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  1. Index:
  2.  
  3. b = balloon
  4.  
  5. n = narration balloons (the rectangular ones)
  6.  
  7. noise = those little sentences written outside of balloons
  8.  
  9. SFX = sound effect
  10.  
  11. t = thought balloons
  12.  
  13. (let me know if something is unclear about the numeration of the pages or balloons! I'll try to fix it for next times!)
  14.  
  15. (the symbol "|" is used to split a long sentence in the balloons that compose it)
  16.  
  17. "Note for me" are notes left by the translator to remember himself the words he keeps forgetting, so feel free to ignore them
  18.  
  19. ---------------------
  20.  
  21. https://exhentai.org/g/1503797/e96b594467/
  22. Note: I'm translating from https://nhentai.net/g/288658/ because now, 17/06/2020 at 7:15 PM, exhentai doesn't load. I think it's in crash
  23.  
  24. Title page: ひなた先生が教えてあげる! = Hinata-sensei teaches me!
  25.  
  26. On the book behind the title, on the right: 大好き ひなた先生 = I love you | Hinata-sensei
  27.  
  28. ---------------------
  29.  
  30. Page 2 <-- blank one (it's page 3 in the raw)
  31.  
  32. ---------------------
  33.  
  34. Page 3 (it's page 4 in the raw)
  35.  
  36. ● Hello everyone and nice to meet you! I'm Kokekokko☆Coma.
  37.  
  38. ● This time I made a booklet about Hinata from Yama no Susume.
  39. Note: I thought that "I made a booklet" sounded more natural than "it's a booklet about"
  40.  
  41. ● Hinata has good grades and works as a part-time private tutor... What a nice setting...
  42. Note: season 2, ep 18, around minute 2:00: it shows that her part-time job is "teaching as a private tutor to primary school kids". Season 2, ep 19, around minute 5:43: it shows that hinata's grades score is high up in the semester's rankings
  43.  
  44. ● Well, I hope you enjoy!
  45. Note: the original actually says "That said, please, take a look (at this booklet)!" but a simple "hope you enjoy" worked better here imo
  46.  
  47. ---------------------
  48.  
  49. Page 4
  50.  
  51. n.1 = Today my private tutor is coming over.
  52.  
  53. n.2 = I hope Hinata-sensei will be here soon...
  54. Note: maybe "Hinata-sensei... how longer do I have to wait (to see you)...?" would convey his eagerness better? His in love with her and this is a vanilla, so I think both work
  55.  
  56. SFX panel 3, the doorbell: dling-dlong
  57.  
  58. b.1 = Hey there, Takashi-kun~!
  59.  
  60. b.2 = Let's do our best today as well!
  61. Note: I cut "at studying" away to make it sound better. I mean, she's his teacher, so I thought it would be pretty obvious what she's referring to with that "let's do our best"
  62.  
  63. ---------------------
  64.  
  65. Page 5
  66.  
  67. b.1-2 = I'm soaking wet! | It started pouring out of the blue!
  68. Note: the original probably goes more along the lines of "Unlucky! | It started raining all of a sudden!", I'm not really sure how to convey the first balloon (maybe reversing them would work better?) but I believe both interpretations work along with the pictures
  69.  
  70. b.3 = W-Well... do you want to take a shower?
  71.  
  72. b.4 = Here.
  73.  
  74. b.5 = Thank you! I'll borrow your shower for a bit.
  75.  
  76. b.6 = Takashi-kun, do you wanna join me?
  77.  
  78. b.7 = !!
  79.  
  80. ---------------------
  81.  
  82. Page 6
  83.  
  84. b.1 = Eh?
  85.  
  86. b.2 = C'mon, I'm kidding! *Hahaha*
  87.  
  88. b.3 = Eh?
  89.  
  90. b.4 = Sigh...
  91.  
  92. on the fridge: There's some pudding (in)
  93.  
  94. b.5 = Uuugh... Hinata-sensei...
  95.  
  96. b.6 (sound of the shower's water) = Shhh
  97.  
  98. noise 1 = Hinata-sensei is all naked...
  99.  
  100. noise 2 = ...in my bathroom right now.
  101.  
  102. noise 3 = If I said "Yes"...
  103.  
  104. noise 4 = ...would we be in there together?
  105.  
  106. ---------------------
  107.  
  108. Page 7
  109.  
  110. b.1 = Sorry to keep you waiting, Takashi-kun!
  111.  
  112. b.2 = Now, let's get studying!
  113.  
  114. b.3 = Let's see... how much did we do last time...?
  115.  
  116. b.4 = ...
  117.  
  118. b.5 = What's up, Takashi-kun?
  119.  
  120. ---------------------
  121.  
  122. Page 8
  123.  
  124. b.1 = Y-Your hair...
  125.  
  126. b.2-3 = Oh, right! Sorry, it gets in the way like this. | I'll tie it up now that it's dry.
  127.  
  128. b.4 = O-Okay...
  129.  
  130. b.5 = Sensei...?
  131.  
  132. b.6 = Hinata-sensei?
  133.  
  134. b.7 = Mh...?
  135.  
  136. b.8 = Yawn~!
  137.  
  138. b.9-10 = Sorry, I dozed off. | Let's take a break when you finish this page.
  139.  
  140. b.11 = I already finished it, Hinata-sensei.
  141.  
  142. b.12 = Oh...
  143.  
  144. ---------------------
  145.  
  146. Page 9
  147.  
  148. b.1 = I'll get some tea.
  149.  
  150. b.2 = Okaaay~!
  151.  
  152. b.3 = Zzz...
  153.  
  154. b.4 = Hinata-sen...
  155.  
  156. b.5 = BONK
  157.  
  158. b.6 = Zzz...
  159.  
  160. b.7 = ...
  161.  
  162. b.8 = !
  163.  
  164. ---------------------
  165.  
  166. Page 10 <-- no balloons in this page
  167.  
  168. くんくん = sniff sniff
  169.  
  170. すや = zzz
  171.  
  172. ドキドキ = ba-dump
  173. Note: it's the sound of his heart
  174.  
  175. ---------------------
  176.  
  177. Page 11
  178.  
  179. noise 1 = I saw them...!
  180.  
  181. noise 2 = I saw Hinata-sensei's boobs!
  182.  
  183. noise 3 = Her boobs...!
  184.  
  185. noise 4 = Her boobs!
  186.  
  187. noise 5 = Hinata-sensei...
  188.  
  189. noise 6 = Hi-Hinata-sensei!
  190.  
  191. thought 1 = I love you!
  192.  
  193. ---------------------
  194.  
  195. Page 12
  196.  
  197. noise 1 = Did something... come out from my...?
  198.  
  199. b.1 = Takashi-kun?
  200.  
  201. b.2 = !!
  202.  
  203. b.3-4 = I-I'm...! | I'm sorry!
  204.  
  205. b.5 = ?
  206.  
  207. b.6-7 = I... I...! | I always imagine lewd stuff about you, Hinata-sensei!
  208.  
  209. noise 2 (男のコだね) = Well, you're a boy~!
  210.  
  211. b.8 = How could I do this to my beloved Hinata-sensei...
  212.  
  213. noise 3 (だいすき) = BELOVED
  214.  
  215. b.9-10 = Oooh, | geez!
  216.  
  217. b.11 = Fuwaah!
  218.  
  219. b.12 = What do you think you're doing, making your Sensei all excited!
  220.  
  221. ---------------------
  222.  
  223. Page 13
  224.  
  225. b.1 = Wow... is that semen?
  226.  
  227. b.2 = Maybe...
  228.  
  229. b.3 = Can I touch it?
  230.  
  231. b.4 = Y-Yes!
  232.  
  233. b.5 = Nh...
  234.  
  235. b.6 = Ahh!
  236.  
  237. b.7 = Oh, sorry! I bet it's embarrassing, isn't it?
  238.  
  239. b.8 = Now we're even.
  240.  
  241. b.9-10 = Wanna try touching them? | My boobs...
  242.  
  243. ---------------------
  244.  
  245. Page 14
  246.  
  247. b.1 = You can suck and lick them too.
  248.  
  249. b.2 = Ah!
  250.  
  251. b.3 = Kyah!
  252.  
  253. b.4 = Takashi-kun, do you really love me?
  254.  
  255. b.5 = Y-Yes!
  256.  
  257. b.6 = I love you, Hinata-sensei!
  258.  
  259. b.7-8 = Ehehehe~! | Hey, Takashi-kun...
  260.  
  261. b.9 = Do you wanna learn how to be a man?
  262.  
  263. ---------------------
  264.  
  265. Page 15
  266.  
  267. b.1 = Basically, you have to stick your pee-pee...
  268.  
  269. b.2 = ...into this part of Sensei.
  270.  
  271. b.3-4 = Huhhh... | Huhhh...!
  272.  
  273. b.5 = C'mon, come here.
  274.  
  275. b.6 = Ah...! Waaah!
  276.  
  277. b.7 = Nh!
  278.  
  279. b.8 = Ah!
  280.  
  281. b.9 = Aanh!
  282.  
  283. ---------------------
  284.  
  285. Page 16
  286.  
  287. b.1 = S-Sensei...! It's... amazing...!
  288.  
  289. b.2 = Try to move your pee-pee inside me.
  290. Note: I don't know if this makes any sense in English... maybe we could just change this to “move your hips” here, then say “yes, up and down” in b.4... I think I'll leave this up to the proofreader
  291.  
  292. b.3 = Moving...?
  293.  
  294. b.4 = Move your hips up and down.
  295.  
  296. b.5 = Can I really do it...?
  297.  
  298. b.6 = Please...
  299.  
  300. b.7 = ...I want you to move your hips.
  301.  
  302. b.8 = Ah!
  303.  
  304. b.9 = Aah!
  305.  
  306. b.10 = Au!
  307.  
  308. b.11 = Ahn!
  309.  
  310. b.12 = Hyau!
  311.  
  312. b.13 (the only one on her right) = Kyah!
  313.  
  314. ---------------------
  315.  
  316. Page 17
  317.  
  318. b.1 (middle right) = Hyau!
  319.  
  320. b.2 (below b1) = S-Sensei...!
  321.  
  322. b.3 (left b2) = Anh!
  323.  
  324. b.4 (behind his head) = Hinata-sensei!
  325.  
  326. b.5 = Aahn!
  327.  
  328. b.6 = Nh...!
  329.  
  330. b.7 = Ah!
  331.  
  332. b.8 = Ta-Takashi-kun...!
  333.  
  334. b.9 = Ahn!
  335.  
  336. b.10 = Hyan!
  337.  
  338. b.11 = Aih!
  339.  
  340. ---------------------
  341.  
  342. Page 18
  343.  
  344. b.1 = Nnh!
  345.  
  346. b.2 = Anh!
  347.  
  348. b.3 = You tried really hard, didn't you?
  349.  
  350. b.4 = Yeah...
  351.  
  352. b.5 = Your Sensei is really glad.
  353.  
  354. b.6-7 = Hinata-sensei... | ...I want to do it more!
  355.  
  356. ---------------------
  357.  
  358. Page 19
  359.  
  360. b.1 = Go ahead.
  361.  
  362. b.2 = Let's do all the review you want.
  363.  
  364. b.3 = You already know what to do, right?
  365.  
  366. b.4 = Ah! Aah!
  367.  
  368. b.5 = Hyaun!
  369.  
  370. b.6 = Ah!
  371.  
  372. b.7 = Aanh!
  373.  
  374. p.8 (right, below b6) = Slap
  375. Note: literally the impact of his hips on hers
  376.  
  377. b.9 (left, below b7) = Slap
  378.  
  379. b.10 = Hyah!
  380.  
  381. b.11 = Slap
  382.  
  383. ---------------------
  384.  
  385. Page 20
  386.  
  387. b.1 = Ah!
  388.  
  389. b.2-3 = Hi-Hinata-sensei!
  390.  
  391. b.4 = I love you!
  392.  
  393. b.5-6 = Anh! | Kyah!
  394.  
  395. b.7 = I love you so much!
  396.  
  397. b.8 = Ahn!
  398.  
  399. b.9 = I love you sooo much!
  400.  
  401. b.10 = Ahih!
  402.  
  403. b.11 (on his head) = Uwah!
  404.  
  405. b.12 = Aanh!
  406.  
  407. ---------------------
  408.  
  409. Page 21
  410.  
  411. noise 1 = Then...
  412. Note: I pretty much put everything in the next sentence to make it work better in English
  413.  
  414. noise 2 = ...Hinata-sensei and I took a bath together.
  415.  
  416. noise 3 = She started licking my pee-pee...
  417.  
  418. noise 4 = ...and I learned yet another wonderful thing.
  419.  
  420. noise 5 = After that...
  421. Note: again, I adapted and mixed this and the next one to make them sound better. In the original it doesn't say "after that", I added it to make it all work better
  422.  
  423. noise 6 = ...Hinata-sensei went home.
  424. Note: the original uses "at the usual time" but I think it isn't really necessary, we might cut it away
  425.  
  426. noise 7 = What will my beloved Hinata-sensei...
  427.  
  428. noise 8 = ...teach me next time?
  429.  
  430. ---------------------
  431.  
  432. Page 22 <-- empty page
  433.  
  434. ---------------------
  435.  
  436. Page 23
  437.  
  438. b.1 = Aoi~!
  439.  
  440. b.2 = Please, Aoi, let me have your dick!
  441.  
  442. b.3 = No! I don't have one!
  443.  
  444. b.4 = Aoi, gimme your diiick~!
  445.  
  446. b.5 = I SAID I DON'T HAVE ONE!
  447.  
  448. ---------------------
  449.  
  450. Page 24
  451.  
  452. ● So, did you like it?
  453.  
  454. ● It would be great if we had a new season of Yama no Susume...
  455.  
  456. ● Well then, see you next time~
  457.  
  458. 2019/08
  459.  
  460. Kokekokko☆Coma
  461.  
  462. ---------------------
  463.  
  464. Page 25
  465.  
  466. Hinata-sensei teaches me!
  467.  
  468. Release date
  469. 2019/8/11
  470.  
  471. Author
  472. Kokekokko☆Coma
  473.  
  474. Publisher
  475. Jido hikki
  476.  
  477. website
  478. https://kokecoma.x.fc2.com/
  479.  
  480. email
  481. coma@kra.biglobe.ne.jp
  482.  
  483. Printed by
  484. Neko no shippo
  485. Note: https://www.shippo.co.jp/neko/ <-- their website, if we want to add it
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