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- As suggested by anon, here's my collected typo/error stuff. I ommitted the ones that were already covered in the Errata.
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- Found a word missing on page 100 of the PDF under 'Familiar':
- > You employ a spirit or some kind of small that supports you in your investigations and magic use.
- There should probably be the word 'animal' between 'small' and 'that'.
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- On page 101 armor is spelled in both British (armour) and American (armor) versions in the same entry.
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- Maybe turn 'Hand-and-a-Half Sword' into either 'Longsword' or 'Bastard Sword' to avoid confusion.
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- There's a weird formatting (?) error on page 185. The little triange in the description after "marked with a ..." is invisible. If I copy it into a doc it's there, but in the PDF it shows only a blank space.
- This recurs a couple of times. I noticed it in one of the sample Episoded, were the 'number in a circle' after 'Player' was invisible, too.
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- Page 185: Delinquent
- "A student an attitude problem."
- The 'with' is missing.
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- In the table on page 228, under 6-No Influence it says 'Spirit Rest' in the Effect description instead of 'Spirit Crest'.
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- On page 236, under Action 3
- >One a [Simple Move] is made, please be aware that [Action 14: Standby] cannot be declared.
- 'One' should be 'Once'.
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- Page 299, Winds of Death
- > By using something akin a sealed weapon or a forbidden spell
- There's a 'to' missing after 'akin'.
- CONT.
- I've read this a couple times, but does 'Concept: False God' contradict itself?
- > Until all [Distortions] other than those with [Sense: N/A] appearing in the episode are dealt with, or until the [Final Battle], when [Combat End] occurs the target gains [Remove: All negative Shifts], and can recover up to their maximum HP. This Talent has no effect if there are [Distortions] in the episode.
- Until all Distortions are dealt with, this talent is in effect, but this talent has no effect if there are Distortions in the episode. What?
- Is there a 'no' missing?
- > no effect if there are NO Distortions in the episode.
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- Page 310, end of second-to-last paragraph:
- > may become an [Source]
- may become a [Source]
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- Page 345, Bloodsucker Locust
- > The victim of a bloodsucker locust has all of their bloodsucked in ten seconds
- Missing space in 'bloodsucked'.
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- Syntax: Page 351, Sakabashira
- > over time it grew self-awareness and cursed humans
- Either use 'it gained self-awareness' or 'it grew self-aware'. Otherwise it just sounds weird.
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- Page 364, Tenko
- Under Materials 10+
- > Foul-Tailed Spirit Crest
- Is this correct? Foul-Tailed? Sounds odd.
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- Page 403, Narration
- > Teresa tells you to perish the wicked
- That's not phrase that actually exists. Maybe 'punish the wicked'?
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