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- I was talking to C.U.D anon on discord (who made the CUD storys) and I bring back a old idea I made on "/hhg/ - Hazbin Hotel #284".
- the bizarre barren wasteland of hell: https://pastebin.com/XEA0kzjz
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- hey dude...um.... do you remember that pic of vaggie getting 'kill' and I made a greentext of her getting by the 'shadow lady'. a mythical thing in hell?. I got more of it
- it's a nutshell idea.
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- Vaggie getting killed?
- I recall something, with regards to a dark Charlastor fanart.
- I don't recall a "shadow lady" though,
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- I made it on /hhg/
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- OK, I can't remember that. But it sounds interesting.
- So, does she meet the Shadow Lady after respawning?
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- not really, vaggie was at near death door (again) but she got save by her.
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- ...Don't remember that part.
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- also I think the respawning thing is stupid. as I said before, I made it on /hhg/
- it's there before the 300
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- Well, we call it a "respawn", but as Viv described it, it's more like the characters s l o w l y pulling themselves back together. I'd imagine it works faster with more powerful sinners and demons.
- But being on death's door?
- Well, Vaggie has her spear, and they could probably turn that against her.
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- ok... can I post the nutshell idea now?.
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- Sure, go ahead!
- Wolf?
- Are you still here?
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- "after vaggie got save by her, she lost completely lost hope. her only friend/lover, try to kill her and betrayed her by working with AI when she tell not too. all vaggie want to is cry her eye out but shadow lady want to help, get vaggie back on her feet & find happiness. there no way that vaggie is going back to the hotel (she loss hope on that) and only person(?) she got is the shadow lady.... vaggie decided to stay with her. little vaggie know, she will become a new myth among denons... the ghost moth."
- I am trying to find how this all started.
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- Oh, neat!
- Yeah, interesting angle - it's kinda like Vaggie going rogue, but it's actually Charlie and the Hotel itself going awry.
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- found it:
- "ok, here how I imagine it will goes
- I am not really good at green text but I hope you like this"
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-hz-yiQkmGY
- >Vaggie feels like she has been hit by a truck.
- >she open her eye and notice she not in the hotel, it look she in a forest.
- >she try to move, but a sharp stabbing pain in her lower back stop her.
- >vaggie look down at her body and see she was cover in Bandages.
- >'how am I in a forest and why am I cover in Bandages?' vaggie thoughts to herself.
- >she being to think back how she got here, the only she can remember was....
- >...alastor and charlie...
- >it hit vaggie like a ton of bricks, she remember now.
- >"charlie attack... she try to kill me an- and... alastor join on it."
- >both of them almost vaggie kill, both of them laughing like psychopath while cuting her down.
- >but how she got here... then she hear something on her right.
- >she turn her head to look what made that noise.
- >2 white glowing eyes was looking at her, it look like the body was made out of pure darkness...
- >has it got closer, it look like a girl.
- >the shadow sit right next to vaggie and put it arms around her.... hugging her
- >"am so sorry that happen to you." the shadow say to vaggie.
- >an another memory pop in her head, when she alastor and charlie left her on the ground to bleed out.
- >she saw a shadow moving towards her before she pass out from blood loss.
- >this... person save her life... but how could charlie betray me.
- >vaggie being to tearing up, how could charlie betray her. she was always at her side when no one was.
- >and this how charlie repaid her? with a knife in her back!?
- >vaggie start to cry her eye out, the shadow person hug her closer
- >"...why charlie... why?"
- "is this good?... I have no idea if this is good."
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- Oh yeah!
- I remember now!
- Just didn't recall the Shadow Lady from it.
- But yeah, interesting idea.
- Will the Shadow Lady be a kind of mentor to her?
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- yeah and I do have a idea for when vaggie was "gone." basically charlie was brainwash by AI, 666 news report of "how weird is the Princess of hell is acting weird". lucifer see this and immediately realized this is brainwash because he seen this shit before, he kill AI (because I have no idea what to do with him) he Un-brainwash charlie. charlie had a breakdown that she "kill" vaggie & the happy hotel closed for good. husk, nifty, and angel dust join with her (2 of them how no idea where to go next and angel want to get away from his pimp.) now they live in lucifer home and lucifer ask them to look over her.
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- Al could simply be outsmarted by one of the others - Niffty seems pretty onboard with his shenanigans, but Husk and Angel may have had enough of him after finding out about Vaggie's death. Lucifer would probably like his daughter acting more nefariously, and Killjoy would simply just report it as Charlie throwing away her pipe dream to follow in her father's footsteps.
- Maybe Tom could point out that something seems odd about the complete 180, only to be dismissed... But, provided that both Lucifer and Lilith are watching this, this could be the first alarm bell for Lilith.
- She later discusses it with Lucifer, who'd then realize that a Magne doesn't just "get over his or her idea" like that, and would get suspicious as well, deciding to visit the Hotel.
- With Charlie acting increasingly creepier, and no sign of Vaggie, Angel would start to worry, and goad Husk into standing up to Al...
- Which goes about as well as you'd expect, and Al wouldn't hesitate to show off just how much she has Charlie under his control, having her try to kill Angel, when...
- Devil ex machina! Lucifer shows up, realizes Alastor's ruse, and, with a sad smile and a "Shame. I was starting to like you.", he'd sever his connection to what ever dark lord he gains his power from, depowering him, and then summarily beating the crap out of his weakened form, before punting him across the city.
- Finally snapping out her trance, Charlie breaks down sobbing - she's sure she killed Vaggie for good, and the Hotel is basically over before it started.
- Lucifer would try to use this to reconnect with Charlie, and have Angel and Husk made his loyal subjects (as a reward for trying to help Charlie escape Alastor's grasp, and not punishing them for basically being accomplices in the whole mess, ESPECIALLY Husk and Niffty). As a result, they all end up as Charlie's servants - which Niffty doesn't mind, Husk is apathetic about, and Angel is glad that he'd still get away from Val... Albeit Chateau de Magne has stricter rules than the Hotel, and he'd soon find himself acting as Lilith and Lucifer's bedroom toy.
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- ..wow... thank you for this.
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- Not done yet, though.
- With the Happy Hotel shuttered, Al removed from power completely (and disappearing), and Vaggie being gone, Charlie's now in a depressive slump - she can't really go forward. Angel tries to help her (mainly because he wants to get out of the house - the Royal couple are proving to be too much for even his libido), and on the street, introduces her to Cherri Bomb.
- The two get a disguise for her (based on her old design, or one of the alternate designs the fans came up for her), and the three decide to have some "fun", vandalizing shit, drinking, etc... Cherri suggest drugs, too, but Angel, remembering one of the reasons he went to the Hotel in the first place, decides against it... Which turns out to be a good idea, since a drunken Charlie manages to whip up the street crowd into a riot, and they begin destroying the city...
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- holy shit
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- The trio then try to get away, and are rescued/kidnapped by Sir Pentious...
- Who immediately sees through Charlie's disguise (when no-one else did), and accuses THEM of kidnapping the princess. Now that he holds all the cards, he manages to keep them both trapped (after a few cliché attempts from Angel and Vaggie to get away, while Charlie is too sick and tired to do anything), and proves how competent he is with his machines, when he evades a bunch of air pirates. They end up in his turf, a surprisingly well-organized and well kept, Tesla-esque Victorian-futurist neighborhood, which her keeps in order, with businesses and commerce running, both for the locals, and for him... This surprises Cherri, who never really had interest in the whole upkeep and logistics of her turf, ruling it with infamy alone... And she realizes that she's been kinda skimping out on the whole "lord" part of the warlord business. While Sir Pent is somewhat impressed at her revelation, he's more focused on getting the Princess home. After refueling, he heads straight for Pandemonium, with Angel trying to convince him not to go there, trying to escape the blame. Nothing works, with both Sir Pent, and surprisingly Cherri telling him that it's time to own up.
- So, he plucks up courage, and manages to not bolt - instead, he goes out of his way to explain to Lucifer and Lilith that the whole thing was his idea, that Charlie didn't do any drugs, and that he takes full responsibility (shocking both Sir Pent and Cherri in the background), only for Lucifer and Lilith to laugh, telling him that they're actually glad that Charlie took a ride on the wild side for once. and tell him that they're glad she had done so with someone she could trust. This actually moves Angel... Until Lilith makes candidly asks if Sir Pent and Cherri are "an item", causing the two to blush, splutter, and just run off, initially together, then splitting up.
- Meanwhile, a confused, amnesiac man named Alastor is stumbling his way through a city of monsters, haunted/hunted by loose memories.
- That, of a blonde haired woman...
- And a grey haired one.
- The latter of whom seems to be out for his blood, appearing and disappearing in a swarm of moths.
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- most likely someone going to find AI head on a exterminator spear or something.
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- idea #1, Vaggie views the myth and legends creatures of hell as her new friends or even like family to her.
- and idea #2, charlie keep having the same nightmare of her killing vaggie or AI with her, killing the only person who love her & the only person who support her dream. (this is poking fun of kill art of vaggie. I have no idea why they made art of that for some fucking reason.)
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