xDraghun

Dgirlz9 Plot Review

Jul 21st, 2015
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  1. Hello Dgirlz9!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and today i will be reviewing your plot. Lets start off with your structures.
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  5. You structure is really nice but it lacks detail, and the design you have rn is a little repetitive. For more reference, do ./warp depthtutorial.
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  7. Your trees are pretty nice and shows effort especially since its custom made. Next time, try adding branches/ leaves to ur tree for a more realistic and detailed effect.
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  9. Your terrain has some pretty smooth hills but its a little plain and flat. Try to add more blocks to ur terrain for variation, such as green clay, cobblestone. Make the bottom of your pond all sand/sandstone and add flowers around it for more color and detail.
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  11. I think you are able to rank up pretty soon if u listen to my suggestions. Hope you have a better chance with your next submission and Good Luck! :D
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