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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain. You have great terrain, all hand built. However, the outside of the terrain walls (like the corners etc) are a bit too flat. You could add way more layers to them! Especially as you've made it look like a big box, which I guess was part of the idea, but you definitely need to make the edges more organic/cliff like.
- I'd also suggest not adding ores into the stone. This is extremely uncreative and overdone. If you want to mix more block types in, I suggest something along the lines of cobble/stonebrick/andesite etc.
- Secondly, organics. You have none - organics of any kind would be really nice on a plot! This could be an animal/plant/person etc - make sure they're hand built though! Not spawned, or a small 'two block' animal with a skull on it.
- Lastly, your structures. The wooden structures inside are okay, if not a little basic, but the complexity is interesting. The 'modernish' houses/buildings on top of the plot have to be changed. We don't accept modern. And if that isn't modern, it needs way more detailing/depth and layers anyway, with a more interesting palette than only iron blocks.
- Also, your vehicles that you have made are copied from a YouTube tutorial. We don't like seeing this and request that you delete these immediately.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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