corengames

R*Novice Review: EliteXplosion

Jul 6th, 2015
168
0
Never
Not a member of Pastebin yet? Sign Up, it unlocks many cool features!
text 1.61 KB | None | 0 0
  1. Novice Review:
  2.  
  3. Heyo, good plot, but theres some stuff to work on before ranking up!
  4.  
  5. Your terrain is okay, but its very messy and uncoordinated. Keep your terrain flowing smoothly but remember not to keep it too smooth. Having terrain thats too smooth makes it look strange and too polished. However, having it too rough will make it look messy and unrefined.
  6. The palette for the terrain is cool, but try to play with it a bit more :p Be creative!
  7.  
  8. Your structures are generally all decent, but theyre all very slabby. Dont use slabs for the sake of using slabs, use them for detailing, along with stairs, fences or even buttons. Keep your detailing to an appropriate level as well. Over detailing such as slab spam, can make your build look weird and messy.
  9. Add depth to your builds as well. Add more layers to them to give your build a sense of depth and deepness. This helps catch the eye of people looking at the build.
  10.  
  11. Now for your organics.
  12. Theyre okay, but the trunks of the trees might be too wide, and the branches too short. This makes your trees look off if not done properly. Smooth out the trunks of the trees and buff up the branches so they match the size of the tree.
  13. Normally I say for people to use a higher percentage of air in their brushes when doing leaves, but in this case, i think you should lower your percentage of air. The leaves look too random, like theyre not attached to anything. Also it might be a good idea to pick one block as your main, and one as an accent for the leaves. The various glasses make it seem messy.
  14. The rest are okay, but you still might want to work on those.
  15.  
  16. Good luck!
Advertisement
Add Comment
Please, Sign In to add comment