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VOD 12 - u/gustamos

May 19th, 2017
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  1. I omitted a lot of nitpicking because you're only in Gold. I focused mostly on the important things you should be aware of.
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  3. As requested, I only reviewed the first match.
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  5. 3:33 - Nitpick: You're in Gold, so it doesn't really matter, but generally, don't be the first to charge out of spawn, since you can get spawn killed. Let your tanks go out first
  6. 3:42 - Pointless DPS
  7. 4:00 - Questionable nade
  8. 4:01 - Your teammates are all yellow on the right and you decide to focus Pharah for some reason
  9. 4:08 - Since they're running Pharah, stay very close to the left wall (the wall with the choke)
  10. 4:12 - Pointless sleep
  11. 4:22 - Scope heal Roadhog
  12. 4:48 - Abort
  13. 5:02 - You didn't have to expose yourself
  14. 5:06 - Look before nading
  15. 5:14 - Stay close to the wall; you're exposing yourself
  16. 6:15 - This is the worst place to stand since the enemy team has a clear line of sight on you. Just stay close to the wall
  17. 6:20 - The enemy team accidentally walls off Zarya. You should sleep and engage her here
  18. 7:03 - Go for the point, right now
  19. 8:07 - Throw a nade down there
  20. 8:10 - Way too late
  21. 8:12 - Bad sleep
  22. 8:40 - Soldier's yellow on the right. Glance to check his health
  23. 9:15 - Just regroup
  24. 9:19 - Don't stand here, really
  25. 9:25 - Totally pointless engagement by yourself
  26. 9:36 - Rein doesn't have shield up; stay out of sight from the path
  27. 9:43 - Questionable nade
  28. 9:44 - As soon as you heard the enemy team Nano somebody for some reason (behind a Mei wall lol), you should've just told everyone to back off and let them come out
  29. 9:47 - Sleep only after you see your target
  30. 9:54 - If you Nano Soldier, pocket heal him from inside cover
  31. 10:09 - D.Va asks for healing but you ignore her
  32. 10:12 - Abort immediately
  33. 10:23 - You should've attempted to sleep her
  34. 10:55 - Pointless nade
  35. 11:00 - Poor sleep; you should've taken your time with this one
  36. 11:13 - At 23 HP, you should be staying far outside the entrance
  37. 11:24 - Just Nano your Bastion
  38. 11:40 - You could've won this fight if you just Nano'd Bastion
  39. 14:14 - I would've attempted to throw a long range nade over there
  40. 14:17 - Bad throw
  41. 14:34 - Bad sleep
  42. 14:47 - Unnecessary nade
  43. 16:06 - Attempt to long range nade here
  44. 17:08 - Questionable nade
  45. 17:33 - Sleep him on the second floor
  46. 17:42 - Being this close to Pharah, either 1v1 her or run outside of the point and try to hide behind the wall
  47. 19:27 - Not the greatest nade
  48. 19:40 - You didn't have to go down
  49. 20:02 - Pointless nade
  50. 20:22 - Pointless nade
  51. 21:01 - Unnecessary nade
  52. 21:34 - Tunnel visioning a bit. Look left to see your other teammates as well
  53. 21:20 - Prepare to Nano Winston
  54. 22:30 - Do it now
  55. 22:41 - Nano someone, anyone
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  58. Additional Remarks
  59. - It's important to keep in mind that both you and your team are at fault for this match. Because your teammates are Gold players, none of them really know how to position safely nor do they know how to push. You can't really do anything about that. However, that doesn't meant you should keep standing in spots where the enemy team can see you and shoot you.
  60. - There are lots of issues I'd nitpick on, but I omitted most of them since the biggest one you have is positioning and knowing when to back off from lost fights.
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