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 Mixnuts E09
 You're not alone
 
 Producer
 
 (Platinum Star Live 4th had ended in great success...! So we come to Satake restaurant for celebration.)
 
 (Platinum Star Live 4 has ended in great success...!  So we came to the Satake restaurant to celebrate.)
 
 Producer
 
 (..We sure did use Minako's place a lot...)
 
 Minako
 
 Wasshoi~♪  Thanks for waiting~!
 
 Minako
-I'll give you a lot of service today so please eat a lot~!
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 I'll give you a lot of extra service today so please eat a lot~!
-service?
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 Everyone
 
 Wow...!
 
 Mami
 
 I've been waiting for this~!  Mami feels like she could eat all of Minako's giga fried rice today~!
 
 Hinata
 
 I'm not good with spicy food though...  but Minako-san's food is an exception.
 
 Hinata
 
 I'll have some of Minako-san's Mapo doufu.*
 
 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mapo_doufu
 
 Iku
 
 Ah...!  Minako-san's omurice is even more spongy than the last time!
 
 Iku
 
 What should I do to make the eggs become like that...
 
 Minako
 
 Iku-chan, about the secret to cook an egg like that...  I'll teach you later!
 
 Iku
 
 Okay!  Thank you, Minako-san!
 
 Konomi
 
 Well, everyone, let's eat.  With gratitude to Minako-chan and Satake Restaurant...
 
 Everyone
 
 Let’s eat!~!
 
 Minako
 
 Have a nice meal~♪
 
 Producer
 
 (Everyone looks so happy eating.  I'll have some too...)
 
 Konomi
 
 Ufufu.  Look like everyone's in high spirits.
 
 Konomi
 
 Let's us do it an adult way, Producer. ...To the success of Platinum Star Live...  Cheers♪
 
 Producer
 
 Cheers...  Everyone, congratulations on the success of Platinum Star Live, it's all because of your efforts!
 
 Mami
 
 This is nothing (compared?) to the power of our friendship~!
-This much is nothing to the power of our friendship~!
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 Iku
-feels a little weird
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 I did worry about it...but it was a fun live!
 
 Hinata
 
 Me too.  The confetti was so beautiful, I won't forget it all my life.
 
 Producer
-Me too.  The confetti was so beautiful.  I will never forgot it all my life.
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 That's right.  I'm sure it'll be an unforgettable, memorable time for the fans too!
-Is she supposed to sound so stiff?
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 Minako
 
 It was a great live that made everyone smile♪
 
 Minako
 
 The "Special!  Satake Restaurant!" was a great success too....  I'm really satisfied♪
-It sure was a great live that everyone could enjoy♪
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 Konomi
-They all sound so stiff...
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 ...I'm glad that everyone is satisfied with the live.
 
 Producer
 
 It's because you gave it all of your effort...  I'm really grateful, Konomi-san.
 
 Konomi
 
 Producer...  It's me who has to be grateful.
 
 Konomi
 
 Thank you.  For believing in me...for believing in Mixnuts.
 
 Producer
 
 Konomi-san...
 
 Mami
 
 Oh? Well well well~?  Looks like Nii-cahn and Konomin are in a shady atmosphere~!?
 
 shady?
 
 Konomi
 
 Mami-chan...!
 
 Mami
 
 Nfufu~♪　 Let's mail it to Ami and Piyo-chan!
 
 Producerr
 
 W...wait, Mami!  Stop...please stop!
 
 Iku
 
 S..so this is what adult is like...
 
 S...so this is what being an adult is like...
 
 Hinata
 
 Isn't it a good thing to get along with each other~?
 
 Minako
-is that "this is what adulthood is like," or "this is what being (an) adult is like"
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 Mu, mumu...
 
 Minako
 
 Producer-san, have some jiaozi!  And here's some garlic fried rice and Ebi chili with a lot of garlic in it!
 
 Minako
 
 Here, please eat a lot!  You too, Konomi-san!
 
 Producer
 
 Eh!?  Mi..Minako?  Why did you give us a lot of food with garlic...!?
 
 Konomi
 
 My, these foods look like it'll go well with alcohol.  I'll have some♪... *gulp*  It's delicious!
 
 Producer
 
 You're an idol so please be careful when you eat food with garlic...  Well, I guess it's alright today.
 
 Producer
 
 Well then, I'll have some too...  It's delicious!
 
 (2 hours later...)
 
 Konomi
 
 My...  It's this late already?  Time flies when you're having fun.
 
 Producer
 
 That's true...  Well, let's end the party then.
 
 Producer
-My...  It's this late already?  good time sure flies by.
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 But before that...  Konomi-san.  Please do your final work as the leader of Mixnuts.
-good times sure fly by?  I don't know if there's an expression in English that preserves the present progressive structure.  Or was that something like "Goodness, time sure flies by"?
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 Konomi
 
 Oh, that's right...  Ahem.
 
 Konomi
 
 Everyone!  Thank you for your hard work these two months!  Because of you all the Platinum Star Live ends in great success.
 
 Konomi
 
 But there is something more important than the success of the live.  ...It's the fact that everyone's heart had become one via the Platinum Star Live.
 
 Konomi
 
 This experience, for you all...and for me as well...is a priceless treasure.
-Everyone!  Thank you for your hard work all these 2 months!  Because of you all the Platinum Star Live ends in great success.
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-we can keep "all," or keep "two," but we can't keep both
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 I'm sure you all will have to face countless obstacle after this.  But...
 
 Konomi
 
 When you do!  Remember these two months you spent as Mixnuts members.
 
 Konomi
 
 You all are not alone.  If you never forget that, I'm sure you'll be able to overcome all obstacles!
 
 Konomi
 
 ...I'm proud to be the leader of Mixnuts.  Thank you, everyone!
 
 Konomi
 
 Mixnuts might be disbanded today...but let's get along well after this too!
 
 Producer
-You all are not alone.  If you never forget that, I'm sure will be able to overcome all obstacles!
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 (Uuuu, I'm moved...)
 
 Mami
 
 Konomin, that sure is an adult's speech~.  ...It would be perfect if not for your garlic breath!
 
 Konomi
 
 M..my...  Look like I ate too much garlic...
 
 Producer
 
 ...Anyway!  The party is ended now.  Everyone, be careful when you go home!
 
 Mami
 
 Alright then, thanks for your work~!
 
 Iku
 
 It's making me feel a bit lonely but...  Bye bye!
 
 Hinata
 
 It would be great if we all could spend time together like this again...  See you later then.
 
 Minako
 
 ..Hmm?  Producer-san and Konomi-san, aren't you two going home as well?
 
 Producer
 
 We have been depending on you a lot... so I'll help with the cleaning before going home.
 
 Konomi
 
 Me too.  Just leave the dish washing and the cleaning to me!
 
 Minako
 
 Producer-san, Konomi-san...  Thank you so much♪
 
 Minako
 
 With three people, we can clean it all in no time~!
 
 Producer
 
 (Hah...  Because Minako and Konomi-san are good at cleaning we got it all done in no time.  Well, I will take my leave too)
 
 Producer
 
 Well then...  Let's take our leave too.
 
 Konomi
 
 U..um..Producer, please wait.
 
 Konomi
 
 Why don't we, two adults, go have some drinks together?  Let's do the after party♪
 
 Producer
 
 The after party...
 
 Choice
 go drink together
 invite everyone to the after party
 
 >go drink together
 
 Producer
 
 That sounds good, let's go then.  Where should we go...?
 
 Konomi
 
 Let see...  How about a darts bar?
 
 Producer
 
 Oh...  You can play darts too, Konomi-san?  I never know that.
 
 Konomi
 
 I played it a lot in university.  I also have my own personal darts♪
 
 Konomi
 
 Ah!  How about we have a contest?  The loser has to obey to the winner's orders!  ...Agree?
 
 Producer
 
 ...That sounds fun.  I accept!  I'm not so confident though...
 
 Konomi
 
 Alright~, the game is on then!  What should I order you to do if I win.
 
 Konomi
-Ah!  How about we have a contest?  The loser have to listen to the winner's order!...agree?
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 How about making you end every sentence with "sexy"?  Or.....  ...Fufu, I'm looking forward to see it, Producer♪
-should listen be more "obey"?  I suppose it's fine, but it's a little awkward for the average Americano.  These obedience games aren't (as far as I'm aware) that popular
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 Producer
 
 (After that, I'm utterly lose and have to suffer for it.)
 
 (After that, I lost utterly and had to suffer for it.)
 
 Producer
 
 (But I'm feel like the distance between Me and Konomi-san has getting even more closer)
 
 (But I feel like the distance between Konomi-san and me has been getting even more short.)
 
 Producer
 
 (These 2 months I had spent with "Mixnuts"...had been the most busy time, but it also the 2 months that I could the smiles of the unit's members the most...)△
 
 (These two months I've spent with Mixnuts...have been the busiest time, but it's also the two months that I could see the smiles of the unit members the most...)  △
 
 >invite everyone to the after party
-is that about right?
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 Producer
 
 We could always go drinking together any time.
 
 Producer
 
 Today is Mixnuts' last day.  If we will have an after party, let's invite everyone as well.
 
 Konomi
 
 Producer... ...You're right!
-(These two months I've spent with Mixnuts...have been the busiest time, but it's also the two months that I could (see?  there's a verb missing...) the smiles of the unit members the most...)
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 Konomi
 
 ...Ah~, but everyone might already in the train right now though...?
 
 Producer
 
 ...Well, I'll try to call Mami first.
 
 (Phone ringing)
 
 Producer
 
 Hello, Mami?
 
 Mami
 
 Ah, Nii-chan!  Hello hello!  What happened?
 
 Producer
 
 Actually...,  I know you all already left, but if you don't mind how about we all do the after party together?
 
 Mami
 
 Ah, I see~!  Actually, Mami and Ikurin and Hinapy are at the bowling alley right now~!
 
 Mami
 
 We just talked about inviting you two too, what good timing~!
 
 Producer
 
 I see.  Well, I'll head there with Konmi-san and Minako right now.
 
 Mami
 
 Mami have to warn you though, the one who scores the fewest points will have to face a scary punishment game!
 
 Mami
 
 ...Ah, Nii-chan, as a handicap you will have to start with minus 200 points alright?
 
 Producer
 
 Please don't be too hard on me....  Well then, I'll see you in a minute.
 
 (Phone hang up)
 
 Producer
 
 Konomi-san, looks like everyone is at a bowling alley right now.  Let's invite Minako and join them there.
 
 Konomi
 
 Alright!...  Let's make Mixnuts' final memory together with everyone♪
 
 Producer
 
 (After that, even though I have to gone though a lot of hardship at the after party..."Mixnuts" last day had ended with everyone smile)
 
 (After that, even though I had to go through a lot of hardship at the after party...  Mixnuts' last day has ended with everyone smiling.)
 
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