Logic's Novice Review

Hey there! :3

Firstly, terrain. You have a good variation in layers, and a nice palette - I like that you've mixed clay and other blocks in with the netherrack. It adds a nice level of detail to the terrain.

Secondly, organics. I like the dead trees, they work really well with the style of the plot. But the trees that have netherrack as the leaves doesn't work that well. I would highly recommend not using the same block you used for terrain in the trees. It just looks totally unbalanced.

Lastly, structure. Your small houses are okay, however the detailing is a little checkerboarded - you've used anvils and multiple other blocks in a checkerboard kind of pattern, and it looks a bit too basic - it's not a very creative design. Also the red clay in the roof is a bit strange. I think it would be a nice idea to make the whole roof out of red clay, in a style similar to this:
https://imgur.com/WgvhAUP

Also, the tower is looking really nice. It has alright detail until you reach the bottom. I'd use more full blocks on the bottom than slabs to balance the structure, to make it more realistic. Also, more colour and palette than only netherbrick.

Good luck!
- Dutty :3