and I will buy all those monster merchant have. Right now, I got black philorial-sama. Not a big deal.
+ I didn't get Firo-tan.
- The most important thing when giving name is chemistry.
+ But I guess it can't be helped.
- But if dear father want to give another name, it'll be okay.
+
 
-"If you didn't like that name.... Oh yea, is 'Black Thunder' good enough?" (Motoyasu)
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 "Your name is... You're black, so your name is 'Kuro-chan'" (Motoyasu)
 "You gave his name based on color? It's too simple..." (Naofumi)
 
      [TLNOTE: Yet, Firo's name cames from "philorial -> philo -> Firo"]
- I'm sure he will grow into good angel.
+
  I will find Firo-tan no matter what and I will buy all those monsters the merchant has if I have to. Right now, I got a black philorial-sama. Not a big deal.
-"Now we have new comrade." (Motoyasu)
+ The most important thing is when giving name gives chemistry.
-"Not a pet?" (Naofumi)
+ But if dear father wants to give it another name, it'll be okay.
 
-"Motoyasu-kun is incredible, in a many ways." (Naofumi)
+"If you didn't like that name.... Oh yeah! How does 'Black Thunder' sound?" (Motoyasu)
-"Anyway, this Motoyasu will devote myself for dear father and raising philorial-sama to make better future."
+
 "Pii!" (Kuro)
 
  With that, this child's name is decided, Kuro-chan.
  I'm sure he will grow into a good angel.
 
- Philorial-sama ride myself and we leave the castletown.
+"Now we have a new comrade." (Motoyasu)
 "Isn't that a pet?" (Naofumi)
 "Philorial-sama is a very reliable comrade. No, they are family!" (Motoyasu)
 "Motoyasu-kun is incredible, in a various ways." (Naofumi)
 "Anyway, this Motoyasu will devote myself to dear father and raising philorial-sama to make better future."
 "Good luck both of you. Shield-boy and Spear-boy." (Oldman)
 "Yes, I'll do my best." (Naofumi)
 "Let's go then~!" (Motoyasu)
 "Phii!" (Kuro)
 
  Philorial-sama ride me as we leave the castletown.