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- Hey there!
- So firstly, your terrain. It's completely flat, minus a pond and a small cave round the back. I understand that the majority of this plot is covered by the structure, but that doesn't mean you can't have some layers of grass under and around the building.
- Secondly, your organics. I like the shape of it; it's very unusual, but it works. I'd suggest maybe a few more leaves a little further down the tree, just because it looks like a sudden change.
- Lastly, your structure. This could have easily had depth if you'd have done something like this with the quarts:
- https://imgur.com/ONsoRxh
- (Of course imagining the logs were quarts, and the wool was brick)
- This adds a simple amount of depth, and it's a small change but it changes the building so much - for the better! That would make the outside of the building appear much more detailed. I can see you have building skill, you have a good eye for creativity in structure and shape of things, it's just finer details that need adjusting.
- If you apply that change, you can add some detailing with the use of stairs/slabs maybe; quarts? Just subtly placed to add to the build :D
- You build is edging on the modern side, which we normally don't accept, but this has potential to show detailing, which a lot of modern builds don't.
- Also, I like the interior :p Very stylish!
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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