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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far but theres a few things you should work on before you rank you x3
- First, the terrain is nice but it could use a few more levels. Theres a lower level thats the middle, and an upper lever thats the boarder, but having a few dips or differences in the terrain would be nicer :)
- The trees are okay, but they do need some work, the spruce tree is niceley done, so maybe try to make a few more and spread them around.
- Now the structure is nice as well, but there should be a few more of them with a few more block variations, rather than just oak and stonebrick!
- Overall decent plot, but keep working on it and goodluck!
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