Richard's App

Hi Richard,
First of all thank you for applying and showing interest in the race once again.
I have gone through your answers, but unfortunately, there were many errors.

[size=4]Section 1:[/size]

[b]Question 3:[/b]
[quote author=Richard link=topic=2324.msg8601#msg8601 date=1584126029]
Larry Burton doesn't give a fuck or two about the traditions especially since he diablerized his mentor and will be killed by Isaac Wylcoff most likely.[quote]
The question ask about the character you're applying for, how would your Tremere view the traditions, and how would he act?

[b]Question 4:[/b]
For your information, 6-8th generations are also considered low. They are not very hard to find unless you're speaking about Methuselahs.
Now, you also forgot to speak about age.

[b]Question 5:[/b]
[quote author=Richard link=topic=2324.msg8601#msg8601 date=1584126029]
that way the mortal awakes as a neonate[/quote]
No, this is Fledgeling.

[quote author=Richard link=topic=2324.msg8601#msg8601 date=1584126029]
every kindred hates and despises this practice except for the sabbat and the clan of assassins[quote]
This is not true.

[size=4]Section 2:[/size]

[b]Question 1:[/b]
Re-write the answer, this isn't even specifying how the Sabbat originated, and also describing the Camarilla's origins poorly.

[b]Question 3:[/b]
[quote author=Richard link=topic=2324.msg8601#msg8601 date=1584126029]
she used the name Taylor[/quote]
Tyler

[b]Question 4:[/b]
This is clearly from Whitewolf.

[size=4]Section 3:[/size]
The section as a whole is extremely short, and lack of information.
This is a big nono on the whole section, along with outdated screenshots.
Also on question number 6 you mentioned you'll simply dominate that human, how? you have sacrificed your Dominate knowledge for Daimoinon.

[size=4]Character Creation:[/size]

You grabbed Apostate as a Merit, this means you're no longer a Tremere, you're pretty much applying for a Baali.
[quote author=Richard link=topic=2324.msg8601#msg8601 date=1584126029]
[color=white][b]Disciplines:[/b][/color] Auspex, Daimoimon.[/quote]
It's Daimoinon! (or Daimonion, depends on the book version). >:(

[b]Kiss of Death (2pt. Flaw):[/b] Denied.

[b]Story:[/b]
The story as a whole is very rushed and silly.
About the Apostate part, this FAR from reality.
Baali do not behave this way, and they will never admit their clan EVEN EXISTS before they would turn you dark enough that there would be no way back. They are extremely picky about their childes, and even then, they would let them die in the pit in case they fail the embrace test.
Also, this is not how Baali [i]Re-Embrace[/i], this is how they [i]Embrace[/i], and even then, you think they'd tell you before they'd throw you into the pit? Fuck no. They knock you unconscious, drain you, and let you find yourself waking up in a pit full of rotten human organs, maggots, stench and what not. You gotta crawl desperately to the bottom with no air or blood in your system and devour a human heart with a bit of Baali blood in it. Shall you fail and you become another corpse in the pit.

The Re-Embrace ritual, on the other hand, would involve slitting your throat, filling 3 bowls with your blood, and another 3 bowls with the sire in question's blood. Then a long-hours dark ritual has to be made in order to make the corruption of Namtaru taint the already-tainted blood further and mix it together. After that, the blood would flow in the air into the body of the re-embraced childe.

Unfortunately, this application is [color=red]Denied[/color].
There are just too many errors, from Section 3 and below.
I've noticed your zeal to get a Baali ever since Richard's days, but sadly this application as a whole isn't sufficient enough.
I would suggest you to read both of the Tremere Clanbook and the Baali Clanbook in case you would like to have that cross in the future.