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SuperSmash_101's Initiate Review

Jun 17th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. First of all, you lack in both terrain and organics. This would be okay if you had an absolutely beautiful structure, but as it is, there's a lot to be improved here.
  4. Mainly, your structure lacks shape - it's a giant cube, the most unoriginal shape you could have chosen. I'm not saying this to be rude of anything, it's just fact. Not to mention, it's all made from one block, and has not even a slither of detail or depth.
  5. The interior is also way too bare, if it were to pass, you'd need a lot more interior.
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  7. Have a look at /spawn to see what you need to pass at each rank.
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  9. Good luck!
  10. - Dutty :3
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