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Jun 27th, 2016
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  1. http://i.imgur.com/a370un4.jpg
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  3. Choppah's nut sack is not finished. It blends in with her tail
  4. My inner ear is not finished or colored or shaded. It stands out like a sore, incomplete thumb.
  5. There is literally nothing in the aquarium other than water and 6 fish, 3 of which are microscopic. It is awkward and half-assed looking.
  6. The walls are entirely bare, there's not even a picture, or a window, there's absolutely no decoration whatsoever.
  7. No lights in the cieling?
  8. Random anal beads in the corner, plus 2 pillows...That's literally all that I see on the ground.
  9. Raz's wings look like they're made out of plastic instead of flesh and skin.
  10. WHat is she even resting her leg on?
  11. Why is my tail 2 feet long?
  12. My tits are largely unshaded...You can't even see the cum that's supposed to be on them
  13. ....Speaking of cum, where exactly is it? All I see is a dribble and that's about it....
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  15. I know I didn't pay for this at all, and I know you can't change it, and I bet my left nut on that even if you could, you most likely wouldn't, even if this is, by and large, embarassing.
  16. To be perfectly honest here, do you actually call this a finished image? Not according to your gallery on FA you don't. I've taken a look at your past work there and they're nothing short of astounding. Brilliant, even. I 'wanted' you to draw me because, quite frankly, your skills showed that you matched the quality I look for in those who draw Vaxi. And naturally, I was eternally grateful to Choppah for including me as a dear friend.
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  18. But none of that removes my right to say this in Choppahs place, simply because they're either too nice, or too inexperienced to notice. As a person with 3 years of experience getting artwork online(With my own money, thanks), and another decade of living in a household with several criticism-appreciative artists, I can safely say that this picture looks half-assed, rushed, and uninspired. It is plain as day to me that you absolutely did not put your full skill set into this picture...Now that being due to Choppah being too nice about it and not saying anything, or because our past grudge where you misunderstood my joke for some form of obscure personal insult? I don't know, nor do I really care either way. You were paid to do your utmost best like you'd do with every other image you do, you were given money with the expectation that you'd fulfill your end of the work included by doing the very best job you could, regardless of personal opinions. At this, I must admit, you failed at. Naturally, I don't say this expecting you to change it, I mean, you deliberately kept me specifically in the dark for months at a time, refusing to provide me with WiP sketches/lineart etc., which I honestly found a bit suspicious, and now I see why. Naturally, this all lead to me not being able to tell you all of this during the actual work phases, meaning you gave me absolutely no opportunity to take a trained, experienced look at the image to let you know where changes had to be made, or where fixes had to be done. Instead you provide us with this, an inexcusable piece of work that was rushed to get finished, after HOW many months of progress that you decided to take? I've completely lost count, but suffice it to say, I had 5 other, high quality images done, including a reference sheet, in the time it took you to get this one, single, half-finished finished image done. I'm extremely disappointed, and honestly, a bit offended, and yes, I'm infuriated, but I'm sure that you honestly don't care too much, but that still doesn't change the fact that this had to be said. You're welcome to take this however you wish, either as a lesson for the future, a personal insult worthy of blocking me for life, or all of the above...But honestly, if this is the level of quality I can expect to get if I were to pay upwards of $100 for it?...I 'REALLY' don't care, trust me.
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