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 Mixnut's E04
 In Hinata's and Mami's case
 
 Producer
 
 (Today is is Mixnuts' third unit lesson...  Frankly, we don't get that much result from all previous lesson)
 
 (Today is Mixnuts' third unit lesson...  Frankly, we didn't get much results from all previous lessons.)
 
 Producer
 
 (Perhaps, It's because we always get into a problem every time we talk about stage performance....)
 
 (perhaps it's because we always get into problems every time we talk about the stage performance...)
 
 Producer
 
 ...Well then, I'll also join in the discussion today.  It's a high time we must decide on what kind of stage we want to make.
 
 ...Well then, I'll also join in the discussion today.  It's high time we decided on what kind of stage we want to make.
 
-not sure how to reconcile the usage of "must decide," and the idiom "it's high time."  I ended up leaving out must in this initial draft.  Please advise.
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 Even though I said that you could just leave it to me...  You need to have more faith in adult~.
 
 Even though I said that you could just leave it to me...  You need to have more faith in adults~.
 
 Producer
 
 Of coourse,  I have faith in you.  But we don't have much time left now...  Well then,  Let's begin!
 
 Of course I have faith in you.  But we don't have much time left now...  Well then, let's begin!
 
 Konomi
 
 Roger~...   Well then,  today is Hinata-chan and Mami-chan turn to talk about their idea.
 
 Roger~...  Well then, today's Hinata-chan's and Mami-chan's turn to talk about their ideas.
 
 
 Producer
 
 Just so you know Mami,  we can't do that robot thing.  So please keep it in the realm of possibility.
 
 Just so you know, Mami, we can't do that robot thing.  Please keep it in the realm of possibility.
 
 Mami
 
 Leave it to me,  Nii-chan!  Mami has come prepared~♪
 
 Mami
 
 ..Ah, but but~,  Mami idea is a very cool one,  So Hinapy,  you can speak your idea first~!
 
-..Ah, but but~,  Mami idea is a very cool one,  So Hinapii,  you can speak your idea first~!
+..Ah, but but~, Mami's idea is a very cool one so Hinapy, you can say your idea first~!
 
-..Ah, but but~, Mami's idea is a very cool one so Hinappi, you can say your idea first~!
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 Eh...U...umm~...
 
 Konomi
 
 Hinata-chan,  what wrong?  you can speak anything you have in mind.
 
 Hinata-chan, what's wrong?  You can say anything you have in mind.
 
 Hinata
 
 About that..., I...I...
 
 Hinita
 
 I never go to any live until I come to Tokyo....  So I can't come up with anything.
 
 I never went to any live until I came to Tokyo...  So I can't come up with anything.
 
 Hinata
 
 ...So you don't have to mind me,  and just listen to Mami-sensei's idea.
 
 ...So you don't have to mind me, just listen to Mami-sensei's idea.
 
 >Calling Mami sensei
 
 Mami
 
 Ehhh!  You should tell us your idea too Hinapy!
 
-Ehhh!  You should tell us your idea too Hinapii!
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 Ah...that's right!  Should Mami just think of something for Hinapy~?
 
-Ah...that's right!  Should Mami just think of something for Hinapii~?
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 Mami-chan, it wouldn't be Hinata-chan's idea then.
 
 Producer
 
 Hinata, if you can't think of anything that's fine, but could you at lest tell us your thoughts?  Everyone wants to hear it.
 
 Iku
 
 That's right!  Hinata-chan, I will do anything I can to help you!  Everything will be alright!
 
-That right!  Hinata-chan, I will do anything I can to help you!  So, everything will be alright!
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 See, Iku also gives her support...  Alright, let's all brainstorm to help Hinata come up with her own idea.
 
 Mami
 
 Oh!  That is a good idea~,  Nii-chan!  We didn't think for her but think together with her~!?
 
 Oh!  That's a good idea~ Nii-chan!  We don't think for her but think together with her~!?
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 Oh!  That's a good idea~ Nii-chan!  We can't think for her but we can think together with her~!?
 
 Minako
 
 If Hinata-chan will give us something to start with, we could think about it and turn it into an idea~♪
 
 Hinata
 
 Everyone!  ...Thank you.  I feel like I could think of something now if we all do it together.
 
 Producer
 
 It's decided then!   Alright, the thing that should give Hinata some ideas are...
 
 Choice
 
 Hinata's hometown
 The idol that Hinata look up to
 
 >Hinata's hometown
 
 
 Producer
 
 Could you tell us about your hometown?  I feel that's the key to let you come up with your own idea.
 
 Hinata
 
 My hometown?  Let's see, it's just a peaceful backwater place with nothing in it.
 
 Hinata
 
 There a field all around.  and my gramp and grandma farming on those field.
 
 There's a field all around, and my gramps and grams farm those fields.
 
 Minako
 
 Hm...!  I have an idea!  how about a live with veggies from Hinata's farm!?
 
 Hm..!  I have an idea!  How about a live with vegetables from Hinata's farm!?
 
-Hm..!  I have an idea!  How about a live with (veggies or vegetables) from Hinata's farm!?
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-Is that supposed to be stylistically "veggies," or "vegetables"?  "Veggies," really bothers me as a word, for some reason.
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 Minako...it looks like you want to take it in a cooking direction...  It's no good.
 
 Iku
 
 Hinata-chan, what's it like outside the farm?
 
 Hinata
 
 Um...,  there a flower blooming around the field.  Like a canola or a sunflower in the summer...
 
 Umm...  There's a flower blooming around the field, like a canola or a sunflower in the summer...
 
 Hinata
 
 ...Ah!  What about a live with blooming flowers?  Like decorate the hall with flowers...  △
 
 Hinata
 
 The audience could enjoy the smell and it would be pleasant to the eye as well!
 
 Konomi
 
 That is a really wonderful idea~!...  ah,  but that might be a bit tough for our budget.  Is it, Producer?
 
 That is a really wonderful idea~!  ...Ah, but that might be a bit tough on our budget.  Is it, Producer?
 
 Producer
 
 Well,  that true...  a plastic flower might be cheap,  but it don't give off any smell.
 
 Well, that's true...  A plastic flower might be cheap, but it doesn't give off any smell.
 OR
 Well, that's true...  A plastic flower might be cheap, but it doesn't have any smell.
 OR
 Well, that's true...  A plastic flower might be cheap, but it doesn't have any scent.
 OR
 Well, that's true...  A plastic flower might be cheap, but it doesn't have a smell.
 
 Hinata
 
 I see...  It's couldn't be help then...  But I can't think of anything else,  so let's hear Mami-sensei idea.
 
 I see...  It couldn't be helped then...but I can't think of anything else, so let's hear Mami-sensei's idea.
 
 Mami
 
 Roger understood,  Hinapy!  It's alright!  you will be excited too when you hear about Mami's pudding~♪*
 
 Roger, understood, Hinapy!  It's alright!  You'll be excited too when you hear about Mami's pudding~♪
 
-Roger understood,  Hinapii!  It's alright!  you will be excited too when you hear about Mami's pudding~♪*
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-Roger, understood, Hinapii!  It's alright!  You'll be excited too when you hear about Mami's pudding~♪
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 Really, Mami-sensei...!?  I'm already excited for it.
 
 Producer
 
 It's not "pudding" but a "plan", though...  Anyway, I have high hopes for you, Mami!  And that imagination of yours...!
 
 Konomi
 
 ..Well, Mami-chan, surprise Producer with that great idea of yours!
 
 Mami
 
 Our live....,  what a surprise!   Will be held in space!!  Space!!
 
 Everypne & P
 
 S...space!!!?
 
 Iku
 
 Eh, is that true!?  We could go to space!?
 
 Minako
 
 This is...!  Leave the space food to me!!  I will create a perfect one that won't lose any of it taste or texture!
 
 Hinata
 
 As expected from Mami-sensei...!  You have more ambition than me...!
 
 Mami
 
 Nfufu~, isn't it a great idea!?  Mami's talent could surpass even herself~!!*
 
 want to say surprise but said this instead
 
 Mami
 
 Well!?  Konomin and Nii-chan!  You could approve Mami's pudding right away if you want!?
 
 Konomi
 
 Rejected.
 
 Mami
 
 Ehhhhhhhh~~~!?  Why~!  Isn't it cool to hold a live in space!?
 
 Producer
 
 Of course, it's because it's many times more expensive than Hinata's flowers, there's no way we could do it with our budget!
 
 Konomi
 
 ...And even if we could hold a live in space, the fans won't be able to follow us there, right?
 
 Mami
 
 That....that might be true~!  But Mami thought really hard and thought that this would be a great idea...
 
 Mami
 
-That....That might be true~!  but Mami thought really hard and thought that this would be a great idea...
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 Konomi
 
 I...It can't be helped...  as a leader I have to think about whether it could really be done or not...!
 
 Mami
 
 even so~!  Mami think really hard about it and you just turn it down like that~!!  why don't you just decide it all by yourself then!
 
 Even so~!  Mami thought really hard about it and you just turn it down like that~!!  Why don't you just decide it all by yourself then!
 
 Konomi
 
 Ugh...  ...A...alright!!
 
 Konomi
 
 I just have to come up with a fresh and smart idea befitting a leader that everyone can agree on right?
 
 Konomi
 
 ...Give me one week!  I only need that long to come up with an idea that could please everyone!
 
 Producer
 
 Is that mean...  you want to bear it all alone?  I'll help you too,  Konomi-san!
 
 Does that mean...  You want to bear it all alone?  I'll help you too Konomi-san!
 
 Konomi
 
 I...it's alright, Producer! I'm a leader and an adult...
 
 Konomi
 
 Everyone!  look forward to it!!..well then,  this is all for today!!
 
 Everyone!  Look forward to it!! ...well then, this is all for today!!
 
 (door close)
 
 Hinata
 
 ...Ah~  Konomi-san ran out of the room.
 
 Producer
 
 Um~...,  it couldn't be help.  we have to believe in Konomi-san and wait until next week!
 
 Um~..., it couldn't be helped.  We have to believe in Konomi-san and wait until next week!
 
 Man, these japanese writers really love that "it couldn't/can't be helped," phrase.
 
 Producer
 
 (...Even though I said that to everyone,  will she really be alright?  um~...I'm worry...)
 
 (...Even though I said that to everyone, will she really be alright?  Um~...I'm worried...)
 
 >The idol that Hinata looks up to
 
 Producer
 
 Hinata, what kind of idol you look up to?
 
 Hinata
 
 An idol I look up to...?
 
 Producer
 
 That right.  if you could tell us about it,  we might be able to create a stage that Hinata really want.
 
 That's right.  If you could tell us about it we might be able to create a stage that Hinata really wants.
 
 Hinata
 
 Um...we don't have many TV channel back in the countryside,  so I don't know anything about idol until i came here.
 
 Um...we don't have many TV channels back in the countryside so I didn't know anything about idols until I came here.
 
 Hinata
 
 That why it really surprise me when I came here and meet a real idol and everyone at the theater.
 
 That's why it really surprised me when I came here and met a real idol and everyone at the theater.
 
 Hinata
 
 since there a lot of beautiful girl here!
 
 Since there are a lot of beautiful girls here!
 
 Producer
 
 (Oh,  this feel like it could lead to a great idea.  Keep it up,  Hinata!)
 
 (Oh, this feels like it could lead to a great idea.  Keep it up Hinata!)
 
 Konomi
 
 Fufu...tell me more,  Hinata-chan!
 
 Mami
 
 You could praise Mami more~ if you want!
 
 Hinata
 
 The idol that I look up to, is really Takane-ojousan that I met at that time...
 
 ojousama?  Or is ojousan also valid.  I don't know my way around honorifics.
 
 Hinita
 
 She gorgeous and refined,  and her silver look just like the river of heaven.*
 
 She's gorgeous and refined and her silver hair looks like all the stars in the sky.
 
 The milky way.  I just think river of heaven sound more fitting for describe Takane's hair. but just change it to milky way if you think it more fitting.
 
 Mami
 
 Ah,  so you mean Ohime-ching....  well, I agree though~.
 
 Ah, so you mean Ohime-ching...  well, I agree though~.
 
 Konomi
 
 Gununu....  Looks like we're not the one she really looks up to.
 
 Hinata
 
 Ehehe, everyone is beautiful too but it really surprised me when I met Takane-ojousan for the first time.
 
 Hinata
 
 She's really in a different league from me.  Takane-ojouchan is beautiful like a flower...
 
 Producer
 
 beautiful like a flower,  huh....  Takane indeed as beautiful as a flower that bloom under the moonlight...that might sound too romantic for me.
 
 Beautiful like a flower, huh...  Takane is indeed as beautiful as a flower that blooms under the moonlight...  That might sound too romantic for me.
 
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