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 Revised JailBreakHub announcement post.
 
 #Table of Contents
 
 ##Introduction
 ##Mission Statement
 ##Risks and Concerns
 ##We are looking for writers
 ##Links
 
 #Introduction
 
-The JailBreakHub team is proud to announce the launch of our project. We came together with a shared vision; a group of individuals with their own sets of knowledge and experience all working toward the same goals could benefit the community. Alone, we are all separate members of but as a whole we can offer something of value.
+The JailBreak Hub team is proud to announce the launch of our project. We came together with a shared vision; a group of individuals with their own sets of knowledge and experience all working toward the same goals could benefit the community. Alone, we are all separate members, but as a whole, we can offer something of value.
 
 The core staff has over 10 years of combined experience in jailbreaking our own devices and helping others online and in person. There are developers, designers, bloggers, and podcasters who have all been involved in the community since at least iOS 4. Many of us have beta tested several dozen tweaks over the course of the years.
 
-We're launching a website that will function as a source of news, tutorials, reviews, and explainers curated by your fellow redditors. We have also created a forum for people who can't or don't want to use reddit for whatever reason. Developers can also host on our repository if they'd like. Our YouTube channel will focus on tutorials and news as well as taking requests from the community with what kind of videos they'd like to see. JailCast will be joining us as well to provide podcast content with the help of the team. We will offer end user support across our entire platform as well as Twitter, Facebook and Discord.
+We're launching a website that will function as a source of news, tutorials, reviews, and explainers curated by your fellow Redditors. We have also created a forum for people who can't or don't want to use Reddit for whatever reason. For a limited time, Developers can also host on our repository and receive free tweak support from our team. Any problems will be handled by our team, if the problem is in the code, you will be sent error logs and other info that will aid the processes of you fixing it. Our YouTube channel will focus on tutorials and news as well as taking requests from the community with what kind of videos they'd like to see. JailCast will be joining us as well to provide podcast content with the help of the team. We will offer end user support across our entire platform as well as Twitter, Facebook, and Discord.
 
-We hope to benefit the larger community outside of reddit while complimenting the sub as well. A lot of us are hardcore redditors and spend way too much time here, we don't want it to go anywhere fast. But at the same time, while it's a great site in its many ways it does have its own issues and potential future considerations as well.
+We hope to benefit the larger community outside of Reddit while complimenting the sub as well. A lot of us are hardcore Redditors and spend way too much time here, we don't want it to go anywhere fast. But at the same time, while it's a great site in its many ways it does have its own issues and potential future considerations as well.
 
-For instance, reddit is owned by [Advance Publications](https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advance_Publications) who has over 20,000 employees. Who's to say that they have the communities best interests at heart? Or if they are acquired by another company who does god knows what. What if Spez is editing comments here? ;P
+For instance, Reddit is owned by [Advance Publications](https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advance_Publications) who has over 20,000 employees. Who's to say that they have the communities best interests at heart? Or if they are acquired by another company who does god knows what. What if Spez is editing comments here? ;P
 
-A Jailbreak community site ideally should be owned and operated by jailbreakers. There are indeed some of these and they are great, JailbreakQA, iPhoneDevWiki and ModMyi forums to name the a few. But these are all separately operated by different teams with different goals. We believe that a unified end user experience would be a better solution, so here we are putting our money where our mouth is, so to speak.
+A Jailbreak community site ideally should be owned and operated by jailbreakers. There are indeed some of these and they are great, JailbreakQA, iPhoneDevWiki, and ModMyi forums to name a few. But these are all separately operated by different teams with different goals. We believe that a unified end user experience would be a better solution, so here we are putting our money where our mouth is, so to speak.
 
 #Mission Statement
 
-Our mission is to deliver clickbait free content that is informative, thoughtful, and engaging in a friendly environment. With a passion for advertising ethics we will do our best to have as minimal advertisements as possible. We will also offer support to users and detailed beta testing for developers.
+Our mission is to deliver clickbait free content that is informative, thoughtful, and engaging in a friendly environment. With a passion for advertising ethics, we will do our best to have as minimal advertisements as possible. We will also offer support to users and detailed beta testing for developers.
 
 #Risk and Concerns
 
 * We might fracture the community even more.
 
-The community is already fractured in some ways although not as much as it was in the past before Saurik cleaned house (thank you sir). Our team is dedicated to this community, we will work against the fracturing and attempt to build bridges between the sectors.
+The community is already fractured in some ways although not as much as it was in the past before Saurik cleaned house (thank you, sir). Our team is dedicated to this community, we will work against the fracturing and attempt to build bridges between the sectors.
 
-We are not opposed to working with existing sites and moderator teams to ensure cross pollination of ideas and support. It would only make sense to collaborate.
+We are not opposed to working with existing sites and moderator teams to ensure cross-pollination of ideas and support. It would only make sense to collaborate.
 
 * The team might lose interest or break apart for whatever reason. Having a third party might be better to be impartial and just providing the service.
 
 We are all incredibly passionate jailbreakers like you guys. Our team will be a growing, living, breathing thing. The structure we are setting up should be flexible enough to maneuver through the twists and turns the community takes.
 
 ##We are looking for writers
 
 Apply here: https://goo.gl/forms/D068hPjifZcxgGAN2
 
 #Links
 
 1. [Main Page/Blog](http://Jailbreakhub.org)
 2. [Forums](https://forums.jailbreakhub.org)
 3. [Twitter](https://twitter.com/Jailbreak_Hub)
 4. [Repo](https://repo.jailbreakhub.org)
 5. [Facebook](https://www.facebook.com/JailbreakHub)
 6. [Youtube](https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCxr_GwSVVz15lmTvlncuXjg)
 7. [Podcast](http://jailcast.xyz)
 
 #JailbreakHub Team:
 
-CDK2020 (Co-Director): Hi I'm Charlie, better known as CDK2020, and I am one of the directors at Jailbreak Hub. I love coding, in my free time you can find me making websites in php and NodeJS. I have been jailbreaking for almost 7 years. I'm very excited to help you all!
+CDK2020 (Co-Director): Hi I'm Charlie, better known as CDK2020, and I am one of the directors at Jailbreak Hub. I love coding, in my free time, you can find me making websites in PHP and NodeJS. I have been jailbreaking for almost 7 years. I'm very excited to help you all!
 
-Colburp (Lead Graphic Designer): Hi, my name is Landon (Colburp). I am the Lead Graphic Designer for Jailbreak Hub. I am a High School student with a passion for graphic design. I like trying new things and being creative. I specialize in Logos, Icons and other Digital Images!
+Colburp (Lead Graphic Designer): Hi, my name is Landon (Colburp). I am the Lead Graphic Designer for Jailbreak Hub. I am a High School student with a passion for graphic design. I like trying new things and being creative. I specialize in logos, icons, and other digital Images!
 
-Shaun (Lead of the YouTube team): Hi it's Shaun from Jailbreak Hub! I'm an 18 year old college student majoring in Health medicine and in love with Apple and their products. Although they do have their limitations, I have gained a vast amount of knowledge from personal experience and classes about Apple and it's technologies along with the large world of jailbreaking. Talk to me about anything tech and science related and I'll turn into the biggest nerd you've seen! I look forward to hear from you all and to answer any of your questions!
+Shaun (Lead of the YouTube team): Hi it's Shaun from Jailbreak Hub! I'm an 18-year-old college student majoring in Health medicine and in love with Apple and their products. Although they do have their limitations, I have gained a vast amount of knowledge from personal experience and classes about Apple and it's technologies along with the large world of jailbreaking. Talk to me about anything tech and science related and I'll turn into the biggest nerd you've seen! I look forward to hearing from you all and to answer any of your questions!
 
 Sergei (Management) My name is Sergei and I am a senior in high school. I have a passion for coding, as well as graphic design,content creation, editing, and web design. I also have a hard time choosing what I want to pursue :D. I have been jailbreaking since iOS 5 and am glad to have helped make this project come together.
 
 Josh (Co-founder and owner of JailCast): Josh has been indirectly involved in the jailbreak community on and off since Evasi0n 7 dropped and has been jailbreaking his own devices since iOS 4. He enjoys natural foods, gardening, good people, bad jokes, cold air and hot coffee.
 
 Erick (Yours Truly, Owner of JailbreakHub): I love helping people out, aside from learning how to code, this is how I spend my time. Jailbreaker since iOS 4. Currently a student in Computer Science in a college in NYC. Unrelated, but I just want to throw it out there, I love Family Guy. Send me some dope FG wallpapers if you got some.
 
 #Contact
 
 contact@jailbreakhub.org
 erick@jailbreakhub.org
 charlie@jailbreakhub.org (Email either Erick, Charlie or the contact email for anything about JB Hub)
 josh@jailbreakhub.org (Podcasts concerns)
 landon@jailbreakhub.org (Graphic concerns)
 shaun@jailbreakhub.org (Youtube concerns)