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iVictus' Spark review!

Oct 26th, 2015
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  1. Hi iVictus.
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  3. SO I know you probably think I'm going to say the usual things, but I'm going to try not to.
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  5. Your plot honestly has loads of potential. I like the shape of the terrain, I like the idea and the floating things. You just need some more help. In regards to the actual terrain, use two more blocks to help add variety. One white one light grey would be fine. Patches and random blocks both work.
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  7. Add maybe an alien spaceship or an abandoned underwater town made of stone or the green stone stuff.Either works. Maybe an underwater sea base? I like the detail on the large column on the corner.
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  9. More sea weed, more jelly fish would be cool too.
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  11. Just try on those and we will see how it looks yeah?
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  13. Good luck!
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