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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. From my last review, there's still a lot missing! I prefer the tree now, definitely, but there could be more around. The terrain looks a lot smoother, but the structure has way too many slabs spammed on the pillar. The roof is also the same, as far as I remember.
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  5. You have so much free space on the plot that you need to still fill; try making more structures, more organics and definitely include more atmosphere - at the moment its just way too open and the things you have on the plot are so randomly placed, you can tell you haven't really thought about it at all!
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  7. Good luck!
  8. - Dutty :3
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