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- Hello CelestialDiamond!!!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today.
- I'm going to make this review plain and simple for you. To rank up, your would need three major parts which are organics, structure, and terrain. So far your have a structure with no depth, detail or shape, and you have no terrain or organics. Honestly, I would like you to start your plot all over. The walls on your structure seem repetitive. Work on building your structures with more detail and depth and try not to use the same/one blocks. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial if needed. Also try to give your structure shape because it's basically two of the same rectangular boxes connected with arches.For initiates, its most common that they build trees. Try implementing trees into your plot and add branches, roots, air holes, etc for a realistic and really detailed feel to it. For your terrain, work on building small mountains or at list bigger hills. Don't stick with just regular grass blocks and add variation by adding cobblestone, gravel, podzol, or any block that matches your palette.
- I have concluded that this plot is far from being ranked up. Good Luck and I hope you put more effort on to your next submission. :D
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