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- Haruka: And yet,@what awaited us in Kamihama was a powerful witch.@In such a desperate crisis, they appeared...
- --> capitalize witch
- Haruka: N-no, there's nothing,
- --> change the second comma to a period
- Haruka: I'll be going to the museum together with Natsuki and Aimi.@Matsuri will be going over to Kanoko's house, which she was invited to.@Arisa and Chisato will be going to an idol concert.
- --> add a line break before "which"
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- Haruka: That night, I felt a terrible sense of regret.@Those words were something that I never should have said.@No excuse like "it was just an impulse" could justify what I had done.
- --> add a line break before "could"
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