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Shan's Draft for Beginning Arrival Arc

Apr 15th, 2014
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  1. Draft for beginning:
  2. Pods are traveling through space at incredible speeds, from the planet “Infinitum” to Earth.
  3. 100 pods are being sent to all corners of the globe, each landing in their own destinations.
  4. Seifuku, the main protagonist, emerges from his pod, which landed in Japan.
  5. He exits it slowly, looking in various directions to get attuned to his environment.
  6. He walks through a forest cautiously, and looks around.
  7. Seifuku hears a crack.
  8. He, while turning, immediately, forms swords; in fact misshapen swords.
  9. Showing a face of disapproval from his lack of skill and the fact that there was no threat.
  10. He then proceeds to continue his scope of the area.
  11. He enters upon a small village with the last remaining population of Japan. There, he basically meets with someone from a village and is welcomed. (In here, we have Seifuku feel new to "having a bond with someone". As in, he develops his first bond). He then decides to stay. Someone, later, is out to hunt for food. Seifuku insists that he do it. When he comes back, everyone is killed except for the first person he met-his first bond, but he doesn’t know that yet. He then runs to his house and he is being held by AN INFINITE 8 member and is slit on the throat right before Seifuku's eyes. Seifuku is horrified. He gasps for air and falls to the ground, having a minor recurrence to before he went out to hunt; thinking 'I should have stayed' and 'I could have protected them before this happened!' The Infinite 8 says something and Seifuku looks at him. His face of grief then intensifies to a fit of rage and anger and he yells like you wouldn't believe. He remarkably makes a perfect sword (in fact, a thick sword like I drew today, not his regular ones, because they are bigger, marking how powerful he is) because of his great anger, and ""teleports"" past the Infinite 8 member. His sword then dematerializes, and as soon as that happens, the Infinity gushes out blood and dies. You then see Seifuku standing with such an emotionless expression, with his previous tears on his face, still there.
  12. Fades to black…
  13. Then you see Seifuku kneeling and then standing in front of a graveyard of 500 graves.
  14. He then proceeds to the beach on a boat he built and lays down in it. He then rows it into the ocean..
  15. End of Chapter 1.
  16. By the way, I want to make a little change. The Infinite 8 has already been made. But now they have 7 members because of Seifuku; with Strife later being the 8th, and most powerful member.
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