Shagrat Blood Subs

[07:00:10] <+Hale> line 1-4 fade out a tad too late
[07:01:31] <+Hale> all of the credits at the start would probably look a tad better with a second blur'd layer beneach the current one, in a slightly more blue-ish tone
[07:02:31] <+Hale> 8-9 fade out too fast
[07:03:30] <+Hale> from what I can see they'd need a gauss-blur coupled with the fade-effect too
[07:05:56] <+Hale> top (out of frame dialogue)'s position may be ok, but the bottom one has all of its letter descenders in the overscan area
[07:08:17] <+Hale> there's a number of lines which could be linked by splicing in a comma instead of full stop
[07:08:33] <+Hale> general lack of exclamation marks
[07:09:21] <+Hale> line 107 is really pushing the horizontal margins; maybe throw in an \N here
[07:10:11] <+Hale> kudos for BE punctuation order like seen in line 81 tho
[07:10:38] <+Hale> doubt there's anything else to say
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[07:11:02] <~TheProfosist> what do you think about the style of the subs
[07:11:02] <+Hale> The rest would be :op-onions:
[07:11:15] <~TheProfosist> yea opinions might be good 2
[07:11:28] <+Hale> hmm.. well I like the credits one, but the dialogue font isn't my cup of tea
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[07:12:00] <+Hale> brb
[07:12:50] <~TheProfosist> thats the same thing i was thinking the credits fit great but i didnt think the style fit the anime
[07:28:50] <+Hale> timing's a tad off here and there as well. I assume nobody checked for scene bleeds, snapping and leadin/-out
[07:29:07] <~TheProfosist> no one checked timing at all i believe
[07:29:14] <+Hale> line 42 > 43 for example shouldn't have that gap