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- PART 1
- Setting: The underworld. Replace Crysta with Mokou's home village.
- Ark is Keine. Elle is Mokou (Skirtkou). The Elder is Mokou's Father. Maybe never mention this, and just have the name?
- There is no mention of Kaguya.
- No idea what to do about the Crystal Blue. It should be replaced with something. However there's no clear analog for what a fake touhou is made out of.
- Likewise the name should reflect this.
- Meeting 'Yomi': Well, since it's fitting, have Keine headbutt the door instead of throwing crap at it.
- No idea about who Yomi should be. Yomi is the start and the end of evolution.
- Using evolution, the start could be something from an earlier shmup. Or, it could be a nameless fairy.
- 2nd is dumb. First is problematic, since I sure as fuck don't want to use a spaceship or something.
- -Yomi as the physical embodiment of moe?
- Meeting yomi freezes everyone, so go out to the 5 towers
- Keine will, from "Pandora's Box" (does that even need to change? hmm) get her first weapon.
- Whatever that is. I currently have NO idea what to use for her attacks, let alone weapons.
- She does not use any form of weapon in the games
- There is the three treasure of Japan; see end of Part 3 below.
- Instead of 'resurecting the land', start the events of the main windows games.
- i.e:
- Tower 1: Perform some trigger to bring the Scarlet Devil Mansion to Gensokyo. They decide to move for whatever reason.
- Tower 2: I dunno, trigger Yuyuko's interest in the Saigyou Ayakashi? Maybe something else from the backstory.
- Tower 3: Hell the Apollo Landing could work, but that's kinda weird. Whatever
- Tower 4: PoFV, so... uh, don't cause any disasters. Fuck if I know
- And as a bonus, add Fairies Wear Boots. (Fairly fitting since PoFV is so focused on fairies)
- Tower 5: MoF. And MoF itself causes SA, causes UFO, potentially causes the next game.
- Note that because of Keine's ability, it is perfectly acceptable to do that Discworld-esque time/history fuckery.
- i.e. one moment Kaguya is on the moon, the next moment she's been on the earth for the past 1000 years and has driven Mokou's
- father and others insane. It'd certainly be a nice twist for Keine to realize that she is the cause of Surface Mokou's
- father going crazy, abandoning her, and eventually her becoming a Hourai.
- Mu and Polynese: I dunno. Fangames (lame)? print works? Kourindou could be one of them, I suppose.
- Ooh. The cameo in Shuusou Gyoku perhaps? Would be bloody weird though.
- -Heh. Bonus battle against Rinnosuke like in Labyrinth of Touhou.
- -And the end result can be a "Sexy Underwear" item that raises Keine's sex appeal by 10 points!
- And so Keine heads off into the Hole, leaving a sad feminine Mokou
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- PART 2
- Setting: Gensokyo, pre-EoSD. Post MS.
- Whatever the vampire incident is, it's going on now. Probably. Check the timeline or something, maybe can fit stuff in before.
- "I can talk to plants and animals!". No idea if there's a way or reason to emulate this. Talking to the canon fodder fairies? Or maybe not needed.
- Some things that have to be done here:
- -Resolve the vampire incident. This should be done by Keine. If Reimu is sticking around, like a follower or something, she should
- be watching but have extremely limited participation. I think Reimu was the actual resolver, but whatever.
- -Teach Reimu to fly. And generally be a Windows Shrine Maiden.
- -Dye Reimu's hair. Or do something about the color change.
- Perhaps Reimu should start out amnesiac following the events of MS? And like follow Keine around trying to learn shit.
- And what about Marisa? I don't think she would be living in the FoM during PC-98.
- Actually, due to the "PC-98 cataclysm", Reimu and Marisa should probably be "sealed". So, unseal them
- And Alice I guess, but that should be done in such a way that Alice being 'freed' is incidental rather than a goal. Since
- Keine needs to release R&M, but Alice really isn't critical to anything, but does appear enough times that it needs
- to be covered.
- -And then Yuka could unseal herself, or be Bloody Mary, or something. But this is part 3 stuff, really.
- Keine's final act in this part is to unseal/create all of the other major players. I suppose create, since they really aren't around before?
- No. Don't create. That's ZUN's job. Part 1 consists of the major players being given reasons to come to Gensokyo. So they're set.
- The more minor characters, i.e. stage 1&2, need to be addressed. There's really no way to "motivate" them into coming to Gensokyo
- because they more or less "have always been there". However SOMETHING should be done to address their current non-existence.
- And whatever that something is, it should also result in a timeskip for Keine. Just 'cuz.
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- PART 3
- As in the original, this should entail the majority of game time.
- The main part of this will consist of Keine going through all of the Windows games. And by Keine I mean Reimu, since she takes
- all the credit.
- Ark is the main character but certainly gets a good deal of help from the supporting cast. This should be done in reverse, really.
- Reimu is the main character. Keine is just supporting her. So Reimu will probably get most of the "stage 6" boss fights, while Keine
- beats up the stage 5 or 4 boss I guess. And Marisa is there too.
- The reason for this isn't that Keine is incapable of trashing the stage 6 bosses, it's just that it's Reimu's job to do it.
- Exception: While Yukari isn't going to be the final boss or possibly even a "bad guy", Keine should fight her directly.
- She's just that important.
- So, basically...
- EoSD -> PCB -> IN -> PoFV -> MoF -> SA -> UFO -> ???
- "Stockholm" should be discovered before IN. It'd be nice to have Keine meet Surface Mokou even after EoSD, but that'd be kinda strange.
- Stockholm, again, would be the ruins (is it ruined? fuck) of Mokou's village from the backstory. Since Kaguya actually showed up here,
- it went to hell. Mokou's father failed the impossible requests, etc.
- To match Stockholm being within the confusing forest, the immediate solution would be to navigate the bamboo forest of lost. The problem is that Eientei
- is inside it, and I seriously doubt the ruins of Mokou's village would be (Really need to check on Mokou's village...)
- Nitori should make a giant robot boss battle for the MoF part, much like the one boss in Beruga's Tower. A bit early, considering
- that's near the end of the part and MoF isn't (unless Kanako becomes Beruga and SA onwards is dropped)
- No idea how to handle the transitions. in the normal games there's a good deal of time between each incident, after all...
- Just drink tea for a year, I suppose.
- Keine should probably wake up at the Hakurei Shrine, shortly before the Scarlet Mist spreads.
- -No, wake up at the human village (which shall be Lhasa)
- There was the idea of relating all of the stage 6 bosses to "Dark Gaia", much like Harry, Bloody Mary, and Wong (or whoever).
- This would certainly give motivation for "The Elder" telling Keine to go and create Gensokyo. However it's not quite clear
- how to assign their loyalties.
- Plus, how to have Reimu relate to Dark Gaia? Why have her do all of these incidents?
- The part ends with "Beruga". Who to use for Beruga is a tough one. Since it should relate somehow to the PC-98 characters,
- and thus Makai, etc, Byakuren COULD work, but it'd be pretty damn out of character. Hopefully TH13 will have someone more villiany.
- -Actually, what would "Beruga"'s plan be? This should probably be decided before assigning a character to Beruga.
- Hell, maybe even utsuho could work, since she planned (briefly) on burning the world.
- -Whoever the assigned boss is, Reimu should fail to defeat her for whatever reason. Or have Reimu take out the stage 5.
- The neo-tokyo disaster would be done by having "Beruga" nuke one of the existing houses. Or something.
- Maybe leave head as a survivor, if the stage 6 bosses are all helping "Beruga"
- Not Eientei, because of Inaba and SSiB+related comics. Nuke something with little official screentime.
- And then since "Beruga" is actually the puppet herself of "The Elder", Keine is put to sleep because 'her job is finished'.
- Keine should wake up at "Stockholm", with Surface Mokou. Yomi shows up, Skirtkou does something, etc.
- the 5 starstones. Dunno what to do with those. They were needed to resurect the Light Hero, so... 5 pieces of the moon?
- What of the treasure of Stockholm? Proximity to IN would suggest the Hourai Elixir, but that just wouldn't work for a shitload of reasons.
- Keine has three spellcards relating to the three treasure of Japan; Keine is going to need SOME form of equip, so she could have
- three equip slots and those 3 items could be the strongest.
- -Does she actually POSSESS those objects? Or is she simply name-dropping them?
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- PART 4
- And the whole fight with Beruga
- and then take out Dark Gaia.
- This really shouldn't be planned at all (beyond these absolute basics) before more concrete thought has been done for parts 2&3.
- Current thought for the two-part boss:
- First, fight Sariel. For no real reason.
- Then, fight ZUN. ZUN certainly doesn't look like the giant crystalline monster that Dark Gaia 2nd form is, but I'm sure something
- creative could be done.
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- MAJOR CHARACTERS
- Ark - Keine
- Elle - Mokou (princess="real" mokou, underworld = "Skirt" mokou)
- The Elder - Mokou's Father?
- Yomi -
- Kumari - Akyu, perhaps. Kumari also reincarnates. This would likely mean Lhasa (at least where Keine 'wakes') is the human village
- Meihou
- Meilin -
- Royd -
- Fyda -
- Bloody Mary - (spirit of) PC-98 Yuka?
- Beruga - Byakuren (not much of a world-changer and definitely not cleanser)? Okuu (world destroyer)?
- Light Gaia - Never explicitly mentioned/appears, as in Terranigma.
- Dark Gaia - ZUN
- Light Gaia could be anyone associated with "creation" in the touhou universe; such as all of the doujin circles (as a whole), or ZUN again.
- Dark Gaia however is explicitly ZUN, because only ZUN can really "destroy" a fan theory with his word of god. (not that people always listen, or care)
- Sanae should probably be in a situation like Meilin's. Like, she does bad shit but only because Kanako told her to. And then regrets it
- after it blows up in her face, although Kanako trying to crush her shrine maiden to death wouldn't quite work.
- -Plus she isn't much of a love-interest conflict for Keine. Actually, who would be?
- Alice could work as Christopher Collumbus. She's a relic from the past and she also ends up helping Marisa in IN.
- Yukari could be the guardian, in addition to whatever her role is. She'd be completely clothed in purple robes/dress, not named Yukari, and would
- still appear in the main game. She certainly fits the role, as the guardian frequently comes and goes from nowhere, causes his face to appear
- on a stone door, possesses absurd power (relative to the still-weak Ark, at least).
- Although Yukari coming and going out of nowhere should require a gap, I'd prefer the only visible gap to be when the guardian warps-in
- the Tower 5 boss; just so the player can go "Oh. Hey. That was Yukari."
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