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- 512301-1_6DYAb
- Aimi: We''ll be in trouble if we're late! --> extra apostrophe at the beginning
- 512302-1_6DYAb
- Tsubaki: Why don't we go somewhere the two of you@fwould rather go? --> remove the f in "fwould"
- 512305-2_6DYAb
- (line break suggestion)
- Masara: ...when we don't always perceive what we see or@hear.
- 512309-1_oSzyU
- (line break suggestion)
- Matsuri: I don't want to be told about it after everything is@over. (or if you want it to be similar to an earlier line in 7-2; Matsuri: I don't want to be told about it after@everything's over.)
- 512310-5_oSzyU
- (line break suggestion)
- ???: "I'll use my flower's bells to bring you everything you need@to feel happy."
- 512310-6_oSzyU
- (line break suggestion; basically move the 3rd line break from after "ideal" to after "in")
- ???: Let the aroma of the flower wash over you,@and kids from here and there will be brought in@to complete your ideal world!
- 512313-2_oSzyU
- Chisato: Alisa's been on edge the whole time.@It's been tough. --> Change Alisa to Arisa
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