[F4M] Refuge after the Goth Club

[F4M] Refuge after the Goth Club [Goth Woman] [corset] [long laced boots] [almost sis in law] [Words She wants to hear] [D/s play] [Safe Word] [bounderies] [belt impact] [belly laughs] [noises she wants to hear] [creampie] [aftercare]


VA Notes:

You are returning from the Goth Club after dropping your friend off who was in walking distance. A group of dudes had been following you and won't stop. You make your way to the apartment of the guy that your sister was engaged to. He was an annoying Dudebro in your mind but he at least would be chill and help you. At least it will be able to get you to pause and get a lyft.

However you know he's going to tease you for being all Gothed out as he never saw you like this or understood your love of goth music (mostly because he didn't know). You show up and... he didn't act like you thought. He was very complimentary almost poetic as he noticed things that you always wanted a guy to notice but didn't. He said al the words that were honey to your ears and oh my god are you really going to go through and ... no he's a dudebro and... wait... is he... could he be... secretly a goth too?

You thought of him as a silly vanllia dudebro because of your sister and you learned a lot about him quickly as he throws your ass around... but most importantly... he made you laugh in bed and you didn't feel awkward about it. You'll probably keep fucking him... especially since now you'll have a goth club bodyguard.

There are notes about levels of arousal to orgasm levels through the whole script, a lot of almost there but not quite...


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[Directions]
(sound effects)

(boots on stepping on a wet sidewalk)
(wolf whistles and catcalls in the background)
(phone ringing)

Come on, answer,

[drunk sounding] Haaaaaaaaaay… can you come down?

I’m a bit tipsy and I can’t navigate your stairs

[sober whisper] Please hurry, there are a group of dudes following me from a nearby club.

Just hurry up and…

[bzzt of a door unlocking] Oh well shit.

I was being dramatic for no reason.

(heavy door opening)

[drunk] Byeeee!

(heavy door slams)

Is it alright if I just stay down here while I wait for them to go away?

[pause]

Grrrr… only if you don’t make any stupid comments!

What floor?

(heavy steps/boots up the stairwell)

I was walking a friend home who was scared.

A group of assholes followed us, and then camped for a bit after I dropped her off and followed me.

God damn it.

Isn’t this some type of violation for the handicapped with all these stairs?

[frustrated] I knew you lived on this street, and it’s the ONLY reason I called you.

Again, I don’t want any comments… none!

We’re going to forget this ever happened okay?

I can’t take off my shoes, I’m at your door I’m hanging up (beep)

(door opens and closes, boots click on hardwood)

Are they still there?

[pause] Fuck.

Let me see.

(metal window blind noise)

I’m going to rest my feet for a few minutes and get an Uber.

Will you come down and outside with… me.

[pause]

I said NO COMMENTS.

You’re about to say something and I don’t want…

[pause]

Oh.

[flustered] I thought you were going to make fun of me.

[pause]

You can say complimentary shit like that all you want (laughs)

[pause]

Yes, I dress up and go to goth clubs.

I did it since I was a college freshman, the only thing that kept me sane with my studies.

[pause]

Yes, if I unlace any of this shit it’s staying off.

[pause]

There were a bunch of bands from various places from the tristate area at the Ten of Swords.

I got my friend all nice and gothed up because she was dying to see one of the bands and she never had been to a goth club before.

[pause]

Look… I know what Bro-rock you like to listen to and you probably don’t know them.

[pause]

No, I’m not being some goth music hipster.

[pause]

Fine, Vitae Arcanum, Onyx Thorns, and Death by Slumber.

[surprised] Yes, Death by Slumber is an Evanescence knockoff.

You shouldn’t know any of this.


I’ll be right back.

[pause]

(distance) I’m going through your belongings to see if you have weird shit.

[pause]

Like maybe you're a pod person because I caught you listening to Nickelback so I know you don't like good music.

[normal distance voice]

Wow, you’re at home and you keep everything locked.

What are you hiding Hootie and the Blowfish CD's?

Desk... computer

You’re no fu…(drawer slides open) AH HA! Red Vines and…

[awkward beat]

Do you need to be that close?

[pause]

(shivering sound) You shouldn’t say that.

[pause]

No, I like it.

And it’s a bit creepy too.

[pause]

That you understood the reason I bought this corset was that when certain light reflects on it it seems to mimic my irises and…

[pause]

[self confused, aroused] No, no timeout.

I’m going to sliiiiiiiide away like this and use your bathroom.

(door closes)

[barely audible through door] No. No. No. No.

You had more to drink than you thought. No

(flush) Not gonna do it (running tap) snap out of it.

(door opens) Are they still out there?

(blinds sounds) These are persistent fuckers.

[slightly rapid breathing] What secrets? No… wait.

[pause]

You use to be engaged to my sister.

She wouldn’t appreciate you saying these things.

(pleasurable noise due to arousal) She… especially wouldn’t like to hear you say that.

[pause]

Look, just let me order a Lyft... (sound of phone beeping)

Look, I think I had too many drinks and what you’re saying is getting to me so…

[pause]

God damn it.

[pause]

Right or left side?

[long beat]

(sound of distant door opening)

[distanced] Found it.

Holy shit.

This is a treasure trove of vinyl. The Cure, Danzig, Misfits, I haven’t heard of half of these other bands I…

[normal distance]

(breath catches in throat) I hate this picture.

Why do you have this picture of me?

[pause]

How… How… Yes, I hated it.

I don’t know why my parents thought a cruise was something I’d enjoy as a grad school graduation gift, and then they sent you two with me on top of it.

[pause]

I was seasick and wanted to just stay in the cabin but she dragged me out.

I’m still drying in this photo because some’s kid pushed me in the pool and it destroyed my phone, and the chlorine fucked with my hair so bad.

You told us to smile and at that moment I hated you.

[very long beat]

(sound of bed movement from sitting)

(laughs) You had me going until then.

Really.

You wanted to fuck me when I was having the worst experience of my life?

(laughs harder) When we got to dry land first?

(cackle) That was almost a year ago and you still haven’t

(kissing sounds)

[angry but aroused] What the fuck man?

[pause]

Yes, I kissed back.

Look, you seem like a nice basic dudebro that has decent taste in music.

[pause]

[frustrated] You’re saying all the right things, but the right things I would want a boyfriend to say.

My whole family was mad that you broke off the engagement.

[pause]

No, I wasn’t mad.

I thought it was blown out of proportion.

Something about you choosing something that doesn’t matter over her I…

(kissing) MMMMMMMMMPF… (slam againt wall)

(gasps) Stop… wait.

Look I know my sister was probably no-frills, but I’m not sure if you can handle me.

Yes, I’m turned on but flowery words and chemistry… look I'm just a girl who wants it all.

Moan, growl, dirty talk, threats along with some good ass smacking and hair pulling, and how you notice the reasons why I choose things.

Give me proof you’re not just some dudebro that thinks being kinky is just slapping someone on the ass.

(clothing removal)

[surprised but pleased] HOLY FUCKING SHIT.

That’s a lot of fucking ink man and…

Oh, that’s one right there is fucking baller and…

And who is she?

Were you seeing her and that’s why you broke up with my sister?

Why won’t you…

(moaning into kiss)

[whispered] Fuck are we really doing this?

I can’t stop now.

[aroused] Oh fuck her, and if you fucking tangle the laces back there I will fucking kill you.

It’s not just something you can take off with like a..

(mewling, aroused sound) What did you say again about my hair?

Fuck you’re not afraid to use teeth…

My hair you said… (kissing)

Is that a fucking threat?

(fierce kissing)[talking through kissing] Try that and I’ll end you.

[confused] Arms up what?

Holy shit!

Hey, you didn’t have to…(clothing thump of rudely tossed corset)

(slamming sound) Ow! Wait wait hold… (cloth rip)

Yes, I want it.

By what I’m feeling is that if I see it first I won’t go

Oh fucking god…

I don’t know what noise you just fucking made but I’ll do whatever I can to make you do that again.

(long grunting moan as he enters you) Oh, fuck you were lucky I was wet.

(wood creaking over and over, the sound of drawers shaking, the clink of hard objects clinking through dialogue, thrusting slaps)’

Oh, fuck this hurts, this fucking hurts.

Yes, your cock hurts but I like that, your dresser is digging into my stomach, that hurts.

I don’t care, I don’t care just keep ramming me.

(shriek) FUCK! I think I got whiplash from that hair pull.

(closer to orgasm)

Yes Sir, I’m looking at you in the mirror.

No, I won’t say that.

(slap) No, I won’t say that.

(slap) I can’t say that.

(slap) Please I…

I dare you, I fucking dare you.

Why are you spitting, what are you, NO.

[serious but aroused] That’s a boundary you will NOT cross.

Why are you laughing?

Well, I was horrified.

I didn’t want to get fucked in the ass, especially with some spit as lube.

Flag... I can remember that now where were…

(bed flopping noise) What are you…

Ohhhhhh fuck… that... shit I’m glad I stopped you from fucking my ass I…

(drawer sound)[whispered] oh fuck

[pleading laugh] I was kidding about the dare.

[serious pleading] I was kidding about the dare.

I’ll say anything what do you want me to say?

I didn’t expect you to take out a studded belt!

But.. But..

Why are you pushing my skirt down over my butt I…

(lash) Oh shit.

[pause]

No no, keep the skirt there!

(lash, light) (small yelp)

[aroused]

No no no I’m a fucking wuss.

(lash, medium) (shriek)

I talk a big game but I can’t take it.

(lash, hard) (scream)

Oh god am I bleeding? Did you cut me? Flag

(sigh of relief) okay good, continue, game on.

(lash, hard) FUCK!

Do that again.

You heard me fucker, do that again.

[more aroused]

(lash, hard) Fuck you.

(lash, hard) Fuck you.

(lash, hard) Fuck you I won’t let you take pleasure out of

[painfully aroused]

(lash)(lash)(lash)(screaming) YOU WIN! YOU WIN! YOU WIN!

Yes, I’m going to be your Goth slut from now on.

Yes, I’m going to be your Goth slut from now on Sir.

With all due respect Sir, I refuse to be called or call myself a cunt so I made an editorial change and won’t change it even if you have to lash me again.

[relieved] Oh, thank god that worked.

(buckle jingle)

(gulps) Is it too late to tell you that the idea of the belt around my neck scares the hell out of me?

Flag, If I can’t breathe I’ll slap the bed 3 times for safety okay? Good.

(fast, ragged, scared breathing) Fuck that’s tight and the buckle on it is fucking freezing.

Yes Sir I can still breathe.

[scatter moans and groans over the rest of the dialogue, and add any improv you want, but the belt doesn’t tighten]

(repeated bed creaks)

Oh fuck, I love your cock, Sir.

Just fuck me… fuck me hard.

Shit, it’s so deep, so fucking deep.

I’LL BE GOOD!

[closer to orgasm]

Yes, I want to be your gothic love slave.

For now until forever.

Pull my hair please Sir?

Yank it harder than you did in front of the mirror.

Fuck yes!

It hurts so fucking good.

Fuck fuck I’ll wear a leash and collar and everything.

That would embarrass me sir and I would really hate it, but yes you can bring me out for walks.

[near orgasm]

(whispers) I’ll fucking kill you.

I didn’t say anything, sir, no no don’t please I promise I’ll be good and won’t talk back.

Just keep fucking me.

AHHH! Yes, Sir pull my hair fucking hard!

Use me as your willing fucktoy.

Yes sir, whenever you want.

I’ll drop what I’m doing and come to you.

Yes sir, I’ll practice so I can swallow your dick

You can fuck my face and cum straight down my throat!

I’ll just be a body you can dump cum in wherever you want.

I still don’t want you to fuck me in the ass sir.

(scared) please don’t… please don’t…

[edge of orgasm]

Yes yes, I’ll be good for you. I’ll be the best.

Anything else anything!

I want to fuck you better than my sister fucked you.

[backing off of arousal because…]

(holding breath as long as you can and then release in laughter) I’m sorry! I’m sorry!

(laughs) you said  “That’s not…” (belly laugh)  hard to do…”

[belt choke] (choke)(cough) that was self-inflicted.

(laughter) Flag, Flag… I’m sorry… can we just fuck like two people that want to use each other bodies? You proved your point.

(laughs) YOU and OH Thank God!

(laughs) I’ve never laughed this much in bed.

Yeah, they were doing it wrong (deep breaths) okay. Now no more talking I…

(aroused) Oooooh fuck keep making that fucking noise.

You can choke me to fucking death if you fuck like that…

Yes! Fucking impale me, fuck

(kissing in between personal growls and moans)

You are the noisiest fuck ever, I fucking love it.

[building up orgasm]

Any fucking time and you’re never taking me for a fucking walk.

OW! OW!

Do you like that?

Do you like that, my growly boy?

My knee highs boots wrapped about your back?

What would happen if I did this to you?

[closer to orgasm]

I can leave marks too, and with my claws, they will draw blood.

AH! AH! FUCK!

AH! AH! AH!

FUCK! SHIT!

OW! OW! OW!

[edge of orgasm]

Didn’t fucking expect that did you?

Didn’t expect me to fuck back?

You like it… that groan fucking…

Tells.. Me… oh fuck...

Don’t stop…

[orgasm]

(Long gasp) Oh fuccccck I’m cumming.

Keep fucking growling like that… fuck me you sister fucking bastard.

AHH! AHH! SHIT! It feels deeper and I can’t stop. I can’t stop I can’t…

(animalistic gibberish and moans for about 30 seconds that turns into a growly kiss that after a few seconds pauses suddenly into pleasurable whimpering kisses)

[winding down from orgasm]

Oh I could marry your fucking dick if you always grunt like that while your cumming.

If I wasn’t on the pill I think you would have gotten me pregnant.

I feel like you doused me out while I was in heat.

(jingle of the buckle) I really thought you were going to try to choke me to death with that thing.

I would have tried it, but thank you.

It was just enough of a scare to keep it interesting.

Hey take a picture of my ass, would you?

It hurts and I want to see it.

Oh god is it that bad.. (phone snaps)

Holy fucking shit.

I’m going to have problems sitting.

[pause]

Your bathtub has hot water jets?

That sounds wonderful, but I don’t want to do the walk of shame tomorrow.

No! I am not wearing my sister’s clothes…

[pause]

If you’ll part with them yeah.

Okay if she left sneakers here I’ll wear those.

[teasing] How do you know I don’t have any tattoos.

I could have an Ankh on my ankle.

(kiss) Yeah, no tattoos. Too indecisive about that.

Who’s the girl that is tattooed on your heart?

Was she a girlfriend or…?

Awww… your sister?

You have your brother on your back?

Let me see?

That’s sick!

[pause]

Oh, that’s fucking hardcore!

So both their grades went up and now they’ll graduate on time?

[pause]

You’re a good brother doing that, and my sister is a bitch for wanting you to get your sister removed from your body.

You made the right call.

[long pause]

So this tub with hot water jets?

What do you mean wait?

(drawer opens)

Gwenyth Paltrow’s head better not be in this box.

[pause]

Oh wow, this cameo is fucking beautiful.

[pause]

I'm not surprised.

[pause]

You want me to have it?

[pause]

I couldn't! It looks like a family heirloom.

[pause]

Just vintage?

[pause]

Your right, she wouldn't appreciate something like this.

[pause]

[serious] Just to be clear, I only do that whole Sir thing occasionally when fucking.

It’s not a lifestyle and things were said in the heat of the moment for fun and…

[pause]

Well yeah... I’d like to keep doing this.

[pause]

And this gift is no strings attached?

[pause]

Just appreciate it?

Oh honey, the wannabe full-time goth girl inside me is cackling with glee.

I'm going to wear this at every fucking opportunity I can.

(laughs) Is this because you feel bad about beating my ass?

(giggly kiss) Thank you.

I'll put it on after the bath.

Oooh I'll wear it when I drag you to Ten of Swords so you can scare away the assholes, but you better fucking dance!

Now go get me a glass of ice water to sip on, then you can unlace my boots.

I’m not going to stand up and drip cum on them on the way to your tub.

You're going to put on a record for mood music, and you can sit down next to the tub like a good boy while we talk shit about my sister.