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- Novice Review:
- Cute plot so far but theres one or two things you could work on before ranking!
- Your structures are fine so no need to worry about those right now! Though having one or two more could be nice additions to the plot!
- The trees are nice as well, but there could for sure be some more!
- The only thing i really want you to work on is the terrain. Right now it seems a bit boxy and unrefined. And the spikes are a tad unusual. Try to add more to the terrain and smooth it out to make it less boxy (but dont make it too smooth, that'll look strange). Also, maybe form the spikes together to create mountain peaks, rather than spikes. Might also be a good idea to add a hill on the other side by the wheat farm to give the terrain more texture :)
- Good luck!
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