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- Aspirant Review:
- Decent plot so far but theres a lot to work on:
- Theres only one structure on the plot, and where i do like it actually, there just needs to be more of them! (maybe bigger ones too idk x33) The trees need to be buffed up a bit more (you can keep the small trees but they dont do much for a plot if theres only a few of them, so have a few bigger ones to balance it out and give the plot more atmosphere). The terrain rn is just a flat-ish slope going up, so really play with that and give it a whole bunch of different layers and levels :D
- The nether part of the plot is pretty cool too btw, but maybe add a structure in there somewhere too idk xD
- Good luck with your plot!! I hope we can rank you up soon :D
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