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 … Mami
 
 Mami-chan…
 
 Ehehe,
 
 Take it easy
 
 
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-But Mami, your face is blushing.
+But Mami, your face is flushed.
 
-I was running for a while.
+I'd been running for a while.
 < meaningless  words >
 
 Eh
 
-<As I thought>
+<Like I thought>
 Mami… you…
 
 
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 Nii-chan…
 
 Knock knock
 
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 765Pro, please standby for rehearsal.
 O-Okay!
 
 Producer!?
 
 Yukiho, Yayoi
-Can you two go ahead and do a rehearsal?
+Can you two go ahead and do the rehearsal?
 
 Eh!?
 Just us two!?
 
 
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-That would be too much for Mami.
+That'd be too much for Mami.
 
-I want you to take a short rest.
+I want you to rest for a bit.
 
-Do a rehearsal as if Mami was there.
+Do the rehearsal as if Mami was there.
 I'll explain it to the staff.
 
 Mami…
 Mami-chan…
 
 
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 Sorry, Yukipyon, Yayoicchi
 
 Let me take a break
-I'll recover shortly.
+I'll recover soon.
 
 Umm, got it, Mami-chan.
 Leave it to us!
 
-Alright, we're pushed for time, so let's go.
+Alright, we're short on time, so let's go.
 Okay!
 
 
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 Thank you… Nii-chan
 
-Cool your head down with this bottle, and drink this one
+Use this bottle to cool your head and drink the other one
-Take lots of moisture
+Drink a lot of liquids
 Nii-chan…
 
 Mami, can you make it?
 
 Sure thing!
 I told you I'm a professional!
 
 
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 Great
 
 I'll talk to the staff.
-<Have a good rest>
+<Rest well>
 Aye, aye, sir !
 
 Haa…
 
 
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 Good work. That's all for today.
 
-Seems like we're able to finish early once in a while.
+It seems like we're able to finish early once in a while.
 
 Ami-chan, what's wrong? You don't look well.
 Eh!?
 
 You must be worried about Mami-chan, right?
 N-No way
 Ami is always ultra powerful
 
-Brrrrr
+Brrrrring
 
 
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 Hi hi, Mami!?
 Fufu, she was waiting for it.
-Well, you two please make up quickly.
+Well, you two, please make up quickly.
 
 What do you want?
-We're in the middle of war, remember?
+We're in the middle of a war, remember?
 
 … Ami … … Emergency …
 
 
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-Alright, rehearsal is done
+Alright, rehearsal's done
 
 Producer !
 How is Mami-chan !?
 Ah…
 
 Thanks for your work
 
 Ritsuko!
 
 Iori-chan
 Azusa-san
 
 What's this?
-We happened to work nearby by chance…
+We happened to be working near here, by chance…
 
 
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 Mami !
 
 … Ami …
 
-Sorry, I'll have to call ceasefire for now
+Sorry, I'll have to call for a ceasefire now
 Mami!!
 
 This is an emergency, right?
 Umm…
 
 
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 Ami?
 Yeah
 
-She said she wanted to go see Mami no matter what
+She said that no matter what, she had to go see Mami
 
 Ah
 
 Mami, are you okay !?
-Restoration completed
+Completed restored
 
-Ami-chan is here too.
+Ami-chan's here too.
 Yep
 
-They were still fighting just a while ago.
+They were just fighting a little while ago.
 
 
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 Eh?
 Fight?
-We just agreed on ceasefire mediation
+We just agreed to a ceasefire mediation
-We can't keep on fighting forever.
+We can't keep fighting forever.
 
 That's what I figured.
 Ufufu, I knew they'd get along
 
 But Mami-chan, are you really all right ?
 
-I got better after we made up
+I got better after we made up.
-Is that what they call the mysterious power of twins?
+Is this what they call the mysterious power of twins?
 
 <That's a relief>
 <I was so worried>
 
 
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-Well then, please begin the performance
+Well then, please start the performance
 
 Mami
 
 Is everything okay?
-It's the reverse of what you saw.
+It's mirrored from what you saw.
 
 I told you I got it.
 
 
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 [TL note: Yukiho kawaii]
 
 
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 All done !
 
 Good job!
 That was perfect, wasn't it?
 
 Yep! Perfect!
 
 Good job
 
 
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 Ami
 
 Eh
 
 
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 Ahh.. I thought it was flawless
 How did you notice ?
 
-Even our mom and dad couldn't have recognized.
+Even our mom and dad couldn't have recognized us.
 Haha, that's because...
 
-I'm your producer
+I'm your producer.
 
 You can tell if you look hard enough
 Mami is Mami, and Ami is Ami.
 
 
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-Also, your parents should be able to see through if they really look hard.
+I'm sure your parents would be able to see through it too, if they looked carefully.
 
 <Ehe>
 <Shh, we're no match for you>
 
 Eh?
 
 Mami-chan? Eh?
 What is this?
 
 [ Don't think this will be typeset, but I'll translate it anyway ]
 <
 We're truly sorry.
-Because Mana-sensei had a sudden illness, this chapter is finished here.
+Because Mana-sensei had a sudden illness, this chapter finished early.
-Mami's epilogue will continue next chapter.
+Mami's epilogue will continue in the next chapter.
 >