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  1. Hello Versiux
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  3. I'm René and I will be reviewing your plot.
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  5. I will be going over the review in multiple sections, including Organics, Terrain and Structures!
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  7. Organics:
  8. - Overall your Organics look really good. Really love the snail, you did a really good job on that. Your flowers could need some general work, especially those on the cliff sides. If you want petals on the flowers, id suggest getting rid of most of the stem, and corporate them into your "vines(leafs)" instead, generally that would make more sense.
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  10. Terrain:
  11. - Your terrain is really good, I deffenitly like your palette personally on nearly all the terrain. Your grassy parts needs more work, you should strive to make the rest of your build atmospheric. Id suggest adding grass, or atleast brigther/darker colours of green clay aswell just to break the terrain up a tiny bit. To make it more atmospheric, you can add smaller trees to the grassy bits, make some water streams, add muddy areas, farmland and all that. The possibilities are endless. Something id like to see to add more fill to your plot, could be a cave system.
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  13. Structure:
  14. - Generally your structures arent bad. I understand the style you used, you did fail a tiny bit trying to replicate a PB style though. My issue with them personally, is the fact that the contrast they have (materials used) does not fit your terrain palette at all. Theyre to bright and stand out way to much. Id suggest changing the palette, using darker colours. Switching out the roofs with a darker colour (maybe brown clay) would be an idea. Get rid of the sandstone bit aswell, maybe use dark oak.
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  16. Your structures would need to be a bit different aswell. You did the same thing for all three of them, and their placements look kinda random.
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  18. Double Rank:
  19. - If you wish to try and get a double rank (promoted to Inferno), you would need to fix all of the above and pull it off really well. Everything will need to be filled so theres no empty places on your plot, there would also need to be a "red-line" throughout the entire plot, so everything makes sense. Ie your theme + your structures dont make sense. Your structures would need to be organic to fit this.
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  21. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me ingame!
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  23. Kind regards, and happy building
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  25. René
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