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  1. 4:08 PM] olivinearc: i'm slowly fillin it in (rip) but like ummm
  2. [4:09 PM] olivinearc: so week one's i think is a tiny one, probably related to who you stumbled upon during the bite, where they have a little talk before the big doc checkup probs over a meal or a text but it still counts as a scene in terms of peopole like... searching for scenes of their char, if that makes sense
  3. [4:09 PM] olivinearc: while week 2 is based more on affection points or choice and is a little more indepth
  4. [4:11 PM] Thirteenth: that makes sense, yeah
  5. [4:11 PM] Thirteenth: oof okay
  6. [4:11 PM] olivinearc: like we can probs ditch the uhh week 1 variant if need be it's like this
  7. [4:11 PM] olivinearc: one sec
  8. [4:11 PM] olivinearc: 7:50 AM] olivinearc: I think my major hangup is constantly thinking people won't be happy dealing with scenes not related to their love interest even though intentionally this story isn't about it so idk why I keep even considering it
  9. [7:50 AM] olivinearc: Like I can't streamline it that much more
  10. [7:51 AM] NeonBlack: honestly, anyone who's ever played a vn knows that a common route means having to deal (and get to know) all the LIs before getting to pick
  11. [7:52 AM] NeonBlack: heck, they might even change their minds halfway through about their favorites
  12. [7:52 AM] NeonBlack: so don't worry too much about it, people will deal
  13. [7:52 AM] NeonBlack: (and if they don't the ctrl key is right there)
  14. [7:52 AM] olivinearc: True that
  15. [7:52 AM] olivinearc: OK, ur right
  16. [4:12 PM] Thirteenth: idk much about vns but neon sounds correct to me
  17. [4:12 PM] olivinearc: yeah
  18. [4:12 PM] olivinearc: yeahhh
  19. [4:12 PM] olivinearc: it's just stressful even thinking about nov bc
  20. [4:12 PM] olivinearc: di realistically would be like totally "nope" to all vamps esp in first week right
  21. [4:12 PM] olivinearc: but we gotta break her out of that real careful
  22. [4:13 PM] Thirteenth: right...
  23. [4:13 PM] Thirteenth: i mean rooming with madi makes it hard to get away from it anyway
  24. [4:13 PM] olivinearc: right, and she's kidna the meanest
  25. [4:13 PM] olivinearc: but i do think like maybe
  26. [4:13 PM] olivinearc: i like making her too harsh, but she might try to like
  27. [4:13 PM] olivinearc: kinda sorta olivebranch
  28. [4:14 PM] olivinearc: most of the events don't have notes (yet, they're only on the actual outline doc from before) but yvonne's 10th and madi's gacha both have ideas bc they weren't on the og doc
  29. [4:14 PM] olivinearc: ugh spiderverse soundtrack is too gud
  30. [4:15 PM] Thirteenth: it isssss. listened to it all day at work yesterday
  31. [4:16 PM] Thirteenth: mm idk too much about madi but i feel like it makes sense for someone to try to keep the peace with someone they live with so
  32. [4:16 PM] olivinearc: true
  33. [4:16 PM] olivinearc: i feel like before this time, for the scenario to even work like
  34. [4:16 PM] olivinearc: di intentionally avoids when madi is usually around??
  35. [4:16 PM] olivinearc: esp bc she would have to schedule time to record her vids and everything
  36. [4:17 PM] olivinearc: get out the house, generally hang around robin, general unapproachibilty and etc.
  37. [4:17 PM] olivinearc: like di and madi have probs hung out once or twice int he past but di is. bad.
  38. [4:18 PM] Thirteenth: oh, hmm...
  39. [4:19 PM] olivinearc: roomates for about two months tops basically
  40. [4:19 PM] olivinearc: and don't get me wrong
  41. [4:19 PM] olivinearc: i think madi sort of in her own way just like
  42. [4:19 PM] olivinearc: never bothered
  43. [4:19 PM] olivinearc: not maliciously or anything but she's always sort of like. different social circles.
  44. [4:19 PM] olivinearc: different obligations, having to be out at night a fair amount to hunt and such.
  45. [4:19 PM] Thirteenth: makes sense
  46. [4:20 PM] olivinearc: but now the group project gives them that excuse to hang around, and di likely sticks around indoors a little more now
  47. [4:20 PM] olivinearc: in dorm, rather
  48. [4:20 PM] olivinearc: bc of the ankle
  49. [4:20 PM] olivinearc: ...
  50. [4:20 PM] Thirteenth: truee
  51. [4:20 PM] olivinearc: that could work
  52. [4:20 PM] olivinearc: :thinking:
  53. [4:20 PM] olivinearc: like i like things leading to other things yfeel jme fjsdlkdsf
  54. [4:20 PM] olivinearc: which i think works, there's never going to be a full clear conscience that isn't "could this be BETTER?"
  55. [4:21 PM] olivinearc: so i was thinking for week 2, lemme grab
  56. [4:22 PM] olivinearc: - week 2: di is at the diner, seb tells her the book arrived and he leaves to go get it since he's literally on the same street, her and robin chat for a bit before he comes back. he can mention that people also tend to study at the bookstore.
  57. - optional week 2: probably something with galatea since robin also owns a cat or a multi-chara scene, something something contest w/ forr or yv or whoever about who can pick up a bite the quickest. could also use parts in the callout thing w/ madi.
  58. - week 3: di stops in at the bookstore because studying, talks about what happened with madi and/or finds madi just leaving, decides to study in here
  59. - week 4: ex @ diner or bookstore
  60. [4:23 PM] olivinearc: and then yvonne's was the "go out of her way" thing
  61. [4:23 PM] Thirteenth: galatea?
  62. [4:23 PM] olivinearc: oh, seb's cat
  63. [4:23 PM] olivinearc: i didn't pick the name
  64. [4:23 PM] olivinearc: im tolerant of it
  65. [4:23 PM] olivinearc: bc apparently it's a super white star or wtvr
  66. [4:23 PM] Thirteenth: XD no i just wasn't sure who that was supposed to be
  67. [4:23 PM] olivinearc: and it's a black cat
  68. [4:23 PM] Thirteenth: irony
  69. [4:23 PM] Thirteenth: sounds like a wizard
  70. [4:23 PM] olivinearc: yep, di calls him a nerd
  71. [4:24 PM] olivinearc: re yv's 2nd week scene, which i hope isn't too redundant with the brunch thing in week one where di learns through the rival that yv canceled her plans with the other vamps to treat di specifically. but i think it's sort of like a reinforcement almost, bc di wouldn't know how big of a deal it really really is but then yv does it Again tm
  72. [4:26 PM] olivinearc: and forrest's week 2 is... hm. it's a little more harder to put bc it's directly related to di's ankle healing at any particular time in week 2, where in celebration he invites her to a party that he promises won't have vampires just decent booze bc she mentioned wanting another shot at it. and then it somehow leads to di inviting madi as well, although as to why would require something specific in madi's week 2 since her week 1 is the project thing, hence maybe the mobage thing. bc the party is where week 3's madi bitch callout happens
  73. [4:26 PM] olivinearc: if that makes sense
  74. [4:26 PM] olivinearc: sorry i know you're not part of this project but you're really good at it 8);;
  75. [4:27 PM] olivinearc: like i mean you don't have to just
  76. [4:27 PM] olivinearc: gestures
  77. [4:28 PM] Thirteenth: nah im just trying to put all the info together
  78. [4:28 PM] olivinearc: it's admittedly A Lot
  79. [4:28 PM] olivinearc: but hopefully in a good way instead of like. a cobbling of scenes together for the sake of it.
  80. [4:28 PM] olivinearc: oh also the Idea bc like
  81. [4:28 PM] olivinearc: from am arketing standpoint
  82. [4:28 PM] olivinearc: people come for vampire shit
  83. [4:29 PM] olivinearc: which means we could maybe use a bite as the sort of... di officially throws her hands up thing?
  84. [4:29 PM] olivinearc: this sort of "just bite me and get it over with god, don't bite some poor other girl, i'll be fine. there - see? pansy."
  85. [4:29 PM] olivinearc: like it's not this pure girl uwu thing out of the goodness out of her heart entirely but maybe if you tilt your head
  86. [4:54 PM] Thirteenth: oh possibly! i guess depends on where she's at with whoever the other person is, but yeah
  87. [4:54 PM] olivinearc: ye ye
  88. [4:54 PM] olivinearc: in terms of money it'd probably be like. one specific person. CG's pricey
  89. [4:54 PM] olivinearc: idk who tho hahah
  90. [4:54 PM] olivinearc: but yeah, just what i've been thinkin on the past couple days
  91. [5:01 PM] olivinearc: i feel like i was going somewhere and just
  92. [5:01 PM] olivinearc: blanked
  93. [5:01 PM] olivinearc: m-maybe questions
  94. [5:01 PM] olivinearc: or
  95. [5:01 PM] olivinearc: smth
  96. [5:04 PM] Thirteenth: i think it started with realizing di could get closer to madi since she's kinda stuck indoors because of her ankle plus the project?
  97. [5:04 PM] olivinearc: OH, RIGHT
  98. [5:04 PM] olivinearc: and by then it's week 2 and di is like.
  99. [5:04 PM] olivinearc: like idk i think i'm a pushover in some ways
  100. [5:05 PM] olivinearc: bc you know i hold nuzforum grudges but i mean even after a week i think di is just like
  101. [5:05 PM] olivinearc: like time heals the wound a fair amount
  102. [5:05 PM] olivinearc: but i hope people don't complain about that
  103. [5:05 PM] olivinearc: like by end of week 1 she's totally more bitched out about the ankle than the whole vamp thing, esp if hunter talks with her like "yeah just talk to me and i'll beat them up" on the 7th bc technically speaking what happened on the demo is a big n O PE
  104. [5:08 PM] Thirteenth: it's prob also a little easier to be angry about something normal than something super wtf
  105. [5:09 PM] olivinearc: this also comes to mind but i'm wondering if another event for madi week one is her just like
  106. [5:09 PM] olivinearc: coming back to the dorm after feeding and di catches her now
  107. [5:09 PM] olivinearc: and di might be like "how did i never catch this????" and madi might be like "well i usually stay the night over somewhere else but i forgot my phone and i have gacha to get to"
  108. [5:09 PM] olivinearc: and di is like just what the FUCK
  109. [5:10 PM] Thirteenth: a;skdnf;asdf
  110. [5:10 PM] Thirteenth: and i have gacha to get to....
  111. [5:10 PM] olivinearc: YEAH
  112. [5:10 PM] olivinearc: like on one hand i feel like it should be played not so silly on the first week but ALSO....
  113. [5:10 PM] olivinearc: something has to give
  114. [5:11 PM] olivinearc: some old outline scenes we had were like di and madi bonding over some asshole tripping the fire alarm at 4 am and stuff like that
  115. [5:11 PM] olivinearc: little gestures where di just like. kinda takes madi off her vampire intimidation pedestal
  116. [5:12 PM] olivinearc: but i think if we're careful we can add that nuance - that even though something silly goes down or she might get along with her literal roommate, she's still overall Not That Okay, Not Yet
  117. [5:13 PM] olivinearc: like it's kinda hard to say i think just bc
  118. [5:13 PM] olivinearc: tech speaking they did bend over backwards for di
  119. [5:14 PM] olivinearc: and having them apologize for them simply existing, especially when she doesn't know the lore...
  120. [5:16 PM] Thirteenth: nah keep it, it's funny and madi I'm sure doesn't see it as a super big deal so
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