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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but theres just a couple things i wanna go over with you :p
- Your terrain is good, but theres not many levels to it, you you might want to add more. It also might be a good idea to smooth out your terrain just a smidgen, so that it looks a little neater!
- Your structures are good, and they have decent detailing to them and okay depth, though its something you can improve in the future! Also it might be a good idea to either add on to the smaller structures, or add more things around the plot to cancel out that empty space!
- Now your tree needs some work :p
- First off, having a tree that big may be doing more harm then good for your plot! Try to scale it down some do you can fit all the leafage in the plot, instead of having flat sides on your leaves. Also, it might be in your best interest so use a higher percentage of air in your brush so that it looks fluffier and more tree-like.
- I also see that your tree is cut off where the leaves start, and none of the branches are shown. To get around the brush destroying your tree, do [//mask air] before using the brush so it doesnt obscure the blocks around it!
- Also, add more smaller trees around the plot to fill the empty space.
- Good luck!
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