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- Hello Nytestrike, Im Tayter_Kat and ill be reviewing your plot...
- I usually write a paragraph about what you did amazing and what you could improve your plot with. So lets start. Your ship is great but the lake seems to small to fit in. also, the terrain( the ground and the organics) isn't anything special. Try adding hills and holes to improve it, along with grass, flowers, dead bushes, leaves ect as well
- Work on this and you will do great as a Novice!
- -Tayter_Kat
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