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- Because you're in Gold, I eased up on the review since a lot of "mistakes" are forgivable at that rank. I only focused on the bigger issues, and I added in some minor nitpicks which could help prepare you for Platinum.
- Disclaimer: I had to review the recording with my sound off, so I wasn't able to review any ultimate voiceline-related plays.
- 0:22 - You're exposing yourself for no reason; stand a bit further back so the enemies can't see your head
- 0:35 - Nitpick: I'd quickscope Mercy; she's a high priority target that can't afford to die
- 0:50 - Nade the ground here to splash everyone: You, Rein, and Roadhog
- 0:53 - Questionable sleep
- 0:54 - Nitpick: You still could've naded both your Rein and the Roadhog, if you aimed it a little more to the right, on the ground
- 1:02 - You can actually stay a little further back so you don't have to keep turning so much
- 1:41 - If you know Genji's behind, it's best to stay closer to the building left of the payload
- 1:56 - No. Absolute no. Ignore her and focus on your job
- 2:35 - Nitpick: There's no need to shoot blanks. And if you do so, always make sure to reload if it's safe
- 3:17 - Immediately nade Rein
- 3:43 - Back up and heal Pharah from under the bridge or on the high ground, not here
- 4:01 - Nitpick: Since you know that Pharmercy's up there, you don't necessarily need to worry about them since Mercy will probably be enough, but you should still move further back (closer to the small health pack far behind) so you can have a line of sight on everyone
- 4:17 - Pointless sleep
- 4:35 - Nitpick: Anti-heal Roadhog
- 4:37 - Nitpick: You might've had a chance of surviving the D.Va if you actually ran straight to where the Roadhog is
- 4:56 - Throw a nade first, then pocket heal
- 5:36 - Zarya is yellow on the left; double-check her health before looking up like that
- 6:05 - This is more or less a doomed fight, but you shouldn't sleep first. Always nade first
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- Additional Remarks:
- - Your Nano Rein and Nano Winston play in the first round was spectacular. No complaints at all, and the timing was great.
- - Your unscoped aim is quite good, which compensates for the need of scoped shots. This is fine since you're in Gold, but once you start hitting higher ranks, scoped shots will start to become more important as you'll need to pocket heal crucial critical targets. The time will come.
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