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  1. 1)introduction to hades: intro feels underlayered, I feel like it would have worked better to not have jumps on every 4th and to just emphasize the percussion instead. during the js I feel it might have been better to step the drums as a short jt rather than break the layering scheme and make them 1h trills (which makes them less distinguishable from the normal js). that pattern at the end is obnoxious
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  3. 2)hades: the end of the buildup around 240 combo into the file feels wrong since you had a nice layering scheme going on with the jumpjacks but then gave up on that to chart the holds? not really sure what happened there but it felt anticlimactic. theres a few points in the js where there are jumps every 8th while in the song the only notable percussion is happening on every 4th, which felt off. other than that the file is ok
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  5. 3)regulus: the trilly buildup is super nice, but then around 660ish combo into the file the buildup should start having jmps every 8th but you stick to 4ths only? then the buildup in the song ends but the js still goes for like another full measure???? other than that no real issues, although again that 32nd runningman burst at the end is sure to piss people off.
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  7. 4)memento mori: the intro seems like a bad attempt at PR but i honestly cant tell if you were trying to pr or not. ill assume you weren't.you'll probably get a lot of shit for the holdstream but I personally like files centered around holds. only real issue with the file is the super awkward 16th jacks during the short break near the end. that is file-ruining material right there.
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  9. 5)ill shit: the build up around 590 combo into the file randomly turns to 16ths instead of using the 32nds that you had just a measure before that. what happened??????? other than that the file is fine
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  11. 6)revolver: i zoned out while playing this but I dont recall any issues. oops.
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  13. 7)majestic 12: the js for the first half of the file is completely unfitting. the percussion is 3 16ths with 1 6th rest, so it wouldve felt more appropriate to have patterns centered around that rhythm rather than just fill it in with generic js. only other complaint is the stepped vocals near the end, it gets really messy randomly switching between stepping the vocals and the music behind it. it feels arbitrary when you decide to step vocals over the music, or the music over the vocals.
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  15. 8)colors of summer: the 16th js in the middle and the 12ths at the end are literally going to the exact same music. why are they stepped so differently?
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  17. 9)darsana: what are the jumps in the break going to? they arent following the percussion OR the melody, what the fuck are they going to?
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  19. 10)walkure: theres some nasty anchors in the js but they arent too much of an issue. probably the best file in the pack so far
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  21. 11)dharma: no serious issues here but its not particularly interesting either.
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  23. 12) winter is coming: absurd amounts of unstepped percussion. did you listen to the song before stepping?
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  25. 13)hades camellia: no serious issues here
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  27. 14)unite: stop dumping the vocals the the music is doing much more interesting things to step. it seems you learned that at the end of the file but never went back to do that for the beginning.
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