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- LOCAA 11 - Adam and Ch...TTBD!
- All judgments by me will be out of 20 points, using the following categories.
- Danmaku Quality: 10/20
- Danmaku Quality encompasses the quality of the danmaku in your script. Good patterns will equal a good score in this category. Note that aesthetic factors can still factor into this - proper usage of sound effects and graphics can make an unfair pattern fair and make an otherwise-fair pattern unfair. Fairness is a pretty big factor here.
- Individual patterns will be rated out of 10, and the average of that will be taken.
- Creativity/Use of Perfect Possession: 7/20
- Since the Perfect Possession gimmick is central to this contest, how well you use it is a major part of your score. The more creative and the less forced it feels, the better.
- Aesthetics: 3/20
- This category encompasses how your entry looks (and sounds). While danmaku should come first, other elements like graphics and sounds are also an important part of the gameplay experience.
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- DANMAKU QUALITY
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- Nonspell 1: Good start. Pretty fun and utilizes Perfect Possession. 7.5/10.
- Spell 1: Pretty neat attack. Makes good use of Possession to stop time, it's fun and a reasonable difficulty. 8/10.
- Nonspell 2: It's fun and fair, and I personally like when Remilia fires those bats along with the other red bullets. I think this makes for a great nonspell. 8.5/10.
- Spell 2: I think it's an interesting (and good) decision to have Sakuya's knives not quite aim directly at you, instead aiming a bit above you. Besides that I think this spell is another fun, creative pattern. 8.5/10.
- Nonspell 3: These nonspells just keep getting better somehow. It's really impressive. I like this one as usual and thought that having both of them move from the sides of the screen was impressive. 9/10.
- Spell 3: Uses the barrier gimmick in an intuitive way, and the patterns that result are ones that I like. I don't quite like this as much as some of the other patterns, but it's still good. 8/10.
- Average Danmaku Quality: 8.25
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- CREATIVITY/PERFECT POSSESSION
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- The patterns quickly pick up in creativity, and they all make use of Perfect Possession in ways that don't feel forced. As such, I'll give you a perfect 7 in this category. 7/7
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- AESTHETICS
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- I think your usage of aesthetic factors is excellent. I especially liked the small touches where Remilia and Sakuya swapped while covered in bullets so you couldn't really see. 2.5/3.
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- OVERALL
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- 8.25 + 7 + 2.5 = 17.75/20
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