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- Hey there! :3
- I like your terrain - you have good variation, and a nice floating island! However I wouldn't use ores to detail the stone, I'd use blocks like cobble/andesite etc.
- Secondly, your organics. You have really nice trees! However, there is one that is a little out of place - the leaves are shaped like a pyramid. It doesn't fit on the plot!
- Lastly, structure. The boat is way too simple, and replicates modern, which is not ranked.
- As far as the buildings go, they're okay, and have good detail, but the roofs need some improvement. Make them something along the lines of this: https://imgur.com/a/Lr9Ab#0
- I wouldn't use quite so many cobblestone walls as detail - they should be used sparsely; too many looks odd. Instead, use stonebrick stairs/slabs - not too many, but a few just to make some basic shapes and design.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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