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Kamigakari Core Book - Typo/Error Report

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  1. As suggested by anon, here's my collected typo/error stuff. I ommitted the ones that were already covered in the Errata.
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  4. Found a word missing on page 100 of the PDF under 'Familiar':
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  6. > You employ a spirit or some kind of small that supports you in your investigations and magic use.
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  8. There should probably be the word 'animal' between 'small' and 'that'.
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  10. On page 101 armor is spelled in both British (armour) and American (armor) versions in the same entry.
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  12. Maybe turn 'Hand-and-a-Half Sword' into either 'Longsword' or 'Bastard Sword' to avoid confusion.
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  14. There's a weird formatting (?) error on page 185. The little triange in the description after "marked with a ..." is invisible. If I copy it into a doc it's there, but in the PDF it shows only a blank space.
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  16. This recurs a couple of times. I noticed it in one of the sample Episoded, were the 'number in a circle' after 'Player' was invisible, too.
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  18. Page 185: Delinquent
  19. "A student an attitude problem."
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  21. The 'with' is missing.
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  23. In the table on page 228, under 6-No Influence it says 'Spirit Rest' in the Effect description instead of 'Spirit Crest'.
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  25. On page 236, under Action 3
  26. >One a [Simple Move] is made, please be aware that [Action 14: Standby] cannot be declared.
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  28. 'One' should be 'Once'.
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  30. Page 299, Winds of Death
  31. > By using something akin a sealed weapon or a forbidden spell
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  33. There's a 'to' missing after 'akin'.
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  36. CONT.
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  38. I've read this a couple times, but does 'Concept: False God' contradict itself?
  39. > Until all [Distortions] other than those with [Sense: N/A] appearing in the episode are dealt with, or until the [Final Battle], when [Combat End] occurs the target gains [Remove: All negative Shifts], and can recover up to their maximum HP. This Talent has no effect if there are [Distortions] in the episode.
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  41. Until all Distortions are dealt with, this talent is in effect, but this talent has no effect if there are Distortions in the episode. What?
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  43. Is there a 'no' missing?
  44. > no effect if there are NO Distortions in the episode.
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  46. Page 310, end of second-to-last paragraph:
  47. > may become an [Source]
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  49. may become a [Source]
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  51. Page 345, Bloodsucker Locust
  52. > The victim of a bloodsucker locust has all of their bloodsucked in ten seconds
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  54. Missing space in 'bloodsucked'.
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  56. Syntax: Page 351, Sakabashira
  57. > over time it grew self-awareness and cursed humans
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  59. Either use 'it gained self-awareness' or 'it grew self-aware'. Otherwise it just sounds weird.
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  61. Page 364, Tenko
  62. Under Materials 10+
  63. > Foul-Tailed Spirit Crest
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  65. Is this correct? Foul-Tailed? Sounds odd.
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  67. Page 403, Narration
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  69. > Teresa tells you to perish the wicked
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  71. That's not phrase that actually exists. Maybe 'punish the wicked'?
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