VOD 3 - u/Penguinbashr

1:48 - Nitpick: You're doing a somewhat bad habit, which is to stare at your nade location to confirm it hits. You don't have to. If you didn't do this, you would've noticed that your Roadhog isn't topped off
2:09 - It's generally safe to remain scoped in as long as the enemy team isn't running a Pharah. You would've been able to heal up Soldier earlier if you did
2:10 - You're missing shots. Scope in. You can't afford to miss, especially since your Rein and Pharah are getting hurt
2:17 - You didn't notice the Rein who had less HP than the Roadhog. Always focus on Reinhardt first and then shift away to other teammates
2:17 - You completely ignored Pharah; she isn't topped off
2:25 - Nitpick: When the enemy team runs slow comps like this, you can *easily* anti-heal the enemy team from this vantage point. Just throw it over at them just under the top of the gate. This would've forced them to become defensive, allowing you to better heal your teammates
2:27 - Nitpick: Quickly scope and top off Pharah, and then pocket Rein
2:35 - You're safe from danger. Scope in and top off everyone
2:40 - Scope in!
2:52 - Nitpick: Pharah's exposed up there. Make sure to glance at her from time to time
2:55 - You're confirming nades again. Don't do that; just keep healing
2:59 - You would've noticed that Pharah wasn't topped off if you had just glanced at her earlier
3:03 - You still haven't topped off Pharah
3:10 - Again, you have an opening for a very juicy anti-heal
3:22 - Tunnel vision: You ignored Pharah again
3:26 - And now Pharah is critical, and you're forced to look up at her during a bad time because you don't know what's going on down there
3:42 - Nade Roadhog; he's can't be healed with this line of sight
3:59 - Nano Pharah here. You can force the other team to focus her while you can heal up your team
4:10 - Scope in to pocket heal Rein; you can't afford to miss
4:40 - Nitpick: You should pocket heal Roadhog here, yes, but be sure to glance to the left to make sure the rest of your team is doing okay first
5:12 - Throw the nade MUCH earlier. Literally the second you hear Zarya Graviton, be prepared to nade
5:15 - Enemy team is running Pharah now. Be aware of her at all times
5:21 - You'll never hit Pharah unscoped. She's not paying attention to you, so focus on healing
5:26 - Again, scope in. You can't afford to miss
5:32 - Always scope in for Pharah; she's really hard to hit unscoped
5:36 - Don't DPS. Your teammates are all critical
5:39 - By this point in time, I'd move inside the building behind you. You're incredibly exposed to any enemy coming from the left. You could've avoided Pharah shooting you like this if you had been inside the room
8:05 - You know Symmetra's throwing orbs. Why aren't you being careful of them?
8:10 - Stay behind your team; I can't see at least three of your teammates on your screen
8:17 - You had more than enough time to dodge this Sym orb
8:39 - Nitpick: Experienced Anas would quickscope here; you can't waste time walking slow
8:43 - Your team has the high ground, uncontested. You do not need to nade them
8:48 - Now is a perfect time to nade Roadhog
8:56 - Unnecessary tunnel vision. Look at the objective
9:02 - You don't need to go in this close. Stay further back and scope in
9:03 - Always scope for Pharah
9:05 - Unnecessary darts
9:09 - Same as before; scope for Pharah
9:15 - Don't tab unless you're in a safe spot
9:37 - I'd say it's decent enough to Nano Rein here, since you already naded him and can pocket heal him
9:43 - Anti-heal the enemy Rein as soon as his bubble expires
9:59 - Nitpick: Let Rein go through first
10:10 - Don't blindly toss nades like this. Make sure they actually need it first
14:09 - The best spot to stand is actually behind the car
14:13 - Unnecessary darts
14:22 - You're tunnel visioning a Pharah you can't hit. Stop and focus on healing
14:23 - As soon as you hear the enemy team grunt like this, *immediately* look down
14:38 - Just stay behind the car and scope in if necessary
14:40 - You really don't need to chase down Roadhog like this
14:46 - Don't randomly throw nades when you don't even know if anyone's there
14:50 - Don't top up people who don't need topping up
15:00 - Stay behind the car so you don't have to look at awkward angles
15:06 - As soon as you're exposed like this, hide in the building behind you
15:09 - It's more important to nade yourself than to try to group nade; a stray Pharah rocket will kill you
15:20 - If you're going to stay here, stay up on the stairs. The stairs are also a nice place to be, since it's difficult for Pharah to shoot at
15:30 - Never try to expose yourself to sleep Soldier unless you already know where he is
16:15 - Topping up for no reason again
16:21 - Make sure you can see at least three teammates on your screen at all times
16:25 - Do not hunt down D.Va like this
16:28 - You totally could've given Symmetra a chance to survive if you just scoped in and shot through the tree
17:05 - You're unnecessarily exposing yourself when you could just peek out from the building to your right. Don't stay on the main road unless Rein's there
17:24 - You definitely could've kept Symmetra alive. When a teammate is in a risky spot like this (she's facing up against a Rein), preemptively nade her, scope in, and pocket heal her
17:49 - Always look at your target before tossing a sleep. You could've hit this
18:06 - Pocket heal whoever it is that is critical. Scope in and heal
20:30 - Nitpick: Zen isn't topped off yet. He'll passive heal, but you could've gained a tiny bit of ult charge for free
20:32 - Unnecessary darts
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Additional Remarks:
- Don't throw a nade and watch it hit. Confirmations take up valuable time, and chances are, you'll need to heal anyway. Break that habit.
- When the enemy team isn't running any hero that could pose Ana any direct danger, you have the green light to constantly stay scoped in. Seriously. Scope in more. You don't need to use unscoped unless you're in danger.
- From what I saw, probably because you're in Platinum, a lot of opportunities where *I* personally would've Nano'd somebody to guarantee a pick or two was actually not necessary because it seemed like your team handled them anyway. I removed those lines from the list above. Maybe once you're in Diamond, I'll be able to list those points.
At the moment, it seems that Platinum is a lot more forgiving. If Platinum games are all like this, then I suggest sticking to a defensive Nano style. What that means is, you either Nano somebody as a follow up after the enemy team uses an ult, or you Nano to combo an ultimate, like a Visor or Blade.